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So, many of my patrons who read the original ending (including my collaborator berserker1133) said it was good, but left something to be desired.  I've rewritten this chapter and added roughly 2,500 words (as well as edited/deleted some sections).  I think the ending is much more satisfying now and not rushed like the original.  I hope you enjoy!

TFGT is officially done again!

I'll work this week on an update for Fed Up or Mia's Junior Year since I didn't hit my full weekly wordcount in this rewrite.

Have a great day!

-Polaris

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Rune Ebsen

I like this version a lot more great job. Especially on the last scene. Looking forward to another Mia update this week😂

polarisdreamer

That's great to hear! I think it turned out a lot better after the rewrite. We'll see what I get to! Could be Mia, could be Fed Up