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Between edits to the previously published bits and the new stuff this one is about 3,000 words so I'll post some more later this week.  This draft just lacks an epilogue scene really.  Almost done!  Let me know how you like this one and how you want it to end!

I hope everyone is having a relaxing night!

-Polaris

Comments

jojoabc123

I liked this one off. Short and sweet is a refreshing thing to read every now and then. The weight swap genre is one of my favorites and you do it so well. I would have liked to see a scene when she first outgrew the first chef jacket but that's only minor.

Rune Ebsen

Liked the story as Well, nice easy read if you should add a part, my suggestion would be like one part where both cousin are at a similar weight and sierra is in denial about it

Sam the BT

Seems like Sierra needs to outsource her taste testing to a certain short cousin who is far too confident.

richman92

A family reunion would be a fitting ending. Of course with teasing from relatives

Thighmaster

sierra could embrace being a well-trusted fat chef and lean into enjoying the opportunity to cook and eat to her heart's content...and find a boyfriend who loves her being a butterball :-)