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Okay, so I've edited and ultimately added about 1000 words to this new version of 'The Curse of the Scale'.  This new ending was strongly inspired by feedback I got on the first version, I'd love to know if you think this one-off has been improved now.

Happy New Year everyone!  Thanks for all the support!


I know this week I'm about 500 words shy of my goal, so next week I'll do 4,500 words or more to make up for it.

Sincerely,

Polaris

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BlommStarr

As someone that gave feedback on the first version, this end is definitely an improvement. The closure here is pretty satisfying, and the re-branding of the sorority at the end was hot. Nice re-write!