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Part 3 of chapter 15 for your reading pleasure.

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OathsEnjoyer

Great part again. One thing I’m wondering is if maybe when John screams for Amber to stop looting, whether it would be more in character/ in the story, for the oath to clamp down. It could of course still happen a fraction of a second to late, and it would also be an opportunity to let Amber know she did fuck up a little. But again, I’m loving the story and looking forward to see where it goes.

PC

Reading the Orcish cursing of the Witchdoktor, I thought they would say "Es tut mir leid", bu I guess if it *didn't* bother him then the Orcish as written would be correct... Great chapter, well written and witty as always.

RDJohnson

Good point. Orcish isn't my first language, so errors try to sneak in. I've corrected it in the new version.