Chapter 5 Page 21 EDIT (Patreon)
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"Felix, it's been a long day. We almost died. Can I get some sleep?"
"Shut up. I'm trying to flirt here."
EDIT: I should probably explain why I decided to change this page after the fact. At the time I drew it I was getting a bit frustrated with the pace of the comic. I went through and haphazardly started compressing some bits and pieces and just kinda left it as is. When the time came to letter it I wasn't too happy with what I had but it seemed to work well enough.
But after posting, it kept nagging at me so much that I had to go back in and tweak it a bit. The original I feel was a bit too out of character, especially for Felix, and the flow from previous pages was kinda thrown off. (Felix being excited at the chance to share his hobby vs. just forcing Mack to come play with him) I've tweaked what I had the best I could to make it flow a lot more naturally while still keeping the spirit of it without having to redraw the whole page. Throwing a bunch more word balloons onto a page isn't the most elegant solution but I feel like it's a better page than the previous. I hope everybody agrees.
Sorry for the weirdness. I should've waited til I had a page I was actually happy with. And don't worry I definitely won't be making a habit out of this. I'll leave the original up just for posterity.