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I'm happy to bring you chapter 5 of Donna's Trance Trigger, where Billy makes a big decision that'll affect his and Diana's lives forever. Originally I wasn't sure how many people would be interested in this idea, so I outlined it to a 5 chapter series that could deliver a happy ending for our couple but leave the door open to writing more of their misadventures exploring Donna's trance trigger and who else might be affected.

So I have been totally blown away by how popular this series quickly became. It's brought in a ton of new patrons willing to support me to get the next chapter early and inspired a load of comments from all of you. Which means I've got the message loud and clear and I'll start working on the next chapter right away.

My plan for where this series could go explores more domination and kinky fun, the search for other conditioned women with Donna's trigger, more exhibition and humiliation thrills, and some tables being turned that lead to dire consequences for our lead couple. So if you want to imagine Diana and Billy having a happy ever after with no drama then this can work as a nice little save point. But if you want to see the stakes raised as Billy's greed puts him and Diana under the control of someone else in the search for more Donnas, then be sure to let me know in the comments below.

So enjoy chapter 5 and look forward to where the series could go from here!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/133v6y0nnv53jd7/DTT%20chapter%205.pdf?dl=0

Comments

Be_Be

The oblivious feature is so much fun to see creatively implemented like this. I hope we continue seeing it used in more chapters of this storyline. 👍👍🔥🔥

norstorm

Really enjoyed the story. Just subscribed to get the newest 2 chapters right away. This is a matter of personal taste, but I was hoping the explanation for her trigger would be something like her just watching that scene over and over again and hypnotizing herself, or maybe just fantasizing so much about it, she convinced herself to go into trance in that moment when she heard the trigger phrase she had fantasized about. From this post and chapter 5 it sounds like it's a foregone conclusion that there is someone else or some kind of organization responsible for this. That kind of trope usually isn't my cup of tea, as it makes the individual relationship feel less special. But I've been convinced by that kind of story before and will definitely stay subscribed for a while to see where this goes. I'm particularly looking forward how his friend Sophie with a crush on him will figure into the future of the plot.

Jeremy

I'm one of the folks who joined membership for this story. What I especially appreciate about it is that, while the characters can be a little clueless and end up dealing with the consequences of that, they both want to be here and doing what they're doing. (And with an interesting fictional character / real person dualism as well!) Honestly I'd be happy with things continuing that way, with them having fun, making some messes and cleaning them up. If I wanted to see characters putting themselves at risk by getting too greedy and raising the stakes, well, that's a pattern that's available in a lot of places. Of course, your story, your rules - but I think I'd be a lot less inclined to stick with the series in that case. Thanks for the chapters so far!

sammynona

I may have been hyping up the drama a bit, but don't worry I'm not one for shadowy organizations in this case. In a sense I'm thinking of this story going in a similar way to Slaves to the Snake Goddess, where its more about their personal exploration of the control and their experiences and emotions driving the plot. So more about how these particular characters react to the situation they find themselves in and what they choose to do with it. We'll see if I can manage to pull it off but I'll say you're on the right track with your theory about the trigger and how it works. It's just also fun to have the fantasy element heightening that too!

sammynona

I'm really glad you've enjoyed the story so far, and its been a blast writing Billy and Diana as two people with similar kinks ending up in this impossible situation where it's real. The original idea for this series was the longer one with more girls involved and drama of tables being turned and such, but I decided to go for this smaller, more personal start instead and I'm really proud with how it came out. I definitely want to keep that element to it, because its something that I and I think a lot of my readers can relate to. I'm just also a fan of mind games, trying to outwit your rivals and solving the puzzle of the situation they find themselves in. I hope you enjoy the coming chapters even with the added drama, but if nothing else the first five chapters can make a satisfying story on their own too. Thank you for adding your thoughts!

masterfokus

I just joined for this series and I love it, I hope there are many more chapters about this.

Clement

Really liked this serie and this chapter, it was a blast to read! [Do not read further if you have not read the story] The internal struggle from Billy was really nice to follow, I was really concerned that he would not wake up Diana :). But seeing how instead he just reaffirm his relationship was so great! And the mistery about how did Diana get his triger is really intriguing, looking forward the next episodes. I do not have any preference about how the story should go, I am sure it will be great either way. Thanks again for this story!