Fed Up: Part 9 (Complete) (Patreon)

Attached is the edited version of part 9 with piengoo's blessing. Just so you know, I'm not counting this toward this weeks word count.  I didn't add more scenes to the last draft of this chapter.  Piengoo and I agreed that ending the chapter with the Summer scene was better than the other scenes I worked on, but no worries.  Those other scenes are still good, and we will probably incorporate them into a later chapter with some edits to make them flow properly.  So, sorry this chapter did not get extended, but I'll be sure to post 4,000 words this week of the next chapter of Fed Up.  I'm going to try to make that post Wednesday or Thursday.