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Now that the tables have been turned I'm sure you're all curious about what Amy has in plan for revenge. Enjoy the latest chapter everyone, I know you've been looking forward to it for a while now haha

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Majere

If I'm being completely honest I have to admit that my interest in this story kinda plummeted once Cathy lost control.

M H

I only sort of agree. I'm actually fine with Cathy losing control for a awhile, the push and pull between them is quite enjoyable. I would however, be a bit of a letdown if the resolution of the story merely ends with Amy still in full control and slightly nicer while Cathy is just a happy slave.

Feehan1999

I tend to agree. I hope we are only setting Amy up for another fall into slavery and the humiliation she experienced previously.

Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six

There's definitely going to be another twist - otherwise this would have ended a chapter ago, clearly. :P That said I'm very curious where this is going. I _do_ have a sneaking suspicion Eva is going to get permission to wear normal clothes again, just out of Cathy's line of sight.

ktc

It's hard to describe exactly why but I had the same thing happen to me. I honestly just wanted them to all make money off the webcam shows and live happily ever after.

sammynona

I'm glad to see you're all so invested in the series to be discussing it like this, and you see what's always been the hardest part of the story for me is deciding just who'll come out on top. I've got the ending in mind that should satisfy most folks, with plenty of fun left to happen. And if you're left wishing you'd gotten your ending you can always commission it or hope you win the free commission raffle XD Hope you all enjoy the chapters to come :)

ktc

I'm just a sucker for happy /cheesy romance endings. Imo Amy needs to tone down her bitchiness but that doesn't mean Cathy has to be "on top" in the relationship. That said I look forward to your conclusion :-).

larqven

Great stuff! I really liked the interactions of Eva, Amy and Cathy in the restroom.