Pound For Pound: Part 8 (New Conclusion) (Patreon)

I mentioned in my post last week I was interested in writing a new conclusion for this story based upon feedback I received on DA.  So that's what I've done.  Overall I think it is a solid chapter, hopefully it is what people wanted from this story!  Feedback is welcome.  I might make some more edits to this chapter this month before posting it on DA next month.

This chapter is 4,500 words, so I'll consider this my post for this new week.  I think Sundays might be a good day for me to post my content.  Do people think I should try sticking to weekly posts on Sundays?