Demon Deals [Page 20 WIP] (Patreon)

Evee's getting quite good at dealing, but not necessarily fixing, the consequences of her actions.

These are getting a bit easier to do, as I slowly eliminate lines of thinking that I don't need - things like how the line should look or color zone. I just know what I'm going to do.The biggest thing I keep fiddling with is the dialogue and story. I know the present/past tense of the narration is just fucked up in earlier pages, but I'll go fix that later. The narration is her present self thinking back, with her inner thoughts being represented by thought bubbles. Didn't quite get that decided until this batch of pages!

But juggling Evee's tone in both the present and past is a challenge. I thought I had everything written well enough, but that was the work of MOJO 6 months ago - now, it can be tweaked and rewritten to better show the story I want to sell, in-between panels of pregnant sex.