The Fat Girlfriend Trap: Chapter 3 (Draft 2) (Patreon)

Okay, so I've made some edits throughout to fix a continuity error.  The mistake screwed up a scene I wrote with Michael and his family so I made some changes, and now it's just a scene with Michael and Kelly.  I've scrapped the stuff with Michael's parents, in retrospect it didn't feel necessary anyway.  The original draft was just under 3,500 words, and this one is now closer to 4,700.  So a little over a 1,000 word update.

I understand this isn't enough to meet my 4,000 week goal, so I'll keep writing tomorrow.  Should be no problem since I'm off from work.  Today was a bit busier than I thought, hence the small wordcount for this update, but having said all that, I think this chapter is shaping up to be a good one!

Let me know what you think!

Have a good night!