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Here is an update on part 9's progress.  It is at about 5,000 words.  Just a reminder, content in drafts is subject to change.  I have not sent this to piengoo yet for feedback, so a lot is subject to change here.

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Sam the BT

About 30 weeks left in the year. 10 pounds every 3 weeks would be quite transformative. Luckily for Heidi she doesn't need to worry about that pace increasing right?

polarisdreamer

To be fair to Heidi she did just stuff herself with breakfast prior to being weighed, but... Yeah, she's married, what does she have to worry about?

Ringhio8

Just out of curiosity: What is normally content that changes? Have you an example from previous chapters? And also love the story and can‘t wait for an Update! 😊😊

polarisdreamer

Umm, sometime a scene is cut from the story and replaced with a different one, or dialogue/descriptions are adjusted. I don't have any recent examples, my apologies! Yeah, I've had a busy July, I need to get another update of 'Fed Up' out this month