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Memory Transcription Subject: Cala, Krakotl Child Prisoner

Date [standardized human time]: July 21, 2137

The stuffed animals that Andrew brought me to teach me zoo-all-ogy were really cool!  His ideas about predators being necessary to the environment were kind of funny; Mama would’ve said they were predator-diseased, but then again, the exterminators were wrong about a lot and did bad things. I probably shouldn’t believe that part of what Mama told me either. What the human said about meat-eaters hunting to survive, not because of bloodlust, made a little sense. If it was between flesh and starving, or they needed some carcass chemical, then I understood why they did it. I’d studied really hard when he’d shown me stuff about the food chain, and I was listening as closely as possible about how “prey populations getting out of control” could destroy the environment.

“Krakotl are a prey population, Andy,” I told the human, parting my beak in thought. “Does that mean us living is…bad? That we should let predators eat us?”

The guard had shook his head, which I’d learned was a gesture for no. “Of course not, Cala. People can have devastating impacts on the environment, but Krakotl aren’t simple animals. Prey aren’t necessarily even supposed to get eaten, any more than predators are supposed to burn. Prey evolve to avoid getting eaten, and have strategies for survival—they don’t make it easy on the hunters. It’s really a contest of who can play their role better.”

“But you’re saying the exterminators stopping predators from eating prey animals is bad. That they hurt Nishtal.”

“Yes, Cala. The ecosystem hinges on balance. Too many predators, too skilled of predators, or simply predators where they don’t belong can have devastating effects as well. Prey can be killed faster than they can reproduce, and go extinct—then the predators starve as well. A total collapse…like ripping out the bottom blocks in those towers you built.”

I thought back to how I’d tried to recreate the marsh stilt towers from home, and how easy they were to knock over. “I think I get it. If there’s too many prey, they eat all the plants. If there’s too many predators, they eat all the prey!”

“Very good! Now, did you follow the pictures of the three types of animals?”

I practiced the motions with my beak, trying to make sure I said the words right. “Omnivore. Herbivore. Carnivore. I already knew the last two!”

“That makes this easy to remember, since omnivore just means both. They eat both plants and meat, which makes it a bit more complicated than going herbivore…prey…and carnivore…predator.”

“Then would omnivores be both predator and prey?”

Andrew nodded. “Pretty much. They can factor in on both sides of the balance equation: eating too many plants or too much prey. Not all creatures who eat meat are even predators. It’s not simple the way the exterminators teach you.”

“You’re tricking me, to see if I’m smart. Predators eat animals, dead or alive—the animals have to die.”

“A ‘predator’ is a creature that hunts, Cala. What if the meat-eater didn’t kill the animals, but just ate whatever it found? That’s what we call a ‘scavenger.’ Does that make sense?”

“I guess so. I’ve never heard of any of this before.”

“The exterminators weren’t interested in understanding anything that wasn’t strictly an herbivore; they just wanted to kill it with fire. They’ll tell you predators can’t care about anything, when that’s just not true. There’s solitary and pack predators, and the latter form bonds and cooperate to provide for themselves.”

“We know about pack predators! Mama said humans had packs.”

Andrew drew a weary breath. “Well, Cala, your mother wasn’t wrong on that. We are pack predators. It’s just more complicated than us being mindless monsters. We’re omnivores, who started eating meat because it was the only way our…brains could function. We needed a very specific vitamin we can’t make ourselves, or we literally die.”

I cast a horrified glance at the guard; had he really just admitted to being a predator? Predators were supposed to be angry, people-eating creatures, who’d stop at nothing—like the Arxur. If humans were both prey and predator…somehow snacking on plants and dead animals…maybe the exterminators hadn’t lied. Then again, Andrew claimed Mama and her friends were killing hunters because they didn’t understand them; I knew for sure that they hadn’t known about omnivores, and anything more complicated than predator-and-prey. I didn’t really believe Andy would eat me, and he didn’t seem to like suffering. If he was at least partially an herbivore, but would die without flesh; I didn’t want him to die. 

Why is Andrew being nice to me, if he just wants to raid Nishtal and kill Krakotl? He’s not doing very good at the side of him that has a…role to kill prey. I’m trying to listen and understand, but he’s definitely tasted blood. Does that make him contaminated? What about if he has instincts that show up every now and then?

“I killed…half-prey?” I squawked uncertainly.

Andrew frowned, slumping his shoulders. “That’s right, Cala. Omnivores. It’s why I guess we understand both sides of the coin. Our ancestors hunted, and were hunted. Eventually, we played both roles so well that nobody could contend with us. We don’t even have to hunt anymore; we print meat the way you would print a perch.”

“Do you…have predator instincts? Be honest, please.”

“To kill? No. We like chasing things for fun, searching for hidden stuff or people, or just sneaking up on other creatures to startle them as a joke. It doesn’t hurt anyone, but it originates from hunting behavior. Our pack instincts, seeking bonds and social approval, are honestly much stronger.”

“Is that why you’re nice to me? For…bonds?”

“Our nurture instinct is pretty strong with children, Cala, but yes, we can pack-bond with things that aren’t human. We have a strong sense of empathy.”

“You have empathy, but kill and eat animals? How can you do that and not feel bad, even if it’s to survive?”

Andrew tilted his head. “You eat plants, Cala. They have feelings, you know. Would you eat a plant that could talk to you?”

“No.”

“Exactly. We don’t eat animals that can talk, because that means they’re people. We prioritize empathy for people.”

“That’s why you won’t eat Krakotl.”

“I wouldn’t dream of it. The thought makes me want to puke. Look, I have to tell you one more thing that you won’t like, about omnivores. The Krakotl…are half-prey too. Before the Federation found you, your people ate meat and plants, just like us.”

I laughed in the predator’s face, thinking that Andrew was telling an unbelievable joke; however, my chuckles fizzled out as his features remained solemn and serious. That didn’t make any sense, so he must be wrong. I knew that I ate plants, and that eating flesh was bad. We had the best exterminators in the galaxy, and the grown-ups hated and feared hunters. We didn’t raid other planets, like violent predators were supposed to…unless I counted Earth. The Krakotl wanted to stop the humans from spreading through the galaxy, because they were “omnivores.” Why would we be so opposed to “half-prey” if that’s what we were? Why didn’t the Federation kill us, the way they wouldn’t put up with the humans? I tilted my head, not understanding.

Krakotl don’t have hunting instincts; I know, because I am one. We’re not hungry thinking about meat, and we don’t have binocular eyes.

“Krakotl would occasionally go for fish,” Andrew continued, his voice a deep rumble. “The leader of the Federation admitted it, and we found some documentation to support it.”

I shoved the holopad he pushed toward me away, but not before I could see an image of a Krakotl, talons extended, snatching a living creature from the water. “No! I don’t want to hunt. That’s not what we do. Predators don’t stop being predators.”

“I don’t want to hunt any more than you do, Cala. If someone makes predators allergic to meat—which means it’ll kill them if they eat it—they won’t eat it. The Federation forced you to be herbivores and lied to you, while the exterminator guild passed on those lies. They passed them on really well, making you forget it’s even possible to be omnivores.”

“So we’re…bad? Killers?”

“Absolutely not! All living creatures have a role to play; predators aren’t supposed to burn, or without any good qualities. You know that you have empathy and feelings, which is why it’s not so crazy that humans would too. We’re the same, and there’s nothing wrong with either of us. I think…it’s cool to be an omnivore. You know why?”

I shook my head at Andrew, mirroring the human gesture I’d learned. He smiled, clearly appreciating that.

“Because we can be whatever we want, Cala. We come balanced on the inside, just the way nature should be,” the omnivore said. “We appreciate all sides of life. I told you, all along, we just wanted friends—we cared about them being people, not what diet they followed. Do you think that’s bad?”

Once more, I tossed my head from side-to-side in the negative.

Andrew flashed his teeth. “Good. Then I think we both should be given a chance.”

“I can agree with that!” I chirped. “But I don’t get why you have the evil eyes, and we don’t…if we’re both predators.”

“Binocular eyes don’t exclusively define predator and prey, Cala.” Andrew picked up a bright green stuffed animal from his box, which looked a bit like a noodle; he must’ve been planning this part of the lesson. “This is a snake. Snakes are carnivores, so not even half-prey. They’re venomous, they swallow animals whole—very predatory and dangerous! They’re actually an animal we naturally fear, because they used to eat us; they’re one of humans’ natural predators. See how we’ve been prey?”

I stared at the snake, noticing that it had side-facing, Arxur-like eyes. “How could snakes eat you? They don’t have legs. You could just run away.”

“Well, they could bite you from the grass, and some of their venom paralyzes you or slowly stops your heart. If you’re thinking that’s scary, I’d tend to agree. They also slither way faster than you’d think…as fast as we can run. Some are much bigger than this stuffed animal.”

“I don’t like snakes. This predator should burn, at least?” I folded my wings back, noticing how disappointed Andy looked. “Does the snake even have a useful role, if it hunts you? You said people shouldn’t get eaten.”

“We don’t let humans get eaten; nothing that kept going after us is still alive today, let’s say. We are apex, Cala, for a reason—because we don’t let anyone mess with us. But we don’t burn things because we’re afraid of them. Without snakes, rodent populations would go off the rails. Our crops would die, because the herbivores would eat them. Additionally, snakes are prey for different types of animals—birds being pretty commonly their predators. You’d scare a snake.”

“I wouldn’t eat that gross thing…with ven-um. Yuck!”

“Focus. My point was that their eyes have nothing to do with what they eat, or their character. Neither do ours. Humans lived in trees long ago, and needed depth perception to swing from tree-to-tree. That’s why our eyes are like this. A lot of predators have them too, but it’s for that same reason—judging distances. As birds with a sky view, it suits you to see as wide around as possible, and find a needle in a haystack. So Krakotl eat fish, but have side-facing eyes.”

“We don’t fly around looking for stuff anymore.”

“And we don’t live in trees anymore. Unless there’s evolutionary pressure for our eyes to change, they won’t. I guess that’s my last item to teach you today. Are you familiar with natural selection: ‘the survival of the fittest?’”

I jabbed a wingtip toward him in accusatory fashion. “I know those words! Mama talked about the Ark-sur. Predators leave people who can’t survive on their own to die instead of helping them, and call it ‘survival of the fittest!’”

“That is not what it means; we view human life as valuable, and take care of our own. Let’s say we lived in the wilds though, and snakes were still hunting us. Imagine they’re less likely to eat humans with…blond hair, for some reason. Less chance of being attacked, less chance of them dying to snake predation compared to the others. Right?”

“Yeah.”

“Blond hair would be an advantageous trait, right?”

“You mean it’d help not to get eaten, Andy?”

“That is what I mean. So if blond hair helps survive from snake attacks, then these people are more likely to be…alive, to have cute kids like you. Then, there’s a higher percentage of the next generation that has that good trait. That’s all natural selection means: that having the best traits possible to survive means you get increasingly more of those traits going forward, because they’re the best ones for surviving.”

“So you just meant our eyes would change if it really helped Krakotl survive better?”

“You get it, Cala! Very good. It doesn’t mean that we let anyone die. It just means they have better odds against nature, which is a lot less forgiving when you don’t have controlled cities, machines, and antibiotics.”

“Okay.” Feeling tired of the lesson, I played with the snake, dragging it across the floor to imagine how it slithered. “Can I color now?”

“Sure, if you want to. Or…now that you know about humans and animals better, we could watch cartoons on my holopad? It might help you understand life on Earth better.”

“Really? You’d let me do that?” I never got to watch cartoons with Papa, so I had to sneak episodes of Young Exterminators at the guild, when Mama went away on the truck. They thought kids’ entertainment was annoying and silly; watching stuff like that meant I wasn’t mature, or ready to be in the guild. “You’d watch kid stuff with me?”

“Of course I would.”

“I didn’t know grown-ups did that. Papa said it’d teach me to be more loud, and he didn’t want to listen to it. He said…I ruined everything.”

Andrew’s eyes darkened, almost as much as when I first told him my age. “That’s not true, Cala. You were a very good kid, and it’s not your fault that your father was mean. There’s nothing wrong with doing stuff that’s fun for you, and most rational adults like seeing you happy. You deserve to be a kid, and I’d say you’ve more than earned it. I picked out a few of my favorites from years ago. Come here.”

I dropped the snake immediately, hopping onto the seated human’s lap. Andrew chuckled as I bounced up and down, trilling with excitement. The hunter ran a hand down my neck feathers, which felt nice and soothing; I liked Andy’s “nurture instincts.” Even if he was only half-prey, the guard hadn’t seemed that different from us; I guess that made sense if we both were omnivores. I wanted to keep making him proud of how fast I was learning, so he’d bring me more cool toys and fun stuff! My new papa had made me much less lonely, and he was the only reason my days weren’t cold and empty; plus, he knew everything, with answers that were much more thorough than the exterminators’ teachings. Maybe if I got better enough, he could forget the bad thing I did and be happy again.

Since the humans had only wanted to be friends and bring mangoes, I thought it was wrong to hurt them. Whatever Mama said, not all predators were supposed to burn—I was sure of it.

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A/N - Part 3! Andy has been busy teaching Cala zoology: explaining what omnivores were, ecosystem roles, and which traits actually identified predator versus prey, beyond the simplistic Federation divide. He explains that humans are both omnivores and pack predators, while also breaking the news that Krakotl were omnivores; Cala agrees with his explanation that she’s not evil, so humans could have feelings too. Andrew concludes the lesson by talking about natural selection, and an example of a predator with side-facing eyes: the murder noodle.

What do you think of how Andrew is teaching Cala, and her responses to what she’s learned so far? Do you think our narrator finally getting to be a child, and being allowed to play and enjoy kids’ entertainment, will endear her further to her “new papa?”

As always, thank you for reading and supporting!

Comments

un_pogaz

Big leap in time, thank you. And Andrew is pedagogue, thanks too. Very good idea and excellent strategy on Andrew's part to get Cala used to the concept of prey/predator/omnivore before telling her about the omnivorous Krakotl, it completely tore her indoctrinassions apart. She'll hang on a bit longer, but she'll easily let go of the last shreds with time (damn, I'm thinking coldly, but it's the right thing to do). Nevertheless, all this remains theoretical, the real test will be to bring her in front of a dog, or maybe better a cat for reduce the size difference. Otherwise, this is the second time we've learned that Cala's father is behaving criminally towards his daughter. Where is he? I just want to talk with him, and absolutly not try some new giant KFC recipe, I swear.

Mari

Cala is so precious she deserves the world.

ColdBlooded Network

I'm really hoping this is all happening with other elements of the prison. That Andrew got permission from the warden and staff to do this. The fact that we haven't heard from these elements feels like a sword hanging over our heads. And I don't know if our hearts will survive when it drops. But it is comforting that the story is being told through the eyes of a child who might not recognize nor notice these elements in play. As for the actual story. I find It Refreshing Based in real emotion. Thank you for the read.

ColdBlooded Network

Also. Her father needs to be in a cell with her mother and that child needs Therapy.

Sci-fi reader

Poor Cala was abused by her parents, and taken advantage of by her government. Wonder where she winds up in the NOP2 timeline? Sentient rights lawyer? Psychotherapist?

Byron Ritchie

Man even by fed standards cala’s “parents” are pretty crappy At least she’s already calling Andrew papa that’s pretty cute Also Andrew should show her Rio considering krakotl are said to resemble the Spix macaws from the movie (granted only in the sense they’re blue but still)

Kevo

We just want him under our wings

PhycoKrusk

Her mother and father are in the worst cell of all; an Arxur's stomach.

Some Lvm

The original Tom and Jerry.

PhycoKrusk

Cala is an experiment. The fact that Andrew was able to bring in all this stuff, and is able to be in her cell watching cartoons with her while giving her zoology lessons just about proves it: Whether he is aware of it or not, Andrew's purpose in there with Cala is to test and find effective deprogramming techniques.

Michael Halpern

I suspect the sperm donor was digested by Arxur. as for pet sizes remember Maine Coons can grow large enough to probably eat Chihuahua, they probably wouldnt but still best not to generalize that

DreamEnvoy

Aww, Cala consisers Andrew her new papa. And Andrew is such a great and patient teacher. Now I'm worried this is setup for something bad to happen (unless this really IS just a fully wholesome story)

Some Lvm

That is an interesting concept, and it does fit with what we have learned so far about their environment...

Elliott

Now that everyone's thoroughly enjoying Cala learning and getting a new papa. I think nows the best time to butt-in and play devil's advocate for the Feds like I usually do. So for starters, Andrew brought up a great point about us not tolerating predators which wouldn't leave us alone. Predators who NEED or prefer us over other animals have got to go, and did. Similarly it seems due to most xenos being physically weaker than their predator counterparts in this galaxy, they were not able to properly remove these problematic predators whom would hunt them. So naturally the fear of them never subsided, if you could get eaten on your way home from work. So by the time they reached industrialization it would stand to reason they'd be fine with getting rid of these 'pests' in inhumane ways the same way we inhumanely exterminate bugs or rodents. Of course for most this was done by the Federation but you can see how most would be fine with it, especially if you didn't need a predator population to control the environment since less predators and less prey helped you get more food since you eat plants. I feel it is now a good time to mention that most planets are also without most predators, atleast on land that is, and they have been for ATLEAST over 300-500 years now without complete ecological collapse. What Andrew says about predators controlling prey populations IS correct on most of our planet but it isn't a universal rule. Some prey species can regulate population easily by other means (but the most common is territorialness and land competition). So if Nishtal is still fine without predators after like 500 years it's safe to assume they weren't required in most of their planet's land ecosystems. That or the prey populations plateau'd like the human population has today after a spike. What I'm getting at here is that Andrew's lessons for Cala are good, but shouldn't be phrased as universal rules or laws like physics. We as readers really like to judge the Federation races with a terrestrial lens but I find their circumstances and choices very interesting and completely alien to our own.

Sworishina

Glad we finally got confirmation the Krakotl weren't just scavengers like the other omnivore fed species

Space Paladin

Perhaps we’ll have a follow-up at some point to see how Cala grows up!

pogman

macdonald employee

EliasArt2Life

I’m interested in what Cala’s reaction would be to finding out that some humans keep snakes as pets. Also, what she’d think of having nature sanctuaries for tigers, a predator that was once one of our most deadly rivals. When we realized that we had nearly driven them to extinction, we started protecting them instead. Finally, how she’d react to dogs and cats; two predators that we decided to live with. Especially dogs. Maybe Cala would like a dog friend someday.

EliasArt2Life

Okay, it’s been a LOOONNNGG time since it was posted, and this is the second miniseries in a row involving an alien who doesn’t know about it, so I went and copied Cilany’s Interview with Nikonus. I’ve edited it to reflect what the average person would see (so none of Sovlin’s inner thoughts, and changing Sovlin’s first person to third person). Even still, it’s like half the chapter. I’m posting it in the reply to this comment. Click the “Load Replies” button at your own risk. Hopefully, it can be a nice refresher, and help keep in context just how much of this is “news” to these characters.

EliasArt2Life

“I stand by my request for answers on the refugee crisis, Chief Nikonus!” the Harchen reporter shouted. “The Federation’s disagreement, and violence toward each other, has left people with no faith in their government.” The elderly Kolshian ambled toward the exit. “Am I to worry about the people’s faith now?” “Yes. It’s a matter of time before someone, maybe at my publication, runs with the info I have. It would be extremely damaging to the Federation. Trust me, you need to sit down with me, if you want to maintain stability.” Nikonus paused. “In my office. Go quietly,” he decided. The Kolshian guards shoved [Cilany, Sovlin, Berna, and Talpin] forward on their leader’s order, digging a rifle butt into [Sovlin’s] shoulder. The lift descended to the lowest floor, which housed the original suite belonging to the Kolshians. Nikonus signaled for his guards to stay outside, and he sealed the doors once [everyone] entered his office. Next came a polite tentacle gesture toward a sofa. [Sovlin sat down.] Berna shared a glance with Talpin. “Humans are wonderful caretakers, Nikonus. They have nurturing instincts that rival our own.” “I’ll skip the niceties. You two were brought here to sway votes, and I have little time for mind games,” the Chief said. Talpin pounded away at his synthesizer. “Damn you! We want the Federation to offer us asylum. Why haven’t you done anything for us?” “The predators could’ve sent you to their friends, the Paltans; they take the most refugees of anyone in the galaxy. We would be happy to coordinate with them.” “The Paltans are on the opposite side of Federation space, and you know that. They’re a month of travel time away!” Berna spat. The Kolshian chief stood, and walked to the door with brisk strides. He whispered something to the guards, who dragged the refugees out by the arm. Nikonus settled back down behind his desk. “I will not be guilt-tripped into bringing human spies to live with us! Cilany, what is it that you think you know about the Federation?” “I have witnesses who say that you gave the voters for diplomatic relations faulty ships. Forensic evidence confirms their tale,” Cilany hissed. “You set out to kill Federation diplomats in cold blood, just for speaking with the predators. Furthermore, you made the Takkan representative disappear, because he saw your plot.” “Bold, yet foolish, accusations. A person who did such things could make you disappear too, my dear.” “If I don’t contact my people within a few days, that story will be run as it is. Simply with the tagline; reporter vanishes after questioning Kolshian misconduct. A cover-up would confirm your guilt, but I want to help make this go away. You need Sovlin and I to protect the Federation’s interests. You know we’d pick you all over those ugly predators.” “How much do you know?” Nikonus asked. Cilany flicked her tongue in anticipation. “Everything. I know you deleted the first contact files from the records. The Arxur have emotional intelligence and artwork. The Federation saw those traits in humans, when we observed them the first time, but only recorded the negative attributes. I get that you wanted Recel dead for treason. Why didn’t you just execute him and the Terran ambassador on Aafa?” [Nikonus’] pupils darted toward the door, as though he was considering summoning the guards. Nikonus’ bulbous eyes narrowed. “The people recognize me as a reasonable leader, who gave a predator the chance to speak. Gunning down a pleading representative, in front of cameras, makes people question our morality. The exact reason that what Sovlin did is a terrible look. Everyone said I was more than fair to Noah. I even fed and provided for the human.” Determination sparkled in Cilany’s gaze. “You didn’t fully answer my question. Also, why wait until the diplomats were out of Kolshian territory for the shuttle malfunction?” “Out of sensor range. Everyone, including their governments, would assume the predator killed them. Nobody saw what happened, and the people don’t need to know.” “Why not? Because you hate humans, and never intended for them to get a real chance?” “I don’t hate humans, but their diplomatic efforts cannot succeed. Look at the disaster that is the Venlil. How many civilians want to see humans attending our meetings; walking these grounds, living here? Also, our people would start asking questions about predators that we don’t want them to ask.” Cilany palmed her chin. “Federation citizens shouldn’t ask questions about how first contact with the Arxur really went? We have it on good faith that you starved the grays to death.” “You must not run that storyline!” the Chief hissed, leaping from his seat. “It would do irreparable damage to general morale…and it’s not the whole truth. You’re a good journalist, Cilany, not someone who lives on shock value. Any reporter worth their salt isn’t trying to disintegrate the Federation.” “WHAT DID YOU DO?!” [Sovlin] charged across the desk at Nikonus. [His] claws were by his throat, pinning him against the chair. “You move an inch and I’ll tug your esophagus through your jawbone!” The Kolshian blinked. “C-calm down. You are quite unstable, Sovlin; your monkey pals have done a number on you.” “FUCK YOU! They’re not monkeys, any more than you’re an ectolan. It’s a distant evolutionary link, a term you use to desapientize them. Start talking your heart out, or I’ll carve you up.” Cilany tugged at [Sovlin’s] arm. “Please stop; you’re scaring me. Nikonus is cooperating. Don’t you want to hear what he has to say?” “The Arxur say that you tried to make them allergic to meat.” [Sovlin] took a deep breath, and backed away from the Kolshian. “I didn’t understand what it was saying, but I think it meant they starve without flesh.” “You talked to a gray?” Nikonus’ voice leapt up an octave, before he collected himself. “I’m disappointed in you, Sovlin. You used to be a good officer…now, you’re a complete disgrace. Your family would be disgusted with the company you keep.” “You know nothing about my family. TALK, JUST FUCKING TALK, NOW!” The Kolshian sighed. “There were three of us who laid out the groundwork for the Federation. When Kolshian explorers came in contact with the Farsul, more than a thousand years ago, the galaxy was young. We were the first in this sector to escape our gravity well. You know about the founding of this institution, but I reiterate it just in case.” “The Krakotl were the third,” Cilany offered. “Yes, they were a problem from the start; aggressive, disagreeable. We tried to identify the problem, and why they were so ill-equipped for spacefaring. We learned they were scavengers, who would occasionally go for fish as well. We were more level-headed because we’re herbivores.” [Sovlin’s] jaw almost hit the floor. “We gave them a choice: take our cure, or we would wipe them out with a bioweapon. It was an easy choice for them. We brought them to be re-educated in camps, and the new religions were the algae on the fruit mash. They had to hate predators, or they’d find a way to revert back.” Cilany bore an aghast expression. “You invented the Cult of Inatala?” “Beliefs, religious or not, are the best way to control people. We planted fake archaeological texts, and rewrote their history. They’ve become a productive race. Harder to control now, but the cultural changes stuck. They have an enemy…a purpose.” “Do the Krakotl have any idea what was done to them?” “The Krakotl don’t know this, obviously…that would be cruel, Cilany. It’s a closely-guarded secret of the highest-ranking Farsul and Kolshians. The process is down to a science, more subtle these days. We keep peace, and give grotesque races a chance at normalcy.” “Races? Plural?” [Sovlin] echoed. A sadistic glint surfaced in his pupils, though it was gone a second later. “Yes, I’ll get to that. We learned a hard lesson about giving full-on predator races the same chance; hunting and scavenging are different. Hunting, being an actual predator, means unchecked war and violence,” he explained. “The grays asked us for help with their food problem, then refused to try herbivory. Their arrogance is why they starved.” Cilany narrowed her eyes. “You also killed their cattle to be sure.” “They’ve shouted that one from the rooftops before. Blatantly untrue. We don’t kill herbivore animals… we’re not predators. That’s just absurd!” [Sovlin] swallowed in discomfort. “There’s others in the Federation that used to eat meat? You said you’d get to that.” “Oh Sovlin, I already told you. For the small minority of species who don’t find herbivory alone, we teach them the right way. Doesn’t the religion against predators sound familiar?” [Sovlin] sank to [his] knees, and stared at [his] lengthy claws in horror. [Sovlin] puked all over Nikonus’ feet. The Kolshian leader massaged [the Gojid’s] neck. “Oh, it’s alright. We fixed your species…one of the most successful conversions. Chalk it up as something you have in common with the upright apes.” Cilany was giving [Sovlin] [a] petrified look. “No. You’re lying,” [Sovlin] whimpered. “I am not. See, Cilany? It’s cruel.” The reporter’s eyes watered. “I don’t know what to say. This is a lot at once.” [Sovlin] crumpled into a ball, letting [his] tears drip to the floor. Nikonus leaned forward. “Now, you see why it’s important to protect these secrets. People like the Gojids can live in peace from their past. We’ve made it possible for them to walk among us, without threatening stability. We saved them.” “What you did is wrong,” Cilany whispered, shooting a glance at [Sovlin]. “You’ve been conducting genetic engineering, on innocent species, at…I don’t even know how large a scale. Your actions are going to kill us all, between the Arxur and the humans!” “You haven’t learned a thing here. If you publish any of this, I’ll shoot it down as a wild fabrication. There’s no proof. Nobody would believe you.” The Harchen chuckled bitterly, and pointed to her notepad. A tiny camera was taped to the top, blinking yellow. [Sovlin’s] gaze focused on the lens, a desperate plea for help. The Kolshian’s eyes widened with horror, and he slapped a tentacle over his mouth. Cilany cleared her throat. “They don’t have to believe me. You just told everyone yourself.” Nikonus bared his teeth. “What?! Short-sighted bitch! You have no idea what you’ve just done. I should have you both shot!” “Ha, execute us on video. Go ahead. The truth is out there, and you can’t take it back.” There was a certainty in her words, and she knelt beside [Sovlin] without hesitation. [He] let her help [him] stand.

EliasArt2Life

@Space Paladin Please do! Maybe even in the main series; it was fun when we got to see the “Foster Child” characters in the main series of NOP1.

EliasArt2Life

The rules of story writing says that (typically) there has to be conflict, and most of the conflict has vanished. That being said, is it okay if we just keep wishing that it says this lighthearted and wholesome? I don’t think it’s wrong to have a minimal tension story once in a while.

EliasArt2Life

Ugh. Sorry, but I’m going to have to play devils advocate to you devils advocate here… 1) “Predators who NEED or prefer us over other animals have got to go, and did.” like Tigers. One of the rare cases of a species that goes out of its way to get revenge. They hunted us and went out of their way to hunt us for ages. Except they aren’t extinct; in NOP1 there’s still tiger sanctuaries. So, there’s some wiggle room even for those specifically targeting us. 2) humans didn’t beat our predators through being stronger; we were absolutely DWARFED in strength or killing potential by many of our predators. We just developed tools that made that a moot point. So did the species of the Federation. Their relative strength doesn’t really matter here. 3) I believe it was stated, or at least heavily implied, in NOP1 that the reason that there hasn’t been any ecological collapse was because the Federation was keeping their planets on life support with their superior tech. I believe Slanek even referenced some of the ecological problems Skalga had while he was mocking humanity’s ecological beliefs. Thinking about it, that’s probably another side effect of the cyber attacks; without technology to keep the environment on life support, those planets probably began to fall apart. Not fast enough to do irreparable damage, but enough cause problems.

PhycoKrusk

That's just it, though: We _don't_ know if Nishtal was "fine." We haven't seen it. Just like with most planets. However, most xenos in canon appear to be taken by Earth's beauty and especially its vibrancy when seen from space, which suggests very strongly that Earth is, in fact, an anomaly in this regard and no Federation world has this appearance. For arid planets like Fahl, this might well make sense, but for a wetland planet like Nishtal, it wouldn't. It's not hard evidence, but it certainly suggests that Nishtal's ecosystems were not "fine."

Edward ward

by now they'd be in an Arxur's latrine

un_pogaz

Cala, twenty years later "Hello, I'd like you to meet my pet, here Noodle!"

Ellen

😭😭☺️

Leon Wolf

Poor innocent birb give her a hug or we riot. Also "with looked a bit like a noodle;" think you meant "which" here.

PhycoKrusk

Conflict will arise soon enough; the UN is in this story, after all.

Apogee

Aww cute, the lessons seem to be going well he’s starting simple and working his way up. Hope she gets let out soon, probably a bureaucratic nightmare behind the scenes and there has to be some worry for her safety out in the public

Gumcel

Even if it’s oversimplified, this is a rare moment of a human actually trying to explain basic ecology rather than just going “yeah we’re different than them bro, that’s the only thing that matters.”

Shajenko

She still doesn't know that Nishtal got invaded, so that'll be fun.

Elliott

1. Tigers aren't an example of this. They relatively leave us alone if we don't settle near them or aren't wandering into our territory. 2. We are not "dwarfed" at all, your perception of human strength is a bit jarring. We can launch spears accurately at great distances with a lot of bare strength. To be dwarfed is like a bunny trying to fight a tiger, not a human. No physical strength to even penetrate skin WITH weapons. That's the reality of many in the Federation, a Sivkit could get punted like a football by an Arxur. 3. Without confirmation this doesn't seem likely whatsoever. If the Federation had such poor science on understanding organisms that they didn't know what prions were or basic vitamin science, I seriously doubt they could put an environment on life support. That makes no sense and sounds like you might be misremembering it, I don't recall anything about that other than maybe a throwaway comment that was about dismissing humans understanding, not implying they had some great ecological mega-sciences. But more than that, Nishtal is described as being beautiful by some characters. A far cry from being on life-support if they find our planet about as gorgeous. But one last thing, there's seriously really no need to defend the food chain if it doesn't exist the same as ours on other worlds. Alien evolution provides infinite pathways for growth. The food-chain isn't even universal on Earth, so it stands to reason there's a good chance atleast a few alien planets out there don't strictly follow our natural order.

Elliott

I will try to go back to find examples if I have time, but from what I recall several characters described Nishtal as a tropical beautiful planet. There were many aliens that remarked on Earth similarly but I don't recall any being Krakotl. If you're used to living on one world you're going to be awestruck by another. I'm sure ours is in significantly better condition than most, but it's naive to think we're just the best because a few aliens considered it beautiful.

DrewTheHobo

Man, the blinking camera and he still missed it. He big dumb

PhycoKrusk

He wasn't looking for it, and more importantly, he was so convinced that nobody would try something like that, he never even considered it a possibility; even if he did see it, his brain would've edited it out in real time.

EliasArt2Life

@Elliott 1) Sure, NOW, but not always. 2) your mention of spears suggests that you didn’t understand my argument. A human with no tools vs a tiger, the human loses hands down. No contest. With weapons, humans win. But, as I pointed out, that would be the same for almost any alien species. To use your example, a bunny loses to a tiger, but a bunny with a flamethrower wins easily. 3) Just because they don’t understand predator prey dynamics doesn’t mean that they don’t know anything about ecology. As we’ve seen, they know a lot about some things, and almost none about others.

SnackcakesMcGee

...wait, did that not happen in the first series? I could swear that it was at least referenced at some point.

Brandon Roberto

Creo que se lo explicaron a tarva o a slanek pero no lo comprendieron o lo ignoraron