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Long delay this month from being sick, but I'm back up to steam now. As you guys voted last month, I'm putting up a one shot story involving traditional hypnosis. I love writing the longer series, but I am hoping to do more short stories as well, as it lets me be a lot more creative. I hope you guys enjoy, and as always feel free to comment below!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/4pf63cysps90djg/Making%20the%20Perfect%20Girlfriend.pdf?dl=0

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Dorian Alton

Enjoyable, as I do quite like a story with the tables being turned on an ill-prepared controller, and I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Everything seemed to happen a bit too fast for my taste, but since you're trying out shorter stories, I didn't really mind.

Devi Lacroix

This is exactly my kind of story: unexpected consequences, a little dubcon that ends up working absolutely perfect, and a mutual happy ending.