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Ah, stage fright.  Still applicable, even when I’m literally the stage.  I don’t have it as bad as some people do.  There’s no panicking, no hyperventilating… even if I still had lungs.  Just the butterflies in the pit of my not-stomach as I watch the cathedral slowly fill.

“No last ditch plans to delay?” asks Teemo, my rat scions and Voice sitting on my core and acting like he’s not nervous, too.

Nah, that ship sailed a couple days ago.  I really do want to unveil my core, the nervous part is how many people are going to be here for it.  And a bit of nervousness about maybe everyone going catatonic for a few minutes with a vision, but we’ve done everything we can to prepare for that.

Teemo smiles and sprawls out on my core.  “I’m glad you’re getting this thing into a more permanent place, Boss.  The Secret Sanctum’s nice and all, but Aranya and them aren’t the only ones who have been wanting to set you down someplace cool.”

Oh yeah?  You and the other scions have been plotting behind my back?  Traitors!

Teemo snorts.  “Absolutely, Boss.  You’ve made a bunch of cool stuff for everyone else.  Don’t be surprised when they try to return the favor.

…if I said everyone doesn’t need to, does that make me a hypocrite?

“Maybe a little,” he answers with a smirk.  “When you try to lead by example, don’t be surprised when people start following.”

I grumble, but can’t be too upset, even with playing it up for a bit of fun.  I’m proud of you guys.  All the scions, all the followers.  It’s a lot to take in sometimes, a lot of expectations to live up to, but you guys are all worth it and so much more.

“Aw, you’re gonna make me blush, Boss,” Teemo tries to play it off, but he can’t hide the appreciation I feel through the bond.  I make sure the others can feel my appreciation for them, too.  I even tap a little into the divinity power to send my followers a bit of warm fuzzies, as well.

It clears the butterflies in a flash, and I think everyone in and around the cathedral can tell it’s time.  Let’s get the core moving, Teemo.

He stands and snaps off a salute before stepping into the shortcut, doing one last round of checks as we prepare for launch.  In the cathedral, Aranya smiles and stands from her seat in the front pew, and makes her way to the dais.

“It’s time.  I'm sure you all felt that from Lord Thedeim.  You don’t need me to tell you how pleased He is with our work, our effort to repay Him for all He’s done.”  She smirks as she looks toward my core, even with it still in the Secret Sanctum.  “It’s far more grandiose than He would have made for Himself, but if we don’t spoil Him, who will?”

Amusement echoes through the cathedral, and I’m again glad Aranya has managed to instill a sense of informality among everyone.  I definitely would not be coping as well if everyone was always smacking their foreheads against the floor for me.

“Still, if there’s a place for a bit of pomp and circumstance, this is it.  He can grin and bear it for a few minutes.  Slash, some music, please?”

My earth elemental unslings his guitar and checks the tune, acting like he doesn’t have something picked out for this.  He plays a few testing licks, building the atmosphere, before settling into the theme he’s chosen.  I would have probably saved it for Sue’s debut… which this will kinda be, come to think of it.

And Doppler’s as well.  Piano sounds soon accompany my earth elemental, Doppler and his poppers skittering out of a shortcut near Slash to play harmony to his melody, and I approve of the choice.  It gives a sense of grandeur without feeling all egotistical about it.  There’s murmurs of concern at first, with an unknown spawn appearing out of nowhere, but I wouldn’t exactly call this boss music, even if the music is pretty boss.  My other scions make their appearances along the walls, making good impressions with it.  Each brings their own flair, starting with Queen and her ant swarm dramatically flowing from shortcuts in one wall, alchemical fog billowing along the ground.  Thing follows next, the subtle engraving of enchantments through the cathedral glowing at his command.

The lights draw the eyes upward, where Coda and Poe each swoop in, each flying with clear precision in their own way.  Coda is perfectly calculated, his eyes and ears taking in everything with intellectual curiosity as my bat flies.  Poe is no less precise, the large raven showing regimented control and focus.  They each alight on the same beam, Coda hanging upside-down and Poe standing tall.

Poppy and Titania enter together in a burst of petals and vines, my living vine and pixie scions working together to fill the air with the scent of flowers and fresh dirt.  It makes the place feel more real, in my opinion.  Not just a pretty facade, but a place where things get done.  Fluffles slithers in through the foliage, soon spreading his wings and gliding to coil by Aranya’s side.  He sits with dignity, my Conduit ready and able to spend exactly what he needs to protect not only me, but everyone else, too.

Rocky’s entrance is understated as my zombie simply stands from a pew, but he commands attention with his mere presence.  There aren’t many zombies with boxing gloves on, let alone ones that can fight with a wide range of magic as easily as he fights with his fists.  He strides forward and stands on Aranya’s other side, looking over the congregation with a smile on his rotten face.  Grim slips out of a shortcut and sticks to the back, staying out of the way.  The very picture of the grim reaper is softened by the dirt stains on his robe, and the grass along his scythe blade.  He doesn’t draw the eye like Rocky does, my skeleton scion preferring to stay in the background, but his presence is still a gentle comfort.  Despite his appearance, he works very hard to ensure no delver falls here.

Honey and Goldilocks make similarly muted entrances, my bee and bear scions each content with ensuring things go smoothly, not worrying about becoming famous for it.  Leo exits a shortcut with a few wolves around him, looking every bit like the military mind he is.  All he needs are a few medals to jingle on his chest.  Jello makes her entrance not far from him, my slime cube burbling happily as she folds and shapes metals within herself.  If Leo isn’t careful, Jello might actually take my joke seriously and make him jingle everywhere.

Nova can’t help but make a dramatic appearance as she pools magma around herself, my magma wyrm scion soon shaping it into wonderful statuettes.  She may look like the most dangerous scion in the room, but she wouldn’t hurt a fly… unless it was an enemy scion.  Zorro’s entrance goes mostly unnoticed, just the way my fox scion likes it, but I’m not letting him avoid the spotlight forever.  Begrudgingly, he makes his way for the dias to sit beside Aranya, carefully observing everyone while looking like he’s hardly paying any attention.  A Spymaster needs to be subtle about it, right?  

Tiny’s appearance is under the crystalline floor, my gigantic spider pulling along my core with thick cables of silk.  He’s still my Guardian, after all, so I think he deserves a bit of recognition with being the one to carry my core.  And behind him comes Sue, the t-rex finally giving her first proper roar as the music swells, proclaiming that if anyone wants to harm anyone here, they’ll have to go through her, first.

Everyone is looking all over, hardly able to decide where to focus their attention.  While most of my scions are publicly known, this is probably the first time anyone has had a chance to see all of them, so there’s a lot of rubbernecking as people try to see everything all at once.

Their gazes eventually, inexorably, are drawn to my core, and I’m personally relieved to see most of the people having normal reactions, even if that’s often closing their eyes and offering a little prayer to me.  I spot the telltale signs of a few having visions, and Teemo is quick to ensure a few denizens are there to make sure they don’t fall over or anything.  The ones seated aren’t in any real danger, but I do have more than a few verdant skeletons needed to ease a few of the standing people to the floor while they ride out whatever they’re seeing.

I had been hoping the clear quartz floor might keep people from having visions at all, the refraction hopefully acting like a mirror to look at Medusa, though I don’t turn people to stone.  I’d say about five percent of the people here are having visions, which I think is pretty sustainable.  We’ll still need to keep denizens on standby, for new people and just in case people get more than one chance to look at my core and see something in its swirling orange depths.

Either way, the music fades and Aranya smiles at all those gathered.  “Welcome all, to Lord Thedeim’s Cathedral Sanctum.  Being public is a big Change for Him, and a lesson to us all.  To be secret is to be safer, perhaps, but it also risks missing out on so much.  A hidden lantern cannot shine as it should, but an open flame can bring disaster if not handled carefully.  Seek Change, seek improvement, be deliberate in those decisions just as you are willing to Change those decisions if it is needed.”

She turns her gaze to my core with a warm smile.  “Shine your light and guard your light.  It is a difficult balance, but when done correctly, it illuminates us all.”

Comments

CW

A grand entrance indeed! Looking forward to seeing the towns reactions to Doppler and our local Tyrant Queen Sue

Vorquel

Honestly an excellent choice.

13L00D13ANE

I feel like you could have a year of peeks just from this chapter alone

Noroh

Nice pick!

Juno Tubolino

Each entrance scene was absolutely fantastic, thank you for the chapter!

Zairl's Size Games

Thanks for the chapter! I wouldn't mind a small collection of random povs from the attendees!

blaze87b

I'm curious to find out what the visions the people saw were, if it's the same one or if they were different

Black Esper

Thanks for the chapter. It hits the right tune 😀

Black Esper

A typo? "You don’t need me to tell you how pleased His is with our work" should be: He is with our work.

Rick Delallata

His core might be the most secure thing on this planet. Failsafes and fallbacks galore

Virus Twilight

This makes me wonder does the Buypad dinosaurs Have Have Variations like carnivore And hervavor and et cetera

Khenal

ah, good catch. Fixed :)

Black Esper

There are Raptors or T-Rex for the carnivores, but there are Hypsilophodon and such as herbivores as well. Don't know about omnivores. 🦖🦕

Virus Twilight

I was thinking that they were probably Variance like The wasps and the bees

King of Kaiju

I want to see this animated! It's so good!

Ethan B.

TFTC!! Loving the epic entrances for all the Scions!

Art Dragon

Good to play all the hits. Man Thediem’s family has grown quite large hasn’t it?

Lina Boeckwurm

I'm getting warm and fuzzy and excited just reading all of this. So much love for all of the scions! I does feel weird to see all the scions gathered in one place, with no backup plan, but this moment more than deserves it. Good speech from Aranya too. This chapter is overflowing with love, and I love it!

Typhoonator

No idea how you do that Khenal, but you keep giving me moments of chills

Nouseva Valo

Hmm.. speaking about visions. Can MC deliberately trigger one with he's priest? Since he got connection to both reception of the vision and sources or medium off the vision. Maybe he can learn to direct them.

Worros

It strikes me that the sneak peeks might be leading up to something like this. I'm more inclined to think they will develop abilities associated with their own path and fate that call on Thediem for power. Our priest in the capital doing an inspection getting a vision of crumbling walls or fire.

Worros

This has me thinking about many possibilities. Violet getting visions and intuition on more complex concepts for development would be cool

Nouseva Valo

All this scions, make me think about that path off [making new Spawners] How about instead having Order placing it behind Lock and key. So Betrayal can't use it again. Instead gatekeep heck out off it. By recruitment to access it be: 1. Being dungeon Whit function core. -Fact that recruiting Order check up one first time use- 2. Having solved 7-10 [stang Mana Knots] allowing mana move again, in time frame off last century. 3. Doing ritual/festival off members to first dungeon say 3-5.years on round. -all which leave a mark location on systems records- Then to having better connection or vision pull off process of [creating new Spawners] have [optional bonuses fectures] inside dungeon borders. 1. Spawner that is special making mana flow on and next to they're arenas control more robust. 2. A Conetting and alliance with servants of the world a.k god or gods. In equal settings. -basic contract structure made by Order.. so he knows when it's active.- 3.taken actions or deed's that hindering the [First dungeons Killer] 4. Having join the [Hunters of Betrayal Club] 4. Having [Specialist narrow Spawner] inside they're borders. On that activation recruitment is a primer form MC making. A item that's is so stuffed on mana and fate energy that it cuts it installation cost near zero. Form it comes flyable mods that have pre set mission to go after mana knots: -stealth scout that's is able to act as secondary Skill base tank. And has natural ability to located and eliminate Mana Knots. - a support/organization Mob that makes Sure that spawner work better with ohter dungeons mod. While being Support magic casters, whit information gathering abilitys. A flying radio and radar system of sorts. -a warrior solider with solid ability work a elimination force and willingness to challenges Dragon's over dominance over sky's.

Nouseva Valo

Good point.. though maybe a Thediem church should have ritual off seeing/seeking vision once or twice the year. Since those visions are bound to have some effects how he's believer see him... Oh.. what if there's class of future reading out there? Star gazers or card/bone readers? Or better yet crystal reads? a god or goddess of future reading out there? What's if class or ohter gods follower come to Chappelle asking/demanding to use MC core as stool/item for divination readings?

Eriach

📖👌

Nomadtheus

I think he referenced those as the resource and magic specializations, while the raptors and T-Rex were the combat focused route.

MattUDFells

Tarl and Rezlar had two different visions. Considering what those visions were, I assume we will get chapters exploring the new ones

William Anderson

TYFTC!!!!! Well a perfectly well done, executed, and written reveal!

Ben Bass

TYFTC! Now that was a great way to move his core and to reveal all of the scions! I love how even in the middle of being moved by Tiny, he is still thinking of how to protect his followers and worshipers. While being the god of Change, he doesn't really change his base personality, which I think is a good thing.

Nomadtheus

Not to mention Sue and Tiny ready to take down anyone foolish enough to try anything.

Nouseva Valo

Maybe have specific mod on [Specialist narrow Spawner] each empower around by Thedeim godly aspects. Say. -[Change] for scout so he can [change he's state of matter] allowing them move trough solid objects and plants. -[Fate] for support/organization mage. So he knows when go and places he's spells. -[Gravity] to warrior so he can use it to redirect incoming projectile and enchanted he's own strikes. Maybe have them each have some supporting ability form MC ohter goodly aspects alongside body optimally build form they're task. Astartes of this world..

Jesse Lawson

Can't wait for Thedeim to get a Dino enclave for Dino people

Chuck Haeberle

Ok that's all nice and all but... WHAT DID SLASH PLAY!??!?!