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The one where Felix says bad words.

I never wanted to make this comic too dark. So I hope the hand isn't too much. Or shows that he's actually hurt without a lot of blood. But I probably should add some more. I don't know. I'm torn. Like Felix's hand.

I hope this page reads well. It ended up completely different from what I planned. Seems to be a trend lately.

EDIT: added more blood

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Feign

With the rain, river and wind present the way the wound might look oddly clean possibly?

Ralend

Well... honestly, if you show a little blood, its not really gory. That looks more like rope burn than anything. Maybe a compromise? Draw at least one reddish streak of blood, something noticeable but not too distracting, maybe sliding down a small trail from the joint of his thumb, to his wrist, dripping to the water. It would be classy, without being too gory, but getting the point across that he's actually wounded than just have a bad rope burn

Ari

yeah i was afraid of that. ill have to add a little bit more. i dont know how picky tapas is about their mature rating but judging by the other stuff they let slide on their site that should be fine at least.

Ari

thats true but ive also had issues with people reading things the wrong way because of things i did like that. so i might have to overdo it just to get the point across.