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09/08/2016: Falling for her Tits Chapter 13 (Patreon)

Published:
2016-09-08 23:13:03
Edited:
2016-12-23 19:26:12
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2026-06
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/j1x4t7t7sho3tbc/falling%20chapter%2013.pdf

And we're back. I've officially quit my job and I'll be taking some time off in order to focus on writing and my personal life. Hopefully that means I can get a lot of writing done in the meantime. This weeks main story is Chapter 13 of Falling for her Tits, in which we get to see the return of Amy's hypnotized girlfriend Diana. I realized in going back over the previous chapters that I've called her by the names Diana, Dianna and Dianne, but now I've gone back to edit them all into the original name, so I hope there's no confusion there.

As for the bonus story that will be about two mind controlling hypnotists who both end up after the same beautiful girl and fight to brainwash the other one. I tried to put in plenty of the fun writing all of you enjoy so I hope all of the $5+ patrons will have a blast reading it.

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Anonymous Coward

Hurray! Go Amy! That's what they call "zero-day vulnerability" :) Thanks Samantha :)

Anonymous Coward

So now Amy can hypnotize Diana so that Diana will hypnotize Amy to remove Cathy's suggestions?

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

Ooooh, the plot thickens. (How close to a climax are we? Two chapters left, thirty-seven chapters left?)

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

I suppose it's technically possible; I think she's more likely just to hypnotize her to distract Cathy at the critical moment.

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

Although also - this puts Lydia's whole skirt think in a much darker light. :( Amy really is a self-centred bitch, isn't she? :(

sammynona

This is getting close to what I'm considering about 2/3rds of what I have planned. I still have to plot out the fun for the last few chapters but I think there's about 10 or so chapters left to go. Though that may change of course, since Brooke's part was only supposed to be 2 chapters but I had a blast playing with her.

sammynona

As for Lydia, Amy certainly is self centered in wanting to make Lydia wear short skirts for her to enjoy, but Lydia does get some fun out of it herself as well. If anything Amy's problem was not considering the other ways it would impact Lydia's life, like her parents constantly grounding her for wearing such revealing clothing. Hopefully now that Amy's developing a conscience she'll consider things like that if she keeps choosing to play with people.

sammynona

I'll be honest I planned out the big confrontation with like 5 different outcomes, but I think I settled for something everyone will enjoy haha But you'll have to wait until I manage to write it all down

sammynona

Thank you! I can already say I have a lot less stress in my life which is good. I'm still trying to work out a new writing schedule and someplace where I can sit and write everyday. Hopefully if I get enough money from the increased writing output I'll be able to afford a new place where writing will be a lot easier. Until then I'm stuck at the library where idiot teens make out behind the book racks while I'm trying to write erotica XD

Anonymous Coward

Can we speculate while waiting? :) The whole story is about redeeming Amy, so most probably she'll end up balanced, if not completely good (what fun is to have unlimited hypnotic powers if you're not kinky? :) ). I root for Amy becoming a benevolent tyrant, regaining her abilities fully, presiding over her slave-friends, who'll be enjoying their status and, possibly, having limited, restricted, controlled access to Amy's powers...

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

Whatever happens, Cathy needs to be punished. She's a subby masochist, she can't just go on being in charge the *whole* time. ;)

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

It's so much more annoying and awful when they're real high-shcoolers and not fantasy ones. :P XD

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

Well, yeah, but also immediately throwing her over for Diana and leaving her as just "the one with the nice ass". Bit harsh. But, I suppose, high-schooler mad with power. And we can only hope. ;P