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Ok, more detail than that, heh.  I jsut wanted to take a moment to thank everyone for their support, and to put up a fresh nudge for more peek suggestions.  It's been a while since the old one, so it's difficult to keep up to date with ideas and what you guys would like to get a look at.  I do plan to do more scion peeks, and wonder which ones you guys feel could use a bit more development, or whose heads you want to wander around inside a bit more.  Scion peeks aren't the only thing, though, as the latest peek showed.  So please let me know if there's anythign else you guys would like to get a look at!

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druidofthewolf

What are the dungeons in the other countries? Have there been other reincarnation in in to this world

deathwatcher

has there been any dungeon that tried enslaving and conquering and if so how as it dealt with given that the only way to kill a dungeon is to starve it, have a monster kill it, or another dungeon?

Douglas Lee

Ok, I know I have posted this question before, but I really am curious about language in your world. Thedeim just knows the language and starts 'speaking' to and through his voice, but the language was preexisting. All we know for sure about it is that it is a phonetic written language, not pictographiv, since the name 'thedeim' is able to be transliterated and rendered in the new language by the ODA. Did the dungeons come up with the language or did the denizens? Dungeons seem like they were the first things to emerge, so if voices are just an inherent part of the system, someone, possibly even before dungeons, had to come up with laws and language. Does that mean that the first voices had to teach language to the first dwellers? Sorry, I just nerd out about linguistics and etymology and stuff.

Travis Birdsong

Hey people just put down one name per comment then we can just like said comment so that we can know who we all want a peek for the most

Zachary Key

I would really like to hear from the Southwood so as to maybe glean a little information as to what they want besides just living unhindered. What is their goal with being a toy box such as they are? Do they have an "old soul" personality or do they simply not wish to interact with delvers?? Maybe an idea of as to what has been encroaching into their territory causing them to upgrade spawners and such. I loved the peek into hullbreak in this way, being shown the point of view from one of the merfolk. *I can never remember the generalized term for denizens that have been given sentience* and maybe add a small peek into violet just to see how their personality/mentality has grown under Thediem.

Zachary T Pruckowski

I'd like to see a few "random Delver" PoVs, just to flesh out what it's like for the customers of the Thedeim adventure park. And maybe how it varies from their expectations?

Navar44

A look at Neverrest’s first moments as a dungeon would be cool! Maybe even jumping forward gradually until it finds Thedeim.

Travis Birdsong

Peek suggestion: Angle who made him a dungeon(or whoever is in-charge of them)

Travis Birdsong

Peek suggestion: Neverist dungeon core(when it first finds Thediem)

Travis Birdsong

Peek suggestion: random dungeonering guild member reading a report about Thediem.

Zachary Key

This one would be more funny than informational or anything like that but would still be a great one for later on when the ideas are getting low again.

Steven Bartels

Peek Suggestion: Excerpt from some document discussing the whole "what the core looks like tells us stuff" thing Tarl mentioned.

Steven Bartels

Peek Suggestion: Yvonne tames a Tundra Wolf.

Travis Birdsong

My thoughts exactly. A good way to explain or introduce more adventurers coming to the dungeon or to introduce a higher lvl inspector that Elf guy has been asking for

HumbleBee

Dungeon core colors

JollyRodger

ODA people. How the guild works. Is done with magic scrolls copying over distance or do they use couriers? What information are they truly after? What do they know about the cores? what information do they hoard?

Bob

Tiny peeks are good

Andrew Karns

Peek suggestion: an eccentric dungeon reseacher reacting to The DM's info/ being sent to research(especially if (s)he is happily researching another dungeon)

Brad Johnston

Peek at thing?(has there been one?)

Robothaus

kinda want to wait on seeing Rhonda's perspective until after it becomes known about Rocky expanding affinities. Would be nice to know what Stavien has found out about the bottled lightning, though there might be more payoff if we waited until he saw some of the quarts stuff first.

JollyRodger

Yeah,... new guy shows up. Acts kinda like a jerk to elf guy. Gives him the whole "okay rookie" attitude. Then gets punked before he gets out of the yard by Poe or Tiny. Thinks he'd have better luck at the graveyard where rocky give him a beating. He ends up in a new healing jello to heal up. Ends up needing elf guy to bail him out in the end.

JollyRodger

On a unrelated topic. Thedeim could have some signs made with simple canned responses like yes, no, I don't know. For when teemo is unavailable to talk. Like the 2 weeks to travel to south woods. That way another scion, like fluffles, could fill in. That or maybe if violent gets a voice and becomes a vessel thedeim can communicate through them. Perhaps mushrooms is how you get orcs, like 40k. Just one scion talking is a weak link imo. He really needs a second one, in some fashion, at least. Poe, Tiny, or leo would be a good choice for a second talking scion. Poe and Tiny have probably leveled up the most and are probably due, or getting close, for ascending. Perhaps it's a option that hasn't come up yet. epic monsters are a thing apparently. A talking scion would be pretty epic.

Lee Smith

Thoughts from leo's old dungeon when they find out about Thediem subsuming Neverrest

Unboltednorm

suggestions: Thedeim's life before he became a core. More Freddy and Rhonda is always nice. There is also the random villagers. And finally you can always do one for other dungeons than just Thedeim and Violent it could flesh out why some dungeons go bad maybe?

jal leo

I have noticed that all of Thedeim's Scion seem to be quite smart for there race. Is that a Scion thing, or a Thedeim qurok that is trickling down the link.

Travis Birdsong

It would be pretty cool if Poe learns how to speak on his own. Considering how ravens are smart enough to understand human language and can kinda speak it like parrots it would not be impossible.

Travis Birdsong

I personally think it’s both a scion thing and a Thediem thing because of his Fate attribute allowing his scions to roll better stats on there creation. Now this is not to say other scions from other dungeon are not a smart or smarter then Thediem’s scions but as how we have only kinda meet 3.5 other scions (Hullbreak scion is the .5 cuz we know both that much about it) we do t really know much about the elk scion, the Lych scion was kinda killed pretty fast but considering it appeared to be a master enchanter I think it’s int stat was kinda high just to arrogant, and the skeleton scion went for the kill on a delver instead of tiny or temo because it knew that it can not permanently kill a scions with its death(tho this point could be argued the this was an order from Neverist and not the skeleton scion’s doing). So to sum up this cluster fudge it is a scion thing to be a better version of its race but Thediem’s fate attitude might be permanently buffing his scions stats

Raufgar

Here are some to put on the back-burner for when things are slow: 1) The first Mentor/Protégé 2) The first Master/Vassal 3) "What happens when 2 Dungeon Cores merge?" 4) The first traitor Dungeon core POV 5) A second Isekai'ed-via-Truck-kun POV aka how I heard an angel say "I met my quota!" 6) Rhonda's POV on Freddie

Argamenta

any thing for an early neverrest? were they murderous from day one or was there some event that kinda forced them into that role? they probably started with the wasps and may have stung someone who was deathly allergic?

Raufgar

Lemme add 1 more: 7) Thediem meets....Delta.

JollyRodger

Maybe I missed a chapter or a peek or something but who is delta?

Kindred

you did not... who in the world is Delta?

Kindred

idea: mechanics of the dungeon cores, how do they grow? what happens when a normal invader reaches it if it has plenty of Mana? what happens if Delvers decide to smash one to bits? that sort of stuffz

Folly Industries

bigger politics of the world might be interesting to peak into. yah don't need the pivot the story to that whole perspective but more about w"here here is" and who would care about a very clever dungeon. and who would care about others having a very clever dungeon

LadyTech440

Expand the universe you created... fill in more snippets from other dungeons / towns / races... people or places or events with minor tie-ins to our story, past or future.

Raufgar

Delta is...a Dungeon Core. She is also orange. Have a look at "There is no Epic Loot here, only Puns." I was suggesting a Webnovel collaboration 😉

Zairl's Size Games

Might be fun to tease the main guild reading reports from Elf Guy in peeks