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With the last day of August here is the latest chapter of Toxic Attraction, Chapter 45. Can't believe I'm putting out Chapter 45, feels like just yesterday I tenatively put out chapter 1 and didn't know what kind of reception it would get. Well, I love you all and glad you are along for this journey.

Now, this chapter had some....issues with patreon when I released the Insider chapter. I've tweaked things a little but I did not want to tone anything down. So doing something a little different, instead of putting the entire body of text here, I'm uploading it as a PDF for you to download.

I'll make a separate post with the text in the body of the post right after this. But this is my way of covering my bases to make sure you get to read it.

Anyways, I hope you enjoyed The Beach House story. Here's a couple updates on where things are at before you dive into the chapter:

Double Cross Chapter 3: released to Insiders. This will be a faster edit for me and will be out to all early September.

Neighborhood Encounters, Chapter 6: Around 85% done. Its coming soon.

Toxic Attraction 46: Outlined but not written. Will be writing in tandem with Neighboor Encouters to release in September.

Island Story and various others are in states of outline. Island story had issues on here given its nature.

Bitter Gift and Beach House? If you're interested in more, please let me know. Both were stories that kept rattling around my brain and the only way to cure that is to write them. I think they are pretty fun and I do have ideas on where the stories could go but they are behind Neighborhood and Toxic Attraction in priorty at the moment.

Anyways, lets get to Toxic Attraction, 46 shall we?

See attachement for the PDF. Check out the other post. Use this one to comment.

Comments

Mark

Yes both butter gift and beach house where very good and should be explored more

ProZack

Will you be posting this as once large book at some point or putting more up on Amazon? Would love to buy the whole thing in one file and support you!

Chescojoe

You mean Bitter Gift part 2? Yes

Mkm560

Would love another beach house chapter

James

NGL been thinking of Beach House and Bitter Gift a lot. Beach House could be a among my favourites given the particular dynamic between Ryan and Ricky

Chad Miller

Definitely a fan of Beach House, provided the sex gets changed up. It seemed like it was all in missionary. However, I think you have a very strong foundation for Ricky to basically take over Ryan and Taylor’s lives. Especially with how quickly Taylor fell under his spell, I can’t imagine she would so quickly go back to only Ryan. Ricky is also a master manipulator. Who knows? Maybe Ricky & Ryan’s parents are able to offload him and Ricky convinces Taylor to let him move into their home. I was also a fan of Bitter Gift but didn’t really care for the way he was so easily able to fuck his wife.

Autumn

It looks like Patreon deleted the text version with all those interesting comments after all, so I’ll write it here instead. I think we’ll see another sex scene between Sarah and Renee very soon. The pieces are just too conveniently arranged on the board: Dan is away, Renee is living at Sarah’s house, and Lester has unlimited access to it. This storyline seems much closer to unfolding than the pregnancy reveal (which takes time) or Trisha’s seduction (she’s simply in another city, and Don needs to figure out the logistics of her contact with Lester and Sarah). So I’d bet that in chapters 46–47, we’ll see a new stage in both women’s downfall in the form of consensual incest, albeit under intense pressure from Lester. I find it hard to imagine what else could fill these chapters.

Mkm560

Were due for a Marcus or TLG group appearance again soon I think also. Im still guessing he becomes Sarah sperms donor instead of Lester.

Mark

I’m going to have to agree with you that a Renee and Sarah is going to happen before anything else moves forward. I do think though that it’ll first be Renee Discovering Sarah and Lester together

Mark

I also have been thinking about both. I think it’s the non consent aspect. I would like that to continue in some form for at least another chapter or two.

Mark

I will say after reading the chapter again I really like how James gave Renee the boot. I will repeat that the Prego talk could toned down just a little. Not all the way but enough to open up room for Sarah to just confess her feelings for Lester and vice versa. I want james to get more video of his daughter so he can become a pig who sacks it to his own kid and who knows maybe some father on daughter incest down the line. I’m here for the ride

Myers

I don't know Mark someone has to save the kids. Dan is a total misfit with Sarah & Renee sluts for Lester. Sarah getting closer & closer to serious criminal activity maybe harming Tricia. Sarah may end up in jail. James only one left to prevent Lesters total destruction.

Myers

Good possibility Lester will use drugs on Sarah & Renee again and keep them supplied with wine & Liquid as he fucks them senseless.

DG

I agree that if Lester truly wants to keep René away from James, then he should send James videos of René’s sexual escapades

Eve St. Albert

Father daughter incest? I dunno. Lester is less and less inclined to share.

Eve St. Albert

I think this would be like an insanely large book - 5 million words or something. A regular book is 100,000 words.

Mark

I wouldn’t mind seeing it explored. Lester will not share her but I could see him sending more pictures of her to James along with photos of his wife. I could see down the road something happening with her dad to get back at her mother or better yet maybe James gets inappropriate and Sarah has to deny him. I would be shocked if James doesn’t get more images on his phone now that both ladies will be with Lester

ProZack

Yea but it would be great to have it all in one file or place.

Ken Cara

There’s no doubt Sarah is headed for a pregnancy, but she’s not quite there yet. Lester is psychologically driving her to desire being breed but just begging for it isn’t enough - she has to affirmatively do something to demonstrate that this is something she wants and therefore flushing her birth control pills must precede the actual conception. I doubt, however, that Lester is the one who eventually father’s the child. Someone else has to be the one to impregnate Sarah, someone worthy of humiliatingly cucking Lester. I believe in the end Dan must come out on top because how else can the welfare of the children be salvaged? Sarah is too far gone and is no longer capable of being a fit mother to her children, nor a wife to Dan. Lester’s going after Tricia, along with the incriminating stuff Dan will gleam from Lester’s computer will end up being Lester’s downfall. Don’t underestimate Tricia’s ability to aid Dan in fighting back. Once she realizes she’s being targeted, unlike the other characters, she has the technical resources to fight back. Team Dan (i.e., Dan along with Tricia and his new professional workmates at Sentinal) will prove to be a formidable match for Lester.

Autumn

I don't see the point in Lester putting more pressure on James by sending him photos of his wife or daughter. James isn't as easygoing as Dan; he's no fun to play with - he's hot-tempered and unpredictable. Besides, Lester has already gotten everything he needed from James - James essentially just handed his wife over to him without much of a fuss. But on the other hand, I can imagine a scene where James goes to visit Sarah and accidentally catches Lester fucking both of the most important women in his life.

Autumn

Fun fact: Lester managed to steal the wife of James, a tough, real man, after just a couple of dates, whereas he’s been forced to compete with that pathetic cuckold Dan for several months now

Myers

Lester will send James videos of Renee & Sarah its in his DNA. He gets off doing it. He will want to show James how dirty of a slut his wife and daughter are.

Mark

This. I don’t see how Lester won’t want to mess with James. Could it backfire on him? Absolutely. He will still do it and something tells me now that James is alone he might want to explore desires. If Lester sends him photos of Sarah’s naked body what man wouldn’t be aroused? Then eventually after James is already hooked on the mystery woman her face is revealed.

Myers

I disagree Mark I see James as more of an adversary to Lester. But not to reclaim Renee but to protect his granddaughters. I think James will reject both wife and daughter and Dan.

Myers

Once James see the big picture and to what level of corruption and degradation these women have sunk to and to how Dan allows this to continue in his home with girls present the court cases will begin. Lester will try to slow him down by throwing Renee under the bus at school but James won't care. This story is good to go for a while. I enjoy it. Lesters attempts to cock James will fail but he will still get lots of fucking the ladies are hooked and his cock rules.

Mkm560

Agree with this. If shes living there it will be hard to hide it. Especially since Lester wont want to.

Dallas87

There’s no way this keylogger works right? I mean shutting down usb/remote drives on a pc is cyber security 101, takes 5 minutes and requires no 3rd party tools. Most businesses don’t allow that. Let alone someone as paranoid and skilled as Lester. Dan sent his wife to distract Lester for no reason most likely or Lester is a moron.

drater

I have read chapter 45 up to the point where Sarah leaves the house to pick up her kids from school, but I do have a few observations. Chapter 44 left off with Lester fucking Renee and it felt like this would carry over into this chapter, so I thought it strange that this chapter started with Lester fucking Sarah Renee is a schoolteacher so why is she not teaching. When Sarah got dropped off at the house and went inside Dan had already taken the kids to school. So doesn't that mean that Renee should be teaching. Renee asks Sarah if she can stay at the house until she can figure things out and Sarah says yes then tells Renee she has to pick up the kids from school. I am pretty sure that Sarah hasn't said anything to her parents about being fired so why doesn't Renee question Sarah about being home and why doesn't Sarah question Renee about not being at school. If it is a school day it should be a workday. I just can't believe Lester would have set this up on a Sunday going into Monday unless he wanted to get Renee in trouble for not showing up for work In my mind chapter 44 should have taken place on a Friday or Saturday night then it would make more sense that both Renee and Sarah would not be at work because it would now be either Saturday or Sunday but then it doesn't make sense that the kids would be in school. Either I am missing something or this is something that got overlooked by Don

J

I’m still interested in Jesse’s involvement his love for Sarah is that puppy dog kind. But it’s also the kind that is loyal and defensive he may turn on Lester by cooperating with Dan maybe seeks out Sarah on his own or discovers the woman he screwed was Sarah’s mom and is disgusted by it in a weird moral moment of clarity. I think Lester’s gonna discover the key logger and figuire out it was Dan or blame cronos for it. Sarah- uhhg her dialogue has gotten pretty stale “breed me,breed me, breed me”. I don’t think the character has done a deep dive on the reality of it. she seemed to consider the “what if” possibility, nothing more. It be hotter if she considered the possibility of it being real and not sexy talk and standing over by the trash can with the pills deciding whether to go for it or not. maybe she over hears at a bar or by a friend or maybe by Lizzie who tells her that the pills aren’t real that they got switched. Just read thru ch22-45 I might be OD’ing on this story. I thought a shocking end to the mother daughter scene would have been mom wakes up in her room Sarah wakes up in hers they both clean up and get dressed and mirroring each others moves as they leave both exit their rooms at the same time and odd that woman is leaving the same time what a coincidence. … “oh shit Sarah!!” “Mom!!” Both hurl on the hotel room doors the just left. One final thought: I’m having a hard time with a time Line the events seem to blur together and I’m not sure if we’re days or weeks after Lester changed out the pills. Or the time between major events. I get that it’s maybe a story telling thing to keep us guessing and probably not important in the grand scheme.

J

I agree with most everything you say I’m still on the fence about Tricia she seems like another Lizzie candidate. And a good “ make Sarah jealous” foil. She screwed tou husband and now she’s screwing Lester what will she do to get Lester back(not Dan, Lester) I’m for Jesse back stabbing Lester and Dan and knocking up Sarah.

J

I think If James ever finds out Lester is behind it Lester’s life expectancy will take a serious nose dive.

J

I was expecting that Lester would position them in 69 while Jesse screwed the mom and Lester Sarah. But loved the blindfold twist. I like th subliminal seduction stuff. They talked very briefly(like one line) in one chapter about some mind control program (Lincoln group or Marcus) I’d be interested to see that used against Lester and on Sarah(as maybe a deprogramming hypno) to get her back to base.

J

I’m not sure I like the continuation of that subplot it’s only gonna make the main plot more messier and it’s a freaking shitstorm as is now . But I wouldn’t mind if Renee was dan’s substitute for Sarah when she’s abandoned him.

Mark

I agree that Sarah needs to stop just saying she wants to be breed during sex and just flush the pills. Much like finally revealing her feelings for Lester has to be done instead of the bread crumbs we get of them especially her having affection for each other. I don’t agree Lester won’t be the father. The story can progress much further if she indeed carries lesters child.

Mark

That’s the thing Lester can mess with James without him finding out who the male figure is. Maybe that’s how James gets caught up seeing more than he bargained for by going along to try and discover the identity of the man, while at the same time finding an attraction to the younger women in the videos that he never expects to end up being his daughter.

Ken Cara

I'm of the persuasion that Jesse impregnating Sarah makes more sense. He's the one who's in love with Sarah and Dan can't stand the guy. It would be an ultimate stick in the eye to Lester (who holds such low regard for him) to realize that after all his efforts... someone he regards as so beneath him bested him in claiming the ultimate prize. With regard to Lester - with every dirty trick this guy has pulled on absolutely everyone in the story…fate demands in the end that he fail in the paternity game and fall completely from his lofty perch. Dan, albeit he’s an impulsive idiot, at core is a good and decent man. He deserves to win in the end not by reclaiming Sarah (as she’s no longer worthy of being his wife and mother of his children) but rather by his rescuing his daughters from a dysfunctional home and finding happiness with Tricia. I predict that Mr. Silver will need three more chapters to wrap this delicious tale up and maybe our Xmas/New Year's Eve present will be the final chapter.

The Great Cornholio

Can't disagree more about Dan 'deserving to win'. I don't care what happens to him as long as it doesn't end particularly well.

The Great Cornholio

Beach House did nothing for me, tbh. Didn't care for the initial setup (bringing in a friend) and didn't care for how quickly she succumbed to the brother either. Just a whole cast I didn't much care for.

KB

I’m intrigued how far mom and daughter stuff will go