Fed Up: Part 9 DRAFT Update (Patreon)

Okay, so I added a little over 3,000 more words to the draft and made some smaller edits to the first part of the chapter.  This time to help out readers, I highlighted the first part of the PDF in green and the second part in yellow.  The part in Green is what was posted last time out.  The stuff in Yellow is all new, and probably requires more edits.

Since I did not hit 4,000 words in this post, I'll update this story again later this week, possibly finishing the chapter depending on what piengoo thinks of it.