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Fed Up: Part 14 (Unfinished Draft) (Patreon)

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2023-08-20 23:30:45
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This is about a 3,000 word update and it is needing some more editing and description/refinement in certain places, but I've run out of time to work today so I hope you enjoy what I managed to write regardless.

Next week, as you've voted, you'll get more Fed up!  Hopefully with any luck I'll be able to get a full draft of this chapter out, we'll see.

Have a great night, and enjoy.

-Polaris

Comments

BlommStarr

This update slaps. Hedi is one of the most interesting protagonists you've written, and possibly one of my favorites. The inner conflict she's feeling about her weight and the changing relationship dynamics with her husband feel so realistic. Fantastic writing.

Anonymous

Wow, never would’ve thought things would get so out of hand for Heidi. I’m feeling a mixture of emotions reading this first draft; some kind of pity for her and her inner conflict regarding her weight, but it’s also so freaking hot Heidi has come to this point from her fit and toned days. Always super excited to see how this continues to develop, and thank you for this :)