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The Waterpark: Part 7 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-07-21 21:26:27
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2026-06
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Content

4,400 words in this part of the story, this obviously boosts this week well above 4,000 words.  Enjoy!  Feedback as always is much appreciated.

Comments

Rune Ebsen

Only suggestion for improvement, is since the guy has gained what over 30 pounds. He must be getting fairly flabby. And i do not feel like i have gotten that impression yet.

Apple Juice

You took one of my favorite moments from the original and made it ten times better! Thank you Polaris, I always enjoy your work and am excited for what comes next!