A new product? Or rival company (Patreon)

I drew this tomorrow when got free time

Tomorrow i might draw a sequence around this:

My phoenix flare on her anthro form want to fulfill a request of many explosive eggs soo will kick to the sky her eggs production and swell up but at the end result the truck where she was going its a trap truck!

Nownshe was heading to the enemy base

In the last panel number 4 she will angrily hit her belly in protest. 3 all will rumble andnglow, 2 explosion, 1 she's fine and health walking to allies with a map of enemy future strategies

How sound a sequence of that?