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So this is the full draft of chapter 4 of TFGT.  Wasn't much I needed to do to finish this one off.  Was struggling to find the right words in places, but I think the ending is solid for the chapter overall.  One more chapter left of TFGT, before I move on to focusing on MJY Volume 2 more consistently.  

I made some minor edits and updates in places, but the major stuff is marked toward the end of page 19 and goes until the end of the chapter.

This update amounts to a bit over 1,000 words.  So not a major one, but it gets the ball rolling.  I'll try to keep the word counts coming to make up for the lack of anything posted on Easter.

Comments

Clubin

happy day

Clubin

This story is so, so unbelievably hot

BlommStarr

Pretty unique set up and then turn at the end of this chapter. Can’t say I’ve read a story where a character gets into ‘this’ via an existing praise kink. Felt very organic and believable. Well done!

polarisdreamer

Me either! That was what led me to pursuing this project with berserker over my draft of 'Piece of Cake'. This one feels pretty original in that way.