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There were several changes made to this page, for comedic timing and space purposes. Emma's first line of dialogue was removed for space reasons, and two panels were added. One was an establishing shot, with a nice little touch of rain by Mel, to further underscore Carmen's bad luck. A silent panel was added after Carmen's accident, to add a pause for comedic effect. A "help me" line was also added in the final panel, which makes it funnier.

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