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Memory Transcription Subject: Tassi, Bissem Alien Liaison

Date [standardized human time]: August 11, 2160

Pulling General Naltor aside hadn’t presented too much of a challenge; the Selmer had been awaiting my return to the SC corridors, while keeping a close eye on the budding Sivkit settlements on our homeworld. While Lassmin had signed off on the plan as a way to ingratiate ourselves to the galaxy, the Grand Herd had a reputation for being destructive. I could see why they’d constitute a security threat to our military, but from my vantage point, the fluffballs mostly wanted to mind their own business. If the humans could gain control over Tinsas, I imagined the Sivkits would be happy to move off of our abandoned continent and back to their homeworld. With how the arctic Bissem was stewing, after what Dustin just disclosed to him, I wasn’t sure whether he’d pull me off of that detail.

I was making tangible progress with Loxsel; he was starting to warm up to me, and perhaps Bissems by extension. We could have friendly relations, existing side-by-side. It’s a good thing our public is being kept away from the herd for now, since it’s strange for us all to have aliens on our planet.

Naltor’s eyes narrowed with suspicion and outrage. “Tassi, why the fuck would you even consider selling out your own people? It’s that important to you to be friends with aliens that’ll use you, and banish you? So much for humans being peaceful—or fucking different from our own conquerors. It’s exactly as I feared, with not much we can do to lift a flipper against you; yes, you half-feathered nerd!”

“Tassi is a scientist, and this is her one dream: she was manipulated by a much more experienced player. She isn’t prepared to…handle herself against foreign agents. It’s not like she turned on you; she wanted an out, clearly,” Dustin objected on my behalf.

“If the Terrans didn’t know for certain about the Arxur, they certainly do now after Tassi confirmed it, and spouted everything to you before me. You, the one who told us half of the galaxy’s story, as secretive as some Tseia recluse!”

“All I want is to help. Think what you want of me, but I am your friend, Naltor. I can try to fix this; I’m the only one on the first contact party who will try, it seems. Why don’t we keep our heads, and figure out how to play this?”

The Selmer paced back and forth, flippers folded. “Leave, nerd. I’m not involving you in sabotaging your own people’s intelligence, because I have standards; I don’t use civilians. You’re committing treason by telling me any of this. When you betray your country for another, you can never go back—you better be damn sure. I would know, with how the Huddledom still spits on my name. I made my nest and laid in it, but you have no intention of packing your bags for Ivrana.”

“I’m here to ensure that Bissems get a fair shake. I’m no traitor; I’m upholding the Sapient Coalition’s values of peace, equality, and friendship. I’ll never play any part in twisting another species to do our bidding, like the Federation monsters that came before us. If it’s treason to see that these schemes blow up in Jones’ face, then I can live with that. You always said I’m a martyr, didn’t you?”

“If you recall, I added more to that with Zalk. You are hopelessly naïve, just as Tassi is, and you give others too much credit on their intentions. Your Sapient Coalition’s stated ideals are just that—ideals. No idealism survives the real world.”

“I don’t believe that, Naltor, and neither do you. You believe in Lassmin’s ideals of Bissem Unity.”

“Look how that’s worked out. I thought we were on a better path before the new Global War piled bodies in the streets. Ivrana is holding together by a single feather. I’m trying to keep my people safe against an insurmountable threat.”

“We all are,” I chimed in. “Humanity, in their defense, sees the Sapient Coalition as their people. The Arxur are a complication, just like the war breaking out on our homeworld; the Terrans fear bloodshed, and a conflict within their own ranks. Kaisal buying his planet goodwill might further everyone’s objectives.”

Dustin flashed his teeth. “The decision is yours, but Tassi and I are on the same page about how to play this. The cat is out of the bag; directing the grays toward a vulnerable planet could, straight up, save lives. It’s not about politics or spies. You heard what was said at the Sapient Coalition meeting. Nobody is going to protect the Farsul and the Kolshians.”

“Let me get this straight. You tell me that humans tried to fuck us over, that Tassi was feathers away from going along with it, and I should try to push the Arxur—somehow the only fucking allies we’ve got—into doing exactly what you asked? What’s next: I should send Jones our nuclear codes?”

“Naltor, the best weapon you have is making Jones feel like she’s still in the driver’s seat. I know that you know how double agents work; you control exactly what’s sent to her, and can steer her wrong at the important spots. My idea is that, to beat back any questions about contacting the Arxur, document this exchange; make it look like Bissems reached out, and got the grays to turn their ships toward Talsk. Then, Jones has nothing to even bluff that she can use against you. It cements your value in the SC’s eyes, exactly as you intended!”

“This would still involve Tassi being used as an intelligence pawn, Dustin. I’ve tried to keep her safe, you know; to protect her from the brunt of the ugliness out here.”

“It hasn’t succeeded,” I answered bluntly. “If it had, I wouldn’t have been targeted by Terran Intelligence. That speaks for itself.”

The human nodded, curly mane bouncing against his pale forehead. “This is beating Jones at her own game. Personally, I think you’d have a tough time persuading Kaisal to save Aafa; the Kolshians’ collusion with Betterment is why his people were starved for many years. But Talsk is a different story. This part of what Jones wants is stopping an enemy that’s in our space, and killing indiscriminately. Bissems can’t possibly be at odds with that aim, especially when we still haven’t a clue who attacked the Tseia.”

Naltor’s beak parted with frustrated breaths, as he weighed Dustin’s argument in his head. “I heard you when you told me how many worlds were destroyed, when the Arxur first roamed the galaxy. We don’t need any more. As fucking infuriated as I am at your people, I’d rather humans win the war than the cloacabeaks who’d use civilians as fodder. But don’t think for a second that I’m over this.”

“I’m not over this either. When the United Nations learns what was done to a newly contacted species…let’s just say I’ll do everything possible to ensure this can never happen again, for future first contacts.”

“None of this was on my list of hypothetical first contacts,” I mumbled. “We’ve already meddled in matters we shouldn’t have, but there’s still a chance to push this in a positive direction. The Arxur were breaking quarantine anyway, and with Kaisal’s past misdeeds, he might as well help to save lives.”

The Selmer tilted his puffy-feathered head. “Past misdeeds?”

“Kaisal participated in the raid against the cradle, and ate Gojids alive. That’s part of why I felt guilty over helping him in the first place.”

“You can’t make this shit up! Aliens suck all around—um, no offense, Dustin.”

“None taken. You really haven’t had good luck with most of us, or found…any bit of extraterrestrial history that didn’t have blemishes in it,” the human sighed. “You should be wary, of both the Arxur and of us. Bissems have to take it one day at a time, and try to find what’s the right thing to do: idealism won’t actualize itself. What do you say we try to give Kaisal a push toward Talsk?”

“I need to contact Lassian intelligence agencies. I’ll recommend authorizing your plan, but that’s not a decision I can make alone. I hope Tassi remembers which planet she belongs to as well.”

The Selmer stormed off down the hall, holopad making its way into his flippers. I turned a grateful gaze toward Dustin, glad he’d done most of the talking; without a friend to defend me, I wasn’t sure I could bear Naltor’s harsher judgments. The positive news was that the Lassian general had given no indication that he’d take me off the Sivkit or SC diplomatic missions, and had agreed with the suggested course correction on our Arxur policy. Right now, the enemy drones were still crawling through the outskirts of their targets’ territory, since they were slowed by disruptors. Nonetheless, our time to rally a rescue party wasn’t infinite, even if we had gained a few extra weeks. I couldn’t help but remember the Arxur leader’s specific wording on Leirn: that he’d always been willing to come to the defense of non-herbivores.

We’d have to see if Kaisal was willing to consider the idea of aiding an old enemy, saving their planet just as his kind had once done for Earth. It might give us the best odds of success if we convinced him this was for the good of the Bissems, the Osirs, and humanity, rather than simply to save the Farsul homeworld.

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What kind of notes would be left in my file, after finding out I’d been contacted by a foreign government? General Naltor wouldn’t keep that to himself, I imagined. I was the first Bissem to be approached by an alien intelligence apparatus; we’d not only need to divert diplomatic resources to the stars, but also covert ones to deal with these affairs. Lassmin had much less information on the Terrans than they had on us, from observing us before first contact. When I went to check in on the Selmer’s call, I thought I heard him mention an intelligence-sharing arrangement with the Yotul. That was certainly an idea—one that, if accepted by the Technocracy, might put a permanent end to their opposition. It’d steer them away from undermining our SC status.

The Yotul Technocracy are quite active in the espionage sphere, according to what Nulia first told me about them; she said they were paranoid, with a habit of spying. Naltor was paying attention much more than his flippant attitude would’ve shown.

The question of what they might want from a fledgling species like us was one I already had the answer to—the Yotul would definitely expect us to back loosing the Arxur, which would dig us deeper into this debacle. That was, unless they were willing to do it out of sympathy for a fellow “uplift”; Bissems did have common ground to play into with them. Surely they could respect us trying to gain respect among the Sapient Coalition, just as they had to fight for every square inch with the Federation. General Naltor was a much more jaded, seasoned individual, so I was certain he could consider the playbook much more thoroughly than myself. It’d be nice if the marsupials would support the Talsk agenda, since they had leverage on the Arxur Collective, but I doubted they’d have any sympathy for the Farsul.

“Penny for your thoughts?” Dustin asked, as I waited for any word back from Naltor.

I tugged at my feathers from stress, slicking them with natural waterproof oil. “We might be involved in the outcome of an alien war, with an entire planet at stake. Not to mention the spot this puts Lassmin in, as a neutral observer in the Bissem war. Zalk already mistrusts outsiders, and hearing that aliens tried to manipulate us…”

“Wouldn’t surprise me one bit,” a low voice said behind me. “They’re at war, and that trumps all other concerns. They want to see what they can get from us; whatever anyone says, they don’t give freely. You have to assume any foreigners are out to get you.”

A chill ran down my spine, realizing that the Tseia overheard my words. “Zalk, I…”

“Can we not lump all foreigners in one basket? We both are foreigners to you,” a flummoxed Dustin replied.

“Humans tried to invade us, just from within. Naltor told me,” Zalk commented. “You did well to rebuff their attempts and notify your superiors, Tassi.”

Is that the version of events Naltor is telling other Bissems? I’m…glad he protected me, and even more relieved I didn’t sell him out. Telling Zalk, when he doesn’t trust the Tseia at all, is certainly a shocker.

“Yes, she did. The doctor was too smart to fall for any manipulation,” Naltor chirped, waddling through the doorway. His eyes met mine, an unspoken message laced into his words. “Zalk and I began our secret meddling in the Arxur jailbreak together. It’s a problem for both of us now. We knew it could attract attention if we were discovered.”

The Tseia scratched his headfeathers. “Dustin, could you please give us the room? You might’ve helped us, but you are a foreigner. A non-Bissem intelligence.”

The xenobiologist bobbed his shoulders, locking eyes with me to ensure that I’d be alright left alone. “I understand why you wouldn’t want a United Nations employee listening right now. I’ll be in my quarters if you need anything.”

“Thanks, Dustin,” I said with sincerity, as the primate marched from the conference room at a brisk pace.

Zalk waited for several minutes in silence, checking the hallway in paranoid fashion to ensure Dustin was gone. “As Naltor was saying, we have a common enemy, one that we can’t match up against. The humans can’t crack our communications, so we’ve decided to use them to coordinate with Lassmin on alien affairs. We need secret channels for our true plans, and other ones to let information slide, where we don’t mind it falling into Terran hands.”

Naltor, you sly devil. This is how he gets the nomads to hand over their technology…and it’s their idea!

The Selmer lifted his beak coyly. “We need to build our own alliance, Tassi, so that means we go after everyone lacking friends. You get enough other parties who, on their own, are weak, and eventually it gives you power. Why stop with Sivkit refugees? If the Arxur save Talsk, we make sure the Farsul know they’re indebted to us. We can even take a few in with the help of the Terran Kessler-worthy ships, and make them see us as a fresh start—”

“Just like Kaisal does,” Zalk agreed. “It’ll show our generosity, or as I’d put it, our usefulness. We’ll take the people they don’t want. We come during crises, so they should devote full energy to resolving our ecological one. Maybe they’ll even pretend to care about the Starlight Incident.”

“Take in some of the Osirs, raise them, and we have our own carnivore alliance. With the Farsul, Yotul, and Sivkits intermixed—and hopefully, the SC off our backs. An unlikely team that’ll serve as a buffer between us and the anti-carnivores, while the Coalition thinks we’re just helping them out.”

“That’s a nice plan, but I’m not sure if we should take people from Talsk; the wider SC doesn’t want them let out any more than the Arxur. If everyone hates the Farsul, do we want an official alliance with them?” I asked.

“It’s called covering your tail feathers. We show it as healing the galaxy. The Arxur and the Farsul, working together; it shows that they’ve changed. We can take credit for that. All we have to do is get Kaisal to agree to go to Talsk, and he’s basically committed. We do this together, here and now, documenting it so we can show the SC our ‘true’ plans.”

“Human intelligence won’t know what hit them,” Zalk cackled. “Shall we begin, Tassi?”

I forced a composed look on my face, and moved toward where Naltor had situated a camera. “I’m ready. Let’s get Kaisal to save Talsk.”

General Naltor had begun routing a video call through our backdoor channels with the Arxur Collective; they had tucked warships away in our space as gifts, after our previous tip about the Osirs. However, we couldn’t dare to retrieve them—at least, not until we had political cover for an open alliance with the grays. General Jones wouldn’t expose us even if we did make a move on them, but there were other SC observers in our solar system that could catch a glimpse by chance. I tried to imagine what Ambassador Loxsel would think of this half-baked plan to include him in an alliance with the Arxur, and one of the founders who stole Tinsas from his people. The Grand Herd might not be easily sold on joining this compact, especially with how they spurned all aliens for decades.

I might’ve gotten out of spying on my people, but I’ll still have to conceal…this from Loxsel. I feel like I’m making headway with the Sivkit. He’s not all bad, and I’ve been enjoying seeing his literary catalog.

A grizzled, lengthy gray snout appeared on screen, with vertical pupils staring directly at us from amid amber irises. “Bissems. Do you have something to report from the Coalition of Leaf-lickers?”

“Yes,” I spoke up, as Naltor nudged me. “There’s an opportunity for Arxur heroism in this war. You’re passing by Talsk, which has very little support; we know that, whoever attacked the Osirs, is probably behind the drone force going toward them. You could remind the galaxy how the Collective saves worlds, as well as showing off how you’ve strengthened your military.”

“Talsk? The Farsul: one of the Federation founders? We do not like these species. We also have zero intelligence on the enemy’s capabilities, and we cannot afford severe losses during our declaration of strength. My citizens and military would doubt me. The humans have not challenged us, and that makes me a leader they respect.”

Zalk scowled. “You asked us to help you lobby for your quarantine to be lifted. You need something to point to, to get their blessing—to push the narrative away from the escape. You get the humans to accept your aid in the war, and you’ve basically forced them to officially condone your release.”

“If it hasn’t been long enough for you to move past your grievances with the Farsul, why should the SC forgive you? Show the galaxy it’s time to move on,” I prompted. “Establish that the Collective stops raids, rather than commits them; there needs to be some solid evidence you’ve changed. Most importantly, you’ll prove your usefulness to humanity, and to your subordinates. Nobody would dare to mess with or question you, if you were victorious against a force Earth lost to.”

The Arxur’s eyes gleamed, as he tapped a claw against a massive fang that protruded from his maw. “We were once very useful to humanity. They seem to have forgotten; a reminder might be in order. I suppose we could set up an…ambush. A low-risk, high-reward play, with my multitude of ships. While the Farsul would be no loss to the galaxy, I suppose I do not want these drones to have a chance to attack more carnivores, like Bissems. We all would rather fight them here, yes?”

That’s an odd sentence structure. It doesn’t sound like the rest of his speech…it’s almost like he’s parroting someone else.

“Better to fight them at Talsk than have them come after you, as soon as you set up by the Osirs’ world,” Naltor agreed. “Here, you have backup from the humans, and the element of surprise. It’s the best point for a conflict, where there’s the lowest probability of severe losses. You must see the opportunity for us all.”

Kaisal’s nostrils flared with a hint of frustration. “Yes, I suppose I do. We left isolation to help avenge the Osirs. I must show my people that I will follow through on defending non-herbivorous species, and bring back Arxur greatness. All of our work to rebuild the military has led to this moment, where the SC cannot hold us back any longer.”

“Your fleet will be their saviors; of that, I have no doubts. You waged war with hundreds of species once. Bissems have full faith that you can handle whatever these enemies throw at you, and we’re glad to work with you. You’re proving yourself to us, now more than ever—worthy of a carnivore alliance.”

“The Carnivore Alliance. It could be our own Sapient Coalition, free of their judgment and idiocy. I would not mind this, General Naltor. While all I originally asked of you was to hear me out, I appreciate the Bissems’ support of our goals.”

“You can count on it. I look forward to a day where we have full trade between our peoples, and can have our diplomatic communications openly in the future. Let us know of your victory as soon as it’s played out at Talsk, and we’ll dismantle the SC’s opposition before they’ve even realized what hit them.”

“I like the attitude. I will be in touch to request updated intelligence after consulting with my military Chief Hunters. Farewell, Bissems.”

I breathed a sigh of relief, glad that Kaisal went along with the plan to aid Talsk. The Collective might be the difference maker in that fight, as one of the few factions to help in the Farsul’s defense. Dustin would be pleased to hear the news, since he’d wanted to save Farsul lives, as an idealistic act. It served our ends as well, and let Bissems craft our plans instead of getting pushed around. Once the Arxur had intervened in an enemy attack at our behest, General Jones would have nothing else to use against us in her bluster. Someone with Naltor’s wits perhaps could outfox Terran Intelligence at their own game; it’d been a good idea to bring him into the fold. Bissems just might be able to finish our plan of securing allies and winning over the SC after all.

A/N - Chapter 47! Naltor learns about the attempt to turn Tassi into a Terran asset, though he tells a slightly different version of the story to Zalk and Ivrana when it comes down to it; he also manages to get the Tseia’s encryption. The Selmer general sets his sights on getting involved with Yotul intelligence, and exonerating his people with Talsk, adding the Farsul to his list of potential allies. Kaisal is persuaded to help the Farsul as a way to ensure Wriss is freed officially, and floats the idea of a Carnivore Alliance.

What do you think of the odd assortment of allies the Bissems are planning to assemble, and Naltor’s reaction to Tassi’s admission/his craftiness? Will the Arxur end up saving Talsk as planned, and how will the SC react to their arrival?

As always, thank you for reading and supporting!

Comments

pogman

second

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Fourth

Quiidek

Galactic Alliance of Carnivorous Sapients????? Just spitballing here...

A B

Aw yay kaisal picked up something from isif

PS1 Hagrid

Kaisal’s strarting to talk like Isif, this will be fun

Sroni

The SC fleet was basically obliterated without loss. Why did Tassi keep this info from Kaisal? The Arxur fleet will be destroyed too, I think. Considering how both sides of the conflict fare, I think both alliances will fall apart, before a victor is declared.

Cheesy Power

I think Red-Blood Alliance would be a better name for this alliance- part of moving on from the damage the Federation did should be abandoning their insistence on classifying everything as predators or prey.

DreamEnvoy

Naltor's response towards the Jones situation is pretty fair honestly. A Bissem-Yotul-Arxur-Farsul alliance? Interesting. I look forward to seeing Farsul and how they'd react to seeing predators coming to their aid.

Taliesyn

Perhaps because the drone fleet shows no indications of having brought an asteroid belt to throw at the defenders? The battle was even until they started throwing asteroids.

Quenten

I'm sure the entirety of the Arxur navy can take on one singular drone fleet, right...? Surely Kaisal wouldn't have chanced poking the herbivore bear by breaking quarantine without a genuinely competitive fleet.

Quenten

You know what, I really hope this Farsul-Arxur thing takes off, because the Farsul are probably the ones who know by far the most about pre-Betterment Arxur culture and society. I doubt any Arxcicles decided to go back to Wriss, considering how Vysith hates everything her people have become, and I also doubt Project Chronicle produced anything at all for the Arxur. Not only that, but the Farsul might also be able to reverse the damage they did to Wriss' biosphere and bring back some of the Arxur's traditional animals. Those would be amazing first steps.

PhycoKrusk

Depends on whether they still have their own copy of the Archive data, which they might not; the UN might've just paperclipped all of it, just like they did with all the archivists. Besides, given that Farsul society is at best only in the first couple years of recovery from total collapse, finding data like that may be somewhat challenging.

PhycoKrusk

Looks like I was right; a third faction is rising out of this, and just in time. I doubt "Carnivore Alliance" will be the final name for it, though; the doesn't describe the Yotul at all, and if the Farsul join, then either. (I suspect the Farsul will join, because that's about the only place they're going to find any allies in this frightening new galaxy) Regardless of all else, this needs to happen, especially since the Coalition is basically worthless for trying to heal the galaxy; the shadow caste is dead or in prison, Kolshian and Farsul alike. Persecuting those uninvolved because they happen to be the same species as the galaxy's past oppressors is no differently, fundamentally, than persecuting then over where their eyes happen to be placed.

Gavin Pierce

A relatively small SC drone fleet. Not the entirety of the SC fleet. Not even close

Michael Halpern

the SC fleet was a scouting/probing force, while yes they would have liked to be victorious, their goal was to force the unknown force to show their capabilities. which they did

Willy

Naltors reaction was fair and also if Jones acted without any direction from her superiors then power to the Bissems.

Byron Ritchie

Honesty the farsul and the arxur are playing with fire here by getting into an alliance But don’t forgot that if we didn’t play with fire we wouldn’t reach the heights we have

PhycoKrusk

Her direction from her superiors is very likely: Within the bounds of the law, do whatever is necessary to further the UN's cause.

Scarred Ragdoll

Am I the only one that thinks this is an awful idea? Not only does Jones have access to everything Justin saw here, a third independent faction of Carnivores is cause for the Federation Remnants to attack them, not to mention its sure to split the Coalition between the species which want to re-stablish the quarantine and those wanting to continue fighting the war with a hostile galactic empire. I believe the Bissems are underestimating the efforts Humanity has gone too, to prevent genocide and how much these species are hated.

Alekss Žukovskis

we're getting to see that Isif was demoted to a chief-hunter, i bet, and he'll lead the raid.

John

Wasn’t Isif explicitly stated to be dead?

Space Paladin

The Yotul and Farsul don’t have red blood though! 😅

TheDudeAbides

Great idea Bissems, "Nobody trusts us so let's make an alliance with the one faction with 0 allies. Wait, now they're even more suspicious of us? Let's break up the SC. I'm sure that'll go well and in no way lead to yet, ANOTHER war.

AnAbsoluteVillain

You mean 5th faction. SC, Meat Eaters, Shield, Old Fed, and Consortium.

AnAbsoluteVillain

Yeah this could turn into a real battle of the five armies.

Charles Hall

These last few chapters I've felt no Patience for the xenos. I hope this blows up in their face, I hope Jhones calls them on their bluff and releases all the information, I hope someone gets fucking assassinated.

AnAbsoluteVillain

I resent that humans are so asleep at the wheel, and are treating the auxur like a bad dad. Humanity owes Earth's salvation to them, and they arent BFFs? Auxur should have been a founding member of the SC. Would have made the story so much more interesting for humanity to have to hard mode bringing the galaxy together, and of course failing. 😊

REDemon14

I hope Naltor doesn't hold this over Tassi's head too long. She's a scientist who just wants to science. Quite the plan to have the Arxur save the Farsul on Talsk to legitimize their roaming. Hope it works out. A small collection of outcasts, all because the UN wasn't aggressive enough to wipe out the fed ideology from their allies in the past few decades. "A Carnivore Alliance". So, I'm guessing no one is gonna tell him that the Sivkit, Farsul, Yotul, and (maybe) "Osirs", would be part of this group? Perhaps I'm reading it wrong. I wonder if the Jaslip would want to ally with Arxur? The formation of another Bloc concerns me. I hope this doesn't end with another war after the KC. I saw that Isif speech pattern. Either Kaisal has picked up the pattern or he's contacting Isif somehow.

JamesPolymer .

You forget that to the rest of the galaxy, the Arxur are still the boogeymen cannibals who raided, enslaved, and *ate* innocent people by the thousand for multiple generations. Humanity may have had to distance themselves in order to have any credibility with the Sapient Coalition.

EliasArt2Life

@JamesPolymer Agreed. With the amount of fire humanity comes under for just NOT SUPPORTING Arxur extinction, they could never actively associate with them. The Bissem don’t yet realize how dangerous a game they’re playing. They do seem to be slowly learning, though.

Cheesy Power

Well the alternative is for the Bissem to become Vassals to humanity, with no power in the galaxy or even in their own government, slaves to whichever way Jones tugs their leash ad the Arxur are turned on and abandoned by the species they saved during the war. If the SC didn’t want another power bloc to form, they shouldn’t have left so many species abandoned and neglected and friendless. Because you don’t seem to understand that right now, the Bissem have no friends- you shouldn’t be criticizing them for trying to make some themselves.

Terminus Sol

More like repeating what Isif is saying over an earpiece. Though that makes me wonder why Isif isn't more of a visible player.

Cheesy Power

Yes, how dare the species that got dragged into the stars, denied all the aid they were promised, left friendless, and out of options, and then getting their sovereignty violated by Jones, even THINK of uniting all of the other outcasts into a power bloc! They should just accept their place as second-class citizens and stop causing problems! /s

Cheesy Power

They’re not predators either! So they still need a different alliance name.

Swan

Really want Dustin, Kaisal and (if possible) Olek to meet at some point Olek: "Heyy, Kaisal long time, no see" Kaisal: *sighs* "Hey Olek" Dustin, to Olek (Thinking all the war stories were another conspiracy theory): "YOU KNOW HIM?! YOU TOLD THE TRUTH ABOUT WORKING WITH THE ARXUR?!"

NextMan

How about the Galactic Union for the Arxur/Bissem/Yotul/Farsul/Sivkit alliance?

EliasArt2Life

A lot to talk about; “Look how that’s worked out. I thought we were on a better path before the new Global War piled bodies in the streets. Ivrana is holding together by a single feather.” Refresh my memory, Naltor; were YOU the one who basically advocated for this war? All my frustrations with Naltor aside, I’m actually proud of his character growth. He started off only playing the national game, but is now transitioning into playing the global game. However, he still has a way to go; he actually needs to play the galactic community game, and he’s also STILL trying the play the national game while playing the global game. If he’s not careful, the Bissem could become like the Yotul; a powerful species that mostly just cares for themselves, and tries to manipulate other species to that end. I’m not actually against the Bissem’s plan. The SC needs a wake up call, and a few of their members seceding and starting their own group could work as one. However, the inclusion of the Yotul, who are equally as conniving and were the first to try to manipulate the Bissem is concerning. The Arxur, while not as good at espionage, aren’t stupid, and would likely realize that the Bissem’s cordial attitude is forced. They wouldn’t like that. Finally, the plan’s too complicated. It’s almost invariably going to go wrong; the more steps in a plan, the more places something unexpected can happen. The Bissem are still out of their depth. I’m not saying that they can’t succeed, but they are too overconfident for me to believe that they’ll succeed. Finally, Jones. I thought that we outsmarted her, but now I’m wondering if this was her plan all along? Think about it; her bluff was obvious; TOO obvious. Tassi should have been able to figure it out over the course of two weeks, and since even Dustin, a xenobiologist who has no espionage training, could see through it, I wonder why Jones thought it would ever hold up. Unless the idea was for it to fail, and the Bissem take advantage of that to make a double agent, which ironically has them doing exactly what humans want. But… once again, that plan seems too complicated, although less so. I’m just getting a weird feeling about the UN. Think about it; in NOP1, we got consistent, detailed updates about what the UN was up to, but in NOP2, nothing. We get what Dustin knows, which is very little. I’m starting to suspect @Space Paladin has the UN doing something behind the scenes that we aren’t supposed to see yet…

Arnav Bhate

Why do I feel Jones is still in control here

EliasArt2Life

I know. There’s something big being kept from us. My instincts are only wrong about 23% of the time. We just have TOO little information for this point of the story, on the SC front. I’m suspecting part of the reason why the Krev Consortium being a surveillance state was so clearly stated was to keep us from noticing how little we know about what’s going on in the UN.

EliasArt2Life

I feel that this is a wake up call that the SC needs. They feel too safe with the status quo, and aren’t putting enough work into improving themselves and tossing away old Federation ideologies. Seeing how fragile that status quo is, and how it can cause them to fracture might be what they need. That being said, YES I DO think this is a bad idea (for the Bissem). I’m not against it, but in a “it’s a hard lesson everyone needs to learn” way. Also, the Bissem’s underlying reasons for this alliance is a manipulative power grab, which is likely going to cause the group to destabilize, even if it does get off the ground.

Fergon

Add one more, Maya. Kaisal: Hey Maya, long time no see 🙂

James

Humanity is about to collectively die from exhaustion from being the only people trying to maintain peace between all factions for decades.

PhycoKrusk

@Elias The UN is also a surveillance state, and we know this because all of the cars are automated, financial transactions are tied to biometrics (with, so far, no evidence that physical currency is still in use at all), and everybody is enthralled with their mobile devices all the time; Jones can locate anybody who lives under the jurisdiction of the UN any time she wants to, and most certainly can scrape any of their communications for anything at a moment's notice, probably without any real oversight. (With the possible exception of the few nuts like me who end-to-end encrypt everything they're able to, so at least _some_ things remain a mystery) So far, however, none of the characters we have ever followed have been in a position where they would be privy to that information, so who can say? For all we know, they've been data scraping translator logs since day 1. Thinking on it, that might be why the Technocracy seems to be the only entity that poses any actual threat to the UN; that they have as extensive a spy network as they do would imply that either Jones is allowing them to in order to make them think they're so slick, or they've integrated their technologies in such a way that they actually are that slick. (Given that she didn't appear to know that there would be Arxur ships around Ivrana until they were actually seen there implies the latter) This is, in fact, deeply concerning since it implies that the Consortium's domestic surveillance might just be "kid stuff," and we have no way of knowing until someone tells us.

PhycoKrusk

Actually, Jones seeming to think her bluff would work when there's nothing there is simple enough to explain: The Bissems are brand new. If she had tried that on any species other than Humans, Yotul, Arxur, and now Bissems, it almost certainly would have worked. In short, she went with something that should have been obviously ineffective because it worked the last 20 times, and xenos are stupid and will believe whatever you tell them as long as you're vaguely threatening enough.

PhycoKrusk

@Elias It's dangerous, but not as dangerous as it could be. If it comes to it, it's just more cold war: The UN is not going to get into it with a Yotul-Arxur alliance that _doesn't_ have an alliance with other governments, never mind with (and, let's face it, this is a capybara that has a machine gun riding on top of a crocodile that has a machine gun, swimming next to a penguin that also has a machine gun, on their way to save an orphanage full of puppies; I wouldn't want that smoke either). We have at least been led to believe that without the UN, the Coalition is not militarily capable of fighting the Technocracy or the Collective individually, never mind together, so if the Bissems are in a military alliance (and have the resources to defend themselves as well), there really isn't a lot that anyone can do besides refuse to trade with them.

PhycoKrusk

Because he's probably bed-ridden. He was already old in NOP1; at least in his 40s (or equivalent) and exposed to plenty of battle damage. He's ancient by this point in the story.

PhycoKrusk

He was not; it was just speculated because of his age and his honestly not great health.

PhycoKrusk

Isif would be at least in his 60s by this point if not even older, which may not necessarily be an issue except that he was not in great health 23 years ago, so he's probably not able to do much more than advising.

PhycoKrusk

The only alternative they had was to be colonized by UN military intelligence (which is seeming more and more to have a frightening amount of commonality with the old GRU). Are you sure that's better?

PhycoKrusk

Enough military might so that they won't be conquered by any of the other powers seems like a sensible thing to grab for.

Cheesy Power

Exactly- the “0 friends” thing doesn’t carry the weight people think it does because the Bissem ALREADY have no friends. And their first priority is and should be towards the Bissem- the fact that securing the allies they need threatens the stability of the SC is not their responsibility nor their problem, it’s just a consequence of the SC refusing to clean up their act.

PhycoKrusk

You didn't see it because nobody said it.

Gumcel

“‘We all are,’ I chimed in. ‘Humanity, in their defense, sees the Sapient Coalition as their people.’” Lmao, I know she’s supposed to be naive but damn. “If the Arxur save Talsk, we make sure the Farsul know they’re indebted to us. We can even take a few in with the help of the Terran Kessler-worthy ships, and make them see us as a fresh start—” Complains about being exploited by aliens, immediately schemes a way to exploit other aliens. Gigachad Naltor moment.

Heroman3003

Yotul are trying to outplay Jones. Kaisal is being led around by Onso, I bet, and this is all part of their plan to create this new alliance, with them as part of it. At least that's gonna be my theory.

Willy

"This is beating Jones at her own game." After rereading this chapter, I can see a pattern in SP's writing. I bet over the next 20 or so chapters, Jones will be like, "This was all part of my plan. I knew Tassi would spill to Dustin, and he would predictably try to play hero and assist the Bissems' generals, leading them to believe they were in danger of being manipulated for another cause, ensuring they took galactic politics seriously. Then. They would finally unite out of fear from a perceived attempt being invaded internally." I think Jones is too smart not to consider the moral implications and to just leave a loose end like Dustin around for Tassi to go crying to, its so obvious. 😂Even in NOP1 she often operated from the shadows making sure everything aligns just so.

Björn1911

The only way you beat someone like Jones, is to put a bullet in her head the moment she tries to threaten you to do what she wants.

Willy

Honestly I feel the same. But people like Jones can't be understood, she doesn't act as a participant in the stories events, but guiding them. We need her because she's been useful in aiding the progress of the galaxy.

Neu5Ac

It hasn't even been five months, and bodies are already piling up in the streets? Either Naltor is prone to exaggeration, one side is losing very badly, or Bissems are prone to human (Bissem) wave tactics. I assume they haven't gotten to using nukes yet, though: I suspect the fighting would be close to over after half a year of bathing their planet in nuclear fire.

Neu5Ac

I find it hard to believe Olek is still alive at this point. People who tend to notice things getting caught up in things that major powers don't want noticed tend to have short expiration dates.

Michael

I seriously hope so. I would be deeply upset if we had Jones appear only to be rebuffed in the next chapter

Michael

Jones is working with the Arxur, set up Tassi in a win-win scenario. If she plays ball, it pushes Arxur to work with the UN. If she double crosses, their best move is to push the Arxur to work with the UN. Basically, her pressure acted to nudge the Bissem to act

Michael

It may be possible that Jones' goal was to move the Arxur into defense of Talsk or Aafa, forcing the Arxur into the light and forcing the SCs hand to formally open relations. Converting Tassi to an asset could be a win-win since if she cooperates, you can push her in that direction, and if she flips, their best move would be to contact and work with the Arxur. In either case, the nudge gets her what she wants.

Michael

Really hoping this is a Jones' Gambit. If Tassi cooperated, she'd have the influence to push the Bissim and influence the Arxur into the war on SCs side. If Tassi flipped, this is the result, they still work with the Arxur to bring them into the war on the SCs side. If her goal was to get the Arxur on board and to force the SCs hand into working with them openly, then pressuring Tassi may have been a win win

Ezekiah Kane

I really would love to see Kaisal and Maya reunite after all that time. Would be a bit tense at first, but he would probably be thankful to her for not shooting him back then and giving him a chance.

PhycoKrusk

That would require her to believe that the other members of the Coalition will act rationally concerning the Arxur, and we know that she doesn't, because they don't act rationally towards the Bissems.

PhycoKrusk

That would require her to be concerned with making decisions that are moral, or in some way "right," and she isn't; she's concerned with making decisions that cement the UN's control over the galaxy. The only reason she's moving the way she is now is because the Consortium has added time pressure that wasn't there before: She can't just line things up and wait for the cultural victory anymore.

PhycoKrusk

They don't have much choice. Look at the rest of the Coalition; another generation or two, and Earthling culture will be the dominant culture in Orion. Other cultures will still be around, sure, but even the species they originated from will treat them as novelties.

PhycoKrusk

If Jones was working with the Arxur, then press ganging Tassi into applying for her would actually make things harder, not easier; I'm not buying it.

Austin Arlt

I still stand by the belief that Humanity should have taken a play out of its World War 2 playbook and do what the Allies did with Germany and Japan, Germany being the Kolshians and Japan being the Farsul. Enacted laws similar to what Germany did in regards to pro-nazi mindsets but obviously pro-Fed/anti-predator mindset. The Arxur shouldn't have been quarantined, neither should the Kolshians or Farsul. The fact that Federation lies haven't been cracked down on harder than they have is a testament to the inevitable failure of the SC. Humanity is too soft where it needs to be hard and too hard where it needs to be soft.

George Smith

I mean, is it really cannibalism if they’re not the same species?

PhycoKrusk

The UN really didn't have the position in order to make those kinds of decisions. It's important to remember that after the Second World War, America was the only allied power that hadn't large swathes of its industry ground to dust, or an economy that was recovering only slowly, never mind the memory of the mess that was the Treaty of Versailles; France and Britain effectively took the position of supporting whatever it was that America wanted to do. Not so here; the Kolshians and Farsul are in the straits that they are because that was the compromise that the UN was able to negotiate with the rest of the Coalition. The only other option on the table was the complete extermination of both species.

Kevin Quintana

@PhycoKrusk I think theres one thing that should be considered. The psychology of these xenos in regards to how tf some primitive apes just discovered ftl and in about a year overthrew the largest and most powerful faction around who stood for hundreds if not thousands of years, leading a military campaign outnumbered and outgunned against seemingly insurmountable odds. The feds despite having all the power of hundreds of worlds and every advantage still lost, and even when they pulled an advanced ghost fleet of robots out of nowhere that still wasn't enough. And on top of that these fresh to extrasolar travel monkeys took a fleet of Venlil ships known to be weak and lead a surprise attack of the Gojid one of the strongest military members of the feds and bloodied the nose of the Arxur, who terrorized the galaxy for centuries, and apparently earned enough of their respect that they'd set aside the fact that we fought them and moved to defend earth and later came to a hidden meeting at the formation of the SC asking humanity to help them out. It doesn't matter if the aliens disbanded from the federation and helped humanity, what matters is the optics. From their point of view humans just showed up and started rocking the boat hard enough for them to jump ship and join the winners. The UN should have plenty enough political power to get what they want and force their allies into accepting that they're reforming the Arxur Kolshians and Farsul, and with just a little propaganda playing themselves up and really highlighting just how impossible the feat they pulled off was and that they actually did it, their allies likely would buy that they could do that reform.

Sairenity

> Earth, down there, is what pulls objects inside its grip down toward it; that’s why you fall when you jump off of something. We’re beyond the influence of its mass.

Dennis

Did kasial even eat gjoids alive? Pretty sure he got stopped by stronger axur. Then ate the snipers rations. Maybe on the cattle ship?

Some Lvm

This was Jones' move all along - wasn't it? To make Bissems think they were outcasts *after* they got some connections, so they can form an alliance with all the "problematic" species humanity couldn't get SC to go along with. Than, she will probably come up with some spin to absorb that new collective in to a more tolerant SC. Or I am overthinking it, and humanity really did screw over the poor space penguins, and now they have to scramble to get whatever advantage they can, even if it means buddying up to the Farsul. I mean, I would just let the Consortium finish the job on both Talsk and Aafa, but that's just me...

PhycoKrusk

Unfortunately, you might be overthinking it: Jones' MO has always been to do whatever best serves the UN's (and thus, her own) interests, and the plain fact is that working with the Bissems does _not_ serve the UN's interests. The Bissems are, due to their obligate carnivory, actually a liability to the UN. More than 90% of the Coalition is either uninterested or hostile towards the Bissems, so paying them the minimal amount of attention in favor of other species is the better move as it will maximize returns. Honestly, I wouldn't be a bit surprised if Jones has been actively looking for a way to "get rid" of the Technocracy because, frankly, they don't really do anything except cause problems for her.

PhycoKrusk

Unless he owned up to it off camera, they're just speculating: They know he was there, therefore, he ate them alive. Because as we all know, simply being near something when it happens means you definitely did it.

PhycoKrusk

@Kevin If the UN attempted to force the rest of the Coalition to go along with their desires, war would have been on again immediately. There is zero chance they would have simply accepted escaping one oppressor only to immediately be under the boot of another one, and this time they would have won. The UN, for all its successes, was still uncertain of its ability to fight a war on two fronts; even against "prey" militaries, fighting a war on 10 fronts would have been impossible.

Scylla

Jones is playing 5d chess.

Some Lvm

@Phyco: somehow, I did not get a notification about your comment until now, and even that only because Alysia added a new comment... I fear you may be right. Wile skilled and useful, we have no indication Jones is a nice person. But than again, surely she could have stopped the first contact team if she wanted to. I seriously doubt Dustin is clever enough and skilled enough in covert ops to get past her, and if Bissems really are such a headache for the UN, the easiest way to mitigate their existence is keep them in the dark. Unless we are missing some crucial piece of information, its not like they were on the verge of discovering FTL and pulling a Noah.