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Dear patrons,

When I was working on Captive of the Orcs, I got lots of critics due to mistakes in the text.

I'd like to get your feedback about dialogues and about font size (if I should make it larger). 

Thank you!

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leave2gether

I don't know why, but I love this simple coloring for characters

Gene Cahill

I like it a lot; no changes needed IMHO!

Anonymous

The text size is OK on my iPad, but I would find it hard to read on anything with a smaller screen. And the mid red text on grey bubbles will be harder for some people to read.

Anonymous

A few copy suggestions from a British English speaker.

Anonymous

... an MMA fighter? Fighting is not for you. My DFC debut is next week. A DFC fight! Are you nuts!?

Anonymous

On the second panel OK or Okay.

R_Gre

The font size is fine.

rino99

Font color and bubbles are red only for VIP, the final variant will be white.