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Memory Transcription Subject: Taylor Trench, Human Colonist

Date [standardized human time]: December 12, 2160

The past few months had been kind to Gress and I, and also had been the happiest of my life. I hadn’t known what it was like to kick back my shoes, without the fear of what tomorrow might bring. The quiet, peaceful life off the radar suited me. Taking leisurely walks on the orbital rings, and staring down at Avor like it was a scenic river to stroll alongside: it gave me a serene sense of calm. Before knowing who the Krev really were, I hadn’t been to space since the ark ship’s journey. The cosmos’ beauty couldn’t be appreciated under those panicky circumstances, by oneself. Sometimes, nine-year-old Taylor had looked at the stars and saw his tiny fingers pressed against the glass, wondering which direction of emptiness Earth was even in. I thought I’d left our home forever, but the Consortium had given me a brief hope of going back.

Even though we might’ve failed, given that Radai told me months ago that our drones never made contact, I appreciated feeling hope for the future—if only for a brief flicker. I’d tasted that little bit more I wanted from life, and seen the unimaginable wonders outside of the caverns. Perhaps staring up at the Trinev Mountains on Avor, and gawking at how high the famous snow-capped peaks climbed, wouldn’t have been so moving to others. The Resket general’s frightful words about needing our own arks terrified me. I’d seen what would be lost, if the Krev had to ditch their homeworld; I’d witnessed the sights Lecca took for granted, asking whether we could go home yet. How the little shit didn’t care about literal green geysers, shooting colorful alien water way up into the air, was beyond me.

Maybe I’m acting childish by getting excited about the natural wonders on the Krev world, but I’ve found that I really enjoy the outdoors; I would’ve had no way of knowing. I’m okay with getting carried away over small beauties, especially since we might not have them long.

Gress and I split our time between Avor and Tellus, which meant I came home on a consistent schedule. Not wanting to entirely squander my military training or forsake humanity in an emergency, after enduring a brutal boot camp, I’d taken the Radai’s advice on joining the Tellus militia. I found myself in similar shoes to Cherise, when she’d accompanied me to provide the rent payments. The security gigs I took on were quiet, often watching over Krev-organized sporting contests at our arenas—drawing millions of viewers for that live entertainment. Otherwise, it’d be a quiet patrol on the boardwalk by the artificial waterway, or standing watch over the militia’s small fleet. It was a way to earn a paycheck without strict rules and commitment.

Gress’ obor hung on his back as he met me after a shift, deterring me from standing close to him. “There’s been progress on opening that massage parlor here. Plenty of spare buildings. I think I’ll have the permit in no time.”

“Let’s just hope we’re still here then,” I replied. “It doesn’t look like we’re packing up shop yet, at least. I heard the Krev families who are adopting the human children agreed to move here, into the open buildings. It’ll be crowded in the blink of an eye; that’ll be weird as fuck. I’m not used to the kind of congestion you have in Tonvos, and I don’t know how you live in it.”

“I focus on what matters. Having a faithful…obor with these cute little toes helps!”

“You absolute prick! I thought you were going to say me, not Juvre. He’s all but hanging on top of you, with those grubby mitts.”

“I’m just giving him a ‘piggyback ride.’ I love your human names for things; they’re all so silly and cute! I’d happily give you a piggyback ride too.”

I scoffed. “You couldn’t pick me up.”

“But I did pick you up,” Gress said slyly. “And more on point, I’d happily topple over in the middle of the street to have you try what Juvre is doing here.”

“Hmph. Tell me something that Krev gave a goofy name. I’m tired of you only infantilizing our names for things.”

“Piggyback rides are for children, so what’s wrong with infantilizing it?!”

“Juvre can’t be the only stupid name Krev have picked out. Imagine my surprise when I found that means scout; who the hell names a moronic monkey Scout?! I’d understand Wormpicker, Boogers, or We-Hope-He’s-Potty-Trained.”

Gress huffed with indignation. “Juvre is a perfect name. Obors are scouts; climbing trees, seeing far ahead. Not all primates just walk along the ground and act self-righteous.”

“I act self-righteous?”

“Yes, and by the way, I’ll have you know I trained Juvre myself. You’ve seen that he knows how to use the toilet.”

“And not how to shut the door, or use toilet paper.”

“Because he’s an animal. Why were you watching in such detail?!”

“I was appalled to share the facilities with that nasty little…answer my question! I’m not walking a step further until you give me some dumb names Krev have, so I can infantilize you right back.”

The Krev sighed, before doing his signature fawning look with raised claws off to one side. “We call these ‘happy claws.’ Parents do it to their children to show they’re proud of them, or that they really like something.”

“I’d really like to punch you in the face every time you do that. What else?”

“We sing the…bouncy tail song when our kids get tail rides. It’s cute.”

“Yeah, it is. I’m enjoying this.” I splayed my fingers, raising my hands perpendicular to each other; I positioned the happy claws beside my cheek, trying to do a face of stupid adoration. “Go on.”

“Taylor, seeing a human doing happy claws is not having the effect you want. It’s making you look like you want head pats.”

“No, absolutely not! Bother your obor with that horseshit.”

“I am. Who’s a good boy?” Gress cooed, tapping his palm against Juvre’s skull. “You don’t know what you’re missing, Taylor. There’s no need for that judgmental stare. Hey, wait, is that Quana and Cherise?”

I snorted, not following his claws as he pointed. “I’m not falling for that. Everyone’s gotta pick on gullible Trench.”

“No, I’m serious. Look!”

The Krev physically turned my head toward the Jaslip and my human friend, who were marching down the street like they were heading to battle. I knew that wasn’t the case since the duo weren’t in uniform, and were armed only with pamphlets. Confusion lingered in my mind, wondering just what was up with them; I’d never seen Cherise, of all people, so agitated. I didn’t want to greet her with full foot-in-mouth disease, and tell her that she looked terrible, but something was clearly off with the both of them. It reminded me a bit of how shaken up my reflection had seemed in the mirror, when I realized the miners died in the drilling accident because of me. It was that telltale haunted glint in the eyes that sparked some serious worries for their welfare.

Did Cherise and Quana get themselves into trouble, or am I jumping to conclusions once again? I owe the two of them my life, after they helped rescue me from my kidnapping. I have to at least ask, so I can try to be there for them.

“Quana! Cherise!” I shouted, cupping my hands to my mouth. “I thought you guys were bringing a dose of Christmas to the Krev. When did you come home?”

“Taylor?!” Cherise startled at the sight of me, with the look of a burglar caught breaking into a vault, which elevated my suspicions even further. It seemed like I wasn’t someone she wanted to run into, though she quickly hid the wide-eyed expression. “Um, we’ve been back on Tellus for over two weeks. We got an early start on the festivities. Just like on Earth, as you might remember?”

“I remember my parents saying how everything would jump straight to Christmas, as soon as the clock hit midnight on Thanksgiving evening.  That was an American thing specifically, but I’m sure you had your own version.”

“Right after Halloween, for us. We humans loved our holidays, I guess, enough to celebrate the entire month leading up to it. If anything, I didn’t get started early enough to match Earth’s timeline!”

“You seem nervous, Cherise. I’ve never known you to be excited about…well, anything. You’re usually more snarky and unimpressed. Is everything alright?”

Gress leaned back, a sympathetic look in his eyes. “Ah, I see. You must be shaken up by the bombing. It’s a difficult feeling to describe, when you’ve just been somewhere that a thing like that happens. Horrific.”

“What? How did you…?” Quana yipped, voice climbing in pitch. 

“The adorable pictures I saw on social media. I already ordered a Santa hat for Taylor…” Gress quickly changed his tone as he noticed my glower, as he fought himself not to raise his claws. “…so that he can have his human traditions back openly, of course. I’m glad you two weren’t there when it happened. We’re all reeling; the delegates slain in broad daylight. Hathaway in critical condition. Who would do such a brutish thing, and foster disorder?”

Cherise shoved a pamphlet into my hands. “I’m not condoning violence, but I might know the why. Look at these photographs; these are from scouts in Federation space. The Consortium is hiding the fact that we lost every ship that fought at Nishtal and Talsk. The only decapitation part of this decapitation strike is our own, self-inflicted disaster, leaving us vulnerable. They don’t want us to know.”

I staggered backward in surprise, recognizing enough of the sensor data to grasp the truth. “Radai was right. He knew something was wrong. He wanted to start building our own arks; we are going to have to leave again. Oh fuck! There’s nothing stopping them from coming back for round two, stronger than before. We can’t take them out, and they’ll find us. We should all pack our bags, right now.”

“Calm down, Taylor. We don’t need panic and in-fighting, which this whole…terrorist attack seems designed to set off,” Gress commented. “How did you two get this?”

“I was told by some old friends at home, and agreed to pass along the video on Tellus. I don’t know their source,” Quana said, though her ears twitched like that wasn’t the whole truth. Our friends’ behavior was quite strange. “We can’t let the Consortium hide their failure, the way they hid the truth about those kits.”

I shook my head. “Let’s not talk about the kits, Quana; it’s a sensitive topic for Gress, and it won’t do any good to get into it.”

“I agree. Let’s talk about something else.” Cherise butted in to change the subject, much too quickly. “You, in a bulletproof vest that says security, Trench? Never thought I’d see the day. I didn’t think we were…cut from the same cloth.”

“We’re not. You’re tougher than me, and I’m cool with that. But really, don’t try to distract me. You can’t just drop that we’re losing the war, show leaked drone footage, then leave it at that. I need details. How much do you know?”

“Enough to know that the Consortium might not let us go. Not after they invested all of this in Tellus’ metropolises.”

“And what exactly is it that you intend to accomplish by passing out these pamphlets? What do you want to do about it?” Gress pressed.

Quana narrowed her eyes. “We want humanity to have a choice, and all the facts.”

“But he’s right. What would the two of you propose to be done with this? Are you planning to get the old miners’ strike together, or sneak off into the night…” My holopad buzzed, and out of the corner of my eye, I noticed that it was General Radai. I thought I’d heard the last of the general, when he began digging up Listener cases. If anyone could give me answers about the war, it’d be him. “I’ve got to take this. We’ll finish this in a second.”

Gress peered over my shoulder with curiosity, and readied himself to eavesdrop when he saw the caller. We all were anxious for news, but Cherise and Quana were acting too jumpy to be invited to speak with Radai. I turned my back to the duo, and walked a few paces away. As I shot a glance over my shoulder to see if I was out of earshot, taking into account how acute a Jaslip’s hearing was, I noticed the two were already gone. Why had our friends run off so quickly, despite my wish to finish our conversation? I couldn’t shake the feeling that there was more they weren’t telling us; they were hiding something. It wasn’t my business to pry, but I was a little stung that they didn’t trust us. We’d been through a lot together.

I don’t know what they’ve gotten themselves into, but it’s something that involves “friends” of Quana giving them classified drone intel. Holy shit, what if those friends are the Jaslip extremists behind the bombing? I hope that’s not racist, but like, who the fuck else would have leaked military information?

“No wonder Cherise thought she knew why they did the bombing!” I hissed to Gress, eyes bulging. “She talked to the people who did it to get that information.”

The Krev tilted his head. “What?”

“I’ll explain later. Gotta answer Radai’s call.” I swiped accept on the incoming call, wondering if he was calling to update us on what we’d given him. “Hello, sir?”

“Taylor Trench,” the Resket acknowledged. “I thought you and Gress would like an update on the criminals I’ve exposed. The Listeners have not been happy with my requests to publicize their surveillance information in these instances, despite me framing it as a way to show the people we’re in control—and that we can protect them. I’ve heard rumblings that they considered having me…assassinated.”

Gress drew in a sharp breath. “If they wanted you gone, surely they would’ve just done it. The Listeners go after any who challenge them. Why didn’t they? Is it that you’re too important? Have…have they traced it back to us?”

“There’s a reason I’m scrambling the data on this call. I’m no fool. I haven’t been…”

“Wait, I thought the delegates, except Frenelda and Hathaway, were killed in the bombing. You’re the Resket representative,” I butted in.

“Still interrupting me when I’m talking, Trench? My stand-in was killed. I haven’t been going to the Consortium meetings since hearing Mafani’s claim. I’ve been concealing my whereabouts since I started digging into those files, and I have been guarded at all times by honorable soldiers I trust, though I have no doubt the Listeners could find me nonetheless. Perhaps my use is to be the fall guy for this disaster of a war. My mind was burdened enough without feeling paranoia over my own government.”

“Disaster of a war?” I prompted.

“Don’t play dumb. I know that some wiseass punk jumped the gun, and leaked my footage to half of Tellus. You must’ve heard.”

“I did. I…wanted to see if you’d say anything. Why haven’t you told people?”

“That’s not the news you tell people until, one, you can offer them an in-place, thorough plan on how to deal with it. Without a solution provided, you will have blind panic. You have to give them guidance, assure them that you’re in control. The burden of leadership requires that you maintain order, and trust in the hierarchy.”

Gress sighed. “The Consortium hasn’t given any of us much trust in the hierarchy.”

“And now we can’t even trust their military strength. If they can’t take on the Federation, who can? Knowing that it’s true, that we lost so many ships…” I lamented.

The Resket sighed with frustration. “I’ve lost the entire Consortium because we didn’t scout our enemy’s capabilities. On Tanet, you told me not to lose hope because we didn’t know the drones were gone, but now, I’m filled with a crushing dread. I want you to know I’m sorry for my failures, shamefully carrying out my duties. It was my sincere belief that I could keep humanity safe.”

“You don’t have to apologize, sir. I’m…at a loss, but thank you for telling me the truth. I knew you were honorable.”

A growl rumbled in Gress’ throat. “So that’s it?! You’re just giving up, Radai? What happened to the burden of leadership, and finding a solution?”

“I’m not giving up on anything other than victory in this war,” the Resket responded. “I have to ensure that we have a future, no matter what we might have to…give up in the coming days. I know how much the hope of a future means to humanity, and as a favor to you, I wanted to offer you two a chance to be a part of it. We all need something to hope for.”

“We’re not a part of the military anymore. Taylor was clear about choosing another path, and he deserves to have his wishes respected. I’m not sure what could be offered to us.”

“The next generation of humans will be ready shortly; someone will need to transfer their tubes from Valle to Tellus for delivery, and unite them with their adoptive families. The shipment’s security is critical. I entrusted this duty to the Tellus militia, since this great moment should belong to humanity. Knowing full well that Taylor is part of their ranks, my condition was that you and Gress are included in the first flight off the Trombil homeworld. Would that suit your wishes?”

“You did that…for me, sir?” I could feel my own eyes lighting up, at the thought of kickstarting the millions of babies that would bring humanity back from the brink of extinction. My eyes turned toward Gress, who made the happy claws gesture at me. “We’d love to be a part of that. I’m touched; this means so much to us. Finally, I can help save humanity…protect our future. It’s everything.”

Gress coughed sheepishly. “I wanted to preserve humanity from the moment Taylor lifted his mask. Thank you for including me as well, even after, you know, what I did back in that bunker.”

“It’s not a problem,” Radai replied. “It might be short-lived, but there’ll be a city filled with humans on Tellus for at least a moment. In spite of everything, my promise to restore your species stands. There’ll be thousands of babies in the cargo hold, promising that life must go on. Let us protect what matters most now.”

A toothy grin spread across my face, as I found myself buzzing with excitement. “I’ll guard the children with my life, sir. I can’t wait to bring them to Tellus. Thousands…that’s wonderful! It’ll be the most humans I’ve seen since the ark ships left.”

“Get used to it—and get your ass to the spaceport. You’ll have to leave at once. Good luck, Trench.”

I stood starstruck as General Radai disconnected from the call, before fist-bumping the air and hollering with delight. My giddiness was uncontainable, at the thought that humanity’s numbers would no longer be a few thousand survivors. The reality that we’d be leaving Tellus, and had lost to the Federation again, was devastating, but this was enough to give me hope. There was new life, replenishing all that had been lost; we had to do whatever it took to ensure that miracle survived. While it was going to be a difficult road ahead, Gress and I were bringing something beautiful to our colony in the immediate future.

A/N - 62! Taylor and Gress have enjoyed a quiet life, splitting time between Avor and Tellus, and with our narrator taking odd jobs for the militia. The duo are hassling each other about cute names for Krev actions, when they come across Cherise and Quana, handing out pamphlets about the Consortium’s lost battles; Taylor picks up on their odd behavior and nervousness at seeing him, and begins to suspect their extremist ties. 

Our narrator doesn’t get to question Quana and Cherise, since General Radai calls—surviving the bombing due to avoiding KC government meetings. He tells Trench that the war is lost, and he suspects his assassination was considered, but averted since he’s useful as a fall guy. The Resket sends Taylor and Gress to safeguard the initial arrival of human babies on Tellus, giving them some hope.

Do you think that Taylor and/or Gress will figure out what Cherise and Quana have been up to? Will the Consortium pack their bags and get on arks; do you agree with and trust Radai’s answer for why he’s yet to make an announcement? What will happen with millions of artificial human babies, brought to Tellus and give to alien families?

As always, thank you for reading and supporting!

Comments

pogman

print Path: First

Alex

Third

Alex

This trip to Romania has finally given me the lead I never had back in California.

Swan

Guess we know what ship’s gonna get boarded

TheBlack2007

"It’s good to be European" Seriously though, new chapters coming out around lunchtime is pretty neat.

Alekss Žukovskis

and its a timeskip, so i feel very itchy about exactly this.

Quiidek

I really hope nothing happens to those children.

Alex

I’m doing a VBS at the bread of life boarding school in Broșteni, the kids really liked learning doge ball today and I’m certain they’re going to invent a way to add kicking the balls to it. May be my fault if there’s a Romanian professional dodgeball industry in a few years.

Alex

With the currency conversion, everything is really cheap to me. Since I specifically came to help however I can, I kind of hope to be ripped off or pay more because I’m a tourist.

Pineapplepilot

"Put a hole in the side of that cargo ship to show them we mean business" sp I swear to god don't do it

Hello There

I wonder how long it’ll be when Taylor finds out that Earth lived. Probably on the ship

REDemon14

Happy that Taylor and Gress get some happy moments. I think they both deserve it. Cherish and Quana are not in too good of a shape. The stress must be doing a number on them. Radai lives! : D He's upset the Listeners. God thing he has stand ins and loyal men to guard him. A ship full of babies! And Taylor and Gress get to escorts them. Gress is gonna suffer cuteness overload. Here's hoping nothing bad happens to the ship

kenneth Moore

Hey SP! Any chance you’ll be releasing book two of the physical version of NoP anytime soon?

Dookus Maximus

Taylor figured out what was going on with Cherise and Quana entirely too quickly.

Wingit98

Couldn't be happier that Radai is still alive. Also, I feel this chapter was really telling Cherise and Quana that Radai already planned to make their own ark ships to get us and the Jaslips out of there, making the bombing kinda pointless.

Swan

“Fire a warning shot into the cargo bay”

Aerowarrier

I have a bad feeling that the transport ship for those babies is gonna be the one that gets boarded by the Coalition forces. Imagine their surprise when they find thousands of human babies in tubes like some kind of sick science experiment as far as they know

Neu5Ac

Trench calling Lecca a little shit because she's a five year old child who's bored on a nature hike? Man, every time I feel like I'm starting to not hate him, he finds a way to make sure I do. He's like a spastic dog: not to be trusted around children and small animals. I thought that Radai might go the way of Punished Snake, but it seems he's instead doing this the Roy Mustang way: uncover, anticipate, and outmaneuver the conspiracy hidden within the government with the cunning of a chess grandmaster. Now we just need to see him in a fight so he can prove he's not just strategic genius desk jockey general, but a formidable warrior too.

sticksnstones

Well, you slink around like a paranoid meth head spouting government secrets right after the major government building you visited gets bombed by terrorists, plus Taylor knows Quana has some connections.

DemonVee

Oooo, I think I know which ship gets boarded in a few chapters. Would be no other way to build more tragedy from the Krev perspective "The ship carrying Humanities salvation was lost, like destroyed by the dreaded federation." I wonder what the play will be with the exterminators, maybe it will turn out the underscales were somehow involved with it. One other thing is the ship that the Krev will board, I wonder if it will be the same situation. Meier/Tassi transporting "quinix" over from Earth. And the KC finds a boat manned by carnivore birds, full of baby Jaslips.

DreamEnvoy

"The past few months had been kind to Gress and I, and also had been the happiest of my life." As soon as I read that I expected something bad to happen this chapter. Yet, it's mostly good news. Happy Radai is alive.

Byron Ritchie

Can’t believe sp was able to resist his hatred for birds and not kill off radai yet despite the opportunity Not complaining though 😄

Gumcel

Ok if even Taylor is able to see through your bullshit immediately you know you’re fucked (Okay I’m mostly joking; Taylor isn’t actually that stupid but it’s still fun to mock him).

Gumcel

Well I figured he called her a little shit because she has decidedly been a little shit whenever she’s been on screen.

Garrett Knox

Still can’t wait for when the “feds” aka SC and the consortium realize there are humans on both sides… the story is obv going that way but the build up is killing me. My sneaky suspicion is that once realizing that the “feds” have humans, the consortium might hold Tellus hostage to secure their own protection

Space Paladin

Why kill Radai when he can suffer the weight of his sins?

Swan

We’re below quota for number of dead children in this sequel; gotta pump those numbers up

Taliesyn

Warning shots aren't ever fired at things, just near them. Contrary to what the movies show, military rounds don't stop at superficial damage when hitting civilian vehicles.

Aured

I hope we get a glimpse of the future with the Consortium raised humans and the SC raised jaslips. I expect there'll be some serious culture shock when they finally interact with their counterparts

AlphaAllNight Gaming

I hate Cherise and Quana so much rn, they’ve just murdered dozens of people, not to mention they most definitely have killed at the least one innocent person with their terrorist attack, and they’re trying to take the moral high ground of “ we’re exposing what they don’t want us to know” whilst lying through their teeth about where they got the info why they’re giving out pamphlets and not to mention THEY’RE LITERALLY TERRORISTS. *gasping for breath* In unrelated news I’ve started a new hashtag #hangcheriseandquanatheydeserveittheyreterrorists

Space Paladin

Cherise and Quana were acting noticeably…suspicious 😅

Space Paladin

Hi! I hope to have a book 2 out eventually, the rewrites will be much more extensive 🙏 thank you for your interest!

DemonVee

Something I forgot to mention, I'm 100% certain that the underscales have at least partial control over the Jaslip terrorists.

Pineapplepilot

Bro idk man I kinda vibe with that decision. If you were from where I was from, you'd wanna bomb some politicians too

AlphaAllNight Gaming

Fair ‘nuf, but personally, I don’t see how citizens committing full blown terrorism is good for the longevity of any sovereign nation. But, I may just be an uncultured swine.

DrewTheHobo

Biggest issue is y’all need to check your damn homework! The Sivkits I can understand, cause they’re skittish and have been brain bombed, but intelligence is key. I wonder if the scout ship is going to capture all the babies in transit and be very confused lol

Neu5Ac

Again, she's 5. The worst she's done that we and Trench have seen is try to give him commands like a pet, and I can't really blame her for that given how Gress (and the Krev in general) have been treating humans. She's headstrong and somewhat combative, sure, but it's not like she pitches tantrums in public or destroys things, so calling her a shit is excessively hostile, especially when the impetus was that she complained about being bored over something that tends to bore children. I agree that I would like to see her during her well-behaved moments, though; it's not fun to only see her misbehaving.

Roscuro

I'm sure the sc infiltration ships won't hot the baby carrier. That would never happen.

PhycoKrusk

Unfortunately, the bombing actually served as important goal: Hathaway is still alive, for whatever little that's worth, and Frenelda is too, although she's probably out of the picture. But what's most important of all is that Radai is still alive. See comment below for more.

PhycoKrusk

The most important thing to come out of this whole debacle is that Radai is still alive. The question will soon come, "Why were you sending a stand-in?" We know the answer is because he didn't trust the Listeners and the Underscales not to have him removed. But critically, Radai also has the information that the Listeners set up the incident that saw Gress disgraced, and that the Underscales had at least one agent present to make sure none of those kits made it out alive. If you recall, a Jaslip separatist cell was tied up in making that happen. Just like a Jaslip separatist cell was tied up in making this happen. Even if it's not totally correct, Radai has all the evidence he needs to sell the public on the idea that the Listeners and Underscales pose just as much of an existential threat to them as the Federation does. The Jaslips have certainly proven that they _can_ be dangerous, but then he has the evidence to show that they were being manipulated by the Listeners against the Consortium. If he works for it, he has everything he needs to tell the public that every major tragedy that has happened, from terrorist attacks to the Tonvos Tower bombing to even the Massacre of Esquo can be laid squarely at the feet of what is effectively a shadow government that has been turning the Consortium against itself to maintain their power. It's time to _break_ the power once and for all. It won't be easy, not with so many wounds ripped open in society by the degenerate few, but it will be done, and the path will be opened to a future where the Consortium can truly come together. Unity in the face of adversity. Community in the face of uncertainty. And the strength and courage toward push to a new dawn, where all are one. #RadaiforShogun

Guardian

I, too, have interest in physical editions.

Lokyar

Why not? It's perfect for shock value and misunderstandings. The SC's reaction when they board a ship guarded by mostly humans, who's cargo is human embryos or children would be extreme, and the KC reaction to a "federation" strike on a human ship would be intense, whether it was completely captured or managed to fight off a black ops ship without any humans on the crew. The only positive way this goes down is if the KC ship manages to make first contact with a human member of the black ops crew, and then continue to Tellus to report... honestly I don't see that as likely. Too much can be solved too easily, and the potential failure states too juicy to be passed up.

Roscuro

I was being facetious, I'm fully expecting that's the ship to be captured rather than just some random ship.

Lokyar

Idk about you, but if I were a terrorist, I wouldn't hand out classified information openly saying "I got this from my terrorist friends and their spies in the government", nor would I be even remotely interested in the longevity of a government willing to lie about such a crucial fact. If the government does not serve the people, it must be made to. As for the bombing and the murder of innocents, I wonder how many innocents were on Esquo during the bombing? If those kids Gress was involved with were innocent? Unlike the KC government, the Jaslip "terrorists" worked hard to minimise innocent casualties. Multiple surveillance devices, failsafes, abort points.

AlphaAllNight Gaming

So violence justifies more violence? So whenever any slight comes against anyone or any nation, we must not try to peacefully resolve the situation, throw caution to the wind about even more innocent lives being lost, and duke it out with fisticuffs? The point I’m making is that there are INFINITELY more ways to resolve an issue, be it a corrupt government, or another issue entirely, than just saying ‘fuck it’ and blowing up everyone who gets in your way.

TheDudeAbides

Ok so I just begab the chapter but I have to ask for clarity. "Taking leisurely walks on the orbital rings." You don't mean planetary rings like Saturn, right? And... Did Gress just teach Taylor that the Krev do Jazz hands?

Space Paladin

No, orbital rings are the rotating structures that support cities in orbit on Avor. It’s, in very reductive terms, a version of a space elevator that actually might work, by using rotational forces. This was the video I watched that made me want to include orbital rings, if you are interested in the nitty gritty; I think it’s pretty cool! https://youtu.be/LMbI6sk-62E?si=1Ndz-eyt63YW2VKF

Conure King!

It’s not good for the longevity of a sovereign nation, that’s why they did it

EliasArt2Life

Looks like I was right; Hathaway AND Radai survived. Hathaway seems to have become the figure for everyone (in and out of universe) to throw their hate towards. Radai is too important to the plot to die yet, which I’m VERY happy about! Out of all the characters introduced on the Krev Consortium side, Radai has solidified himself as my favorite. Here’s praying that he makes it to the end. Im also praying that Taylor and Gress going to the Trombil home world is just an excuse to show off yet another Consortium world and culture, and is not a narrative reason to stick Taylor and Gress in the middle of what I suspect to be a Listener heavy world. I suspected that the Listeners might have had a hand in allowing (if not directly influencing) the terrorist attack on the Consortium, but with Radai’s suspicion that they’ve been trying to assassinate him, I’m getting even more suspicious. I doubt that they didn’t know of his stand in, but maybe they plan to frame him for this, to kill AND discredit him, simultaneously inflicting the worst injury they can inflict to a Resket; destroying his honor beyond repair.

Neu5Ac

Hooray, SFIA! It should be mentioned he also brings up that traditional orbital elevators are also possible, they'll just likely rely on active support technology to remain upright. It should also be mentioned that antigravity tech would also make the construction of space elevators relatively straightforward, given that it exists in your setting.

richfiles

TBF, most 5 year olds ARE little, and they ARE shits! Pfft!

Felin

Foreshadowing is a literary device-

Felin

Oh Taylor is going to be in for a ride when that ship will be captured. Now the real question is this will be made even spicier by not having humans in the boarding party - making him think feds got him

Neu5Ac

Having that attitude towards the child of your significant other is not conducive to a good relationship, and is suggestive of a poor moral character (although we already knew this about Trench).

Rusty Deviant

Dude like 95% of all five year olds I’ve ever had to be around can best be described as “little shits” and it’s definitely a descriptor I apply to my six year old. It’s absolutely fine to describe a kid that way as long as you aren’t being hostile to them or calling them that to their face

Neu5Ac

Well, 95% of the 5 year olds I've been around were perfectly fine so long as you treat them decently, and I worked for a daycare for several years, so it's a pretty solid sample size. Have you considered that perhaps there's some other common trend besides age for why all the 5 year olds around you seem so awful?

John

I hate having to wait for this to happen.

Some Lvm

Well, Radai is now my absolute favorite! Reading the first paragraph with the scenic descriptions of nature, I though for a moment Taylor had a total change of personality and I blinked and missed it. But than I read him thinking of his partner's 6 year old as "little shit" for no reason and I know it is still the OG Taylor. Towards the end of the chapter he does seem a lot more aware of thers, like he got a perception buff, figuring out Cherise' and Quana's involvement in the bombing. And, just before finishing this chapter, I was thinking it should be Taylor and Gress who get captured by the Sapient Coalition, prompting the UN to glass Tellus. Now it looks like I just might get my wish!

DemonVee

What circumstance would lead them to glassing Tellus?

Some Lvm

Finding out how much Ark 3 humans are annoying pricks :P