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The chapter's finally done!  Except perhaps for some minor edits.  New content starts on page 18 and is marked.  I also added some new descriptions in the first half of the chapter which are not marked.  All in all this is about a 3,400 word update.  A little shy of 4,000 I'll post something else Wednesday.

I hope you enjoy!

Feedback is appreciated!

Have a great one!

-Polaris 

Comments

Rune Ebsen

Nice chapter, seems like the story has come full circle. Kinda like you made one that did not end up in the girl becoming 400 pounds, but a good solid weight gain, with an almost natural ending considering the personallity not liking being fat.

EloquentTiger

I'm guessing Heidi is going to have a hard time losing weight...Excellent.