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Felt like this update (about 4,000 words thank the lord) took me forever to write, but I think it's solid.  I need to give it another read through and fix some typos, but I'm a bit too tired at the moment and I've got a long day ahead of me tomorrow.  I'll polish this one more later in the week.  Also, this isn't the end of the chapter, I've another scene planned for this one, probably another 3000-4000 words until it's complete.

Thanks for the support!  Have a great night!

*Forgot to mention the bulk of the new content is marked as starting on page 7 and goes until the top of page 15

-Polaris

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BlommStarr

Uh oh.. I think Heidi may have found motivation to get punished again. Spite has been a consistent theme in this story, and you found yet another way to evolve it. Nicely written.

Anonymous

This is just masterful! Astonishing to see all the girls porked up nicely, wasn’t expecting that at this scale (pun intended). And the turn of events in that last scene makes perfect sense with both main characters development throughout the story. Howrver, I’m really curious about what Gretchen has been up to. I sense something is coming related with her