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Now here's a commission I wrote based on the animated show RWBY. Like the other story, you don't need to know anything about the show to follow what happens. All you need to know is that the reserved Weiss has perverted fantasies about her bubbly roommate, Ruby, and when she discovers that Ruby talks in her sleep she sees the chance to make Ruby eager to help her with anything she asks...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/gbepvgnt6tfvdol/Rwby%20commission.pdf?dl=0

Hope you enjoy, and feel free to comment below if you'd like

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Ian Graham

Havent even clicked the link yet, but i adore you for writing this!

John

Damn!! OK, Sammy.... just relax! you are one hell of a writer!! I don't know the show, even had to look up the characters on line. They are hot.. I like ruby and Blake myself. I know this is a commission, and I assume the "client / fan is pleased with the result? I know I would be... anyway, I wouldn't say no to more of this one...a chapter or three? Makes me look forward to a commission of my own some day!!! Definitely keep up great work, Their loss is our happy return....

Mesmera Inc (edited)

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2026-10-01 06:00 I second this. Definitely call out for an expansion. I admit I had to look it up as well but ended up watching a half dozen episodes.
2018-08-01 21:00

Masterdramon

I'm the "client" in question, and I did indeed enjoy it tremendously! Very much worth the cost. Funnily enough though, my original request actually had the dom/sub switched (there was a mix-up in the communication, LOL), so there's a forthcoming piece that's got the situation reversed once Sammy has a chance to catch up a bit. But even if it wasn't EXACTLY what I asked for initially, I'm still super-glad I got to bring this one into the world. Still, looking forward mightily to paying for the follow-up! :D

Masterdramon

LOL, that's one hell of a way to get into a show! The scenario's actually based on a comedy skit in the self-parody side series "RWBY Chibi," where the hypnosis was played for laughs but got my fetishes running haaaaaaard (in part because Ruby/Weiss is a major OTP for me).

John

so Ruby was supposed to be the dom? Maybe, but for me, I like Blake, personally. But, your story, I'm just reading it....LOL.

John

Definitely, more chapters please........

Masterdramon

Ha ha, I don't want to spoil too much in case Sammy winds up posting that one as well at some point. But the initial proposal was essentially Ruby sleep-hypnotizing Weiss into hanging out all the time and being closer (which is what happens in the original short I mentioned in another comment thread)...and being too naive to realize how Weiss' repressed dirty subconscious will misinterpret those suggestions. Hypnotists not realizing how deeply they’re programming a subject, or that they’re programming them at all, is a maaaaaaaajor fetish o' mine.

Masterdramon

LOL, yup. While Ruby/Weiss and Blake/Yang are my "serious" pairings (to the degree I take any shipping seriously), I'll gladly take those lovely gals in any combination in my smut! :D

John

right, ok. It would probably be interesting to have two versions of the same story being played out at the same time, but this version with Weiss in control works for me......we are all different (thank God) for me it is that moment when girl A breaks and surrenders herself to girl B, becoming absolutely obedient and utterly enslaved. When one girl (I prefer all girl lesbian stories too, ). Completely owns the other and they both know it!! When girl A knows what is happening to her and doesn't want to b enslaved, but she just can't resist...... can't stop it from happening..... I LLOOOOOOOOOOOVVVEEE it!!!!

Ian Graham

please make a follow up!

Ariamaki

As a relatively new fan of yours (hence this very backdated comment) but a longtime fan of this show, I'd LOVE to see a follow-up to this. I guess I know what I'm picking if I get a hit on the raffle or grab a comm myself. :V

Ian Graham

Any chance of a new chapter any time soon?