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Oren's Forge PG 351 (Patreon)

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2025-07-28 21:00:08
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2026-09
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Ireland

Third panel is absolutely amazing and beautiful

Gabe Bold

Panel 3 is just, amazingly executed!

Pencil Pavlova

Ooo, I spy one blue eye in the first panel I wonder if that's Hap's brother who died...

LukeOnTheBrightSide

Holy hell, what an incredible page. Is this a new record for most characters on page? And with action, no less! Everything about this is amazing, I’m sure we all appreciate (and mad respect) how much work must have gone into this.

UrsusArctos

I love this world-building. Excellent writing, Teagan, and excellent art as well.

Microgrampup

They’re going to have to get used to this and realize that this is their new sane world. They’re not the only ones who are willing to evolve for near unquestioned control over resources.

Julian Seguin

What scares me the most is that if Hap wins Ramble over, he and Swift will doubtless meet again on different sides of the coming storm.

Remony Ravine

These panels are so well detailed!

Kay

Love that bison in the third panel, looking at the tooth in its chest, like 'Well damn, ain't this a shame.'

Gale Tazzin

"I became the moon because I figured out how to deal with sharp animals" goes so incredibly hard

Luckyclaw

It's like watching Ramble slowly get indoctrinated into a cult!

Luckyclaw

"It was only later that we could drive them off for good" Soooo invasion and displacement. You threw them out of their own home. RIP Pronghorns 🙏

Krzysztof K

Hap's idea was probably to kill anyone the herd encounters and who doesn't submit to Zenith's will. If that's the case, this will likely be the last volume of the novel, as the small animals in the Hollow are no match for the wolves and bison or many favorite characters will die, or the Hollow will disband. Perhaps the story will follow one of the main characters, or we'll have a completely new comic.

Chipster

So that’s also why they can’t take more pups right now. The situation with the mothers is already precarious and adding even more mouths who can’t contribute right now would make it worse. More pups right now would make the wolves seem even less worth keeping around

Krzysztof K

The old wolves, on the other hand, are acceptable. So I'm curious how the wolves plan to rebuild their population when so many wolves have died and they're not very successful at recruiting new ones, as they kill most of the wild wolves (as was the case with Scree's pack). I think viewing the pups as a problem and a leech doesn't make Hap a very good leader, unless he's not one.

treefiddy

That statement feels more like a sarcastic jab about how the bison view the pups as useless than an actual feeling she has towards them. Her expressions contradict her statements both times she's given negative remarks.

Felidae

ooh war also, any chance we can get hi-res digital copy/scans of these pages? They look so good an stunning on paper but Patreon makes them potato. The Kickstarter pdfs are pretty nice but would it be possible to have version that matches the resolution/fidelity of the printed pages? Thanks

Krzysztof K

I don't know. On the previous page she said that puppies are a problem.

Grey

What a page! Well done. It's interesting to me that despite the decimation of the wolves, the herd insisted on pushing forward regardless, and then waffled on if they should even keep the remaining wolves around (especially the pups, oof!) after they fought and died for the herd. With how nervous Singer and Pivot acted around the bison hearing Ramble's protests, it certainly seems like they aren't on equal footing at all in this society.

RandomDragon2.0

I decided to look back at the page and noticed the line "In the end, most our hunters were dead" Might that mean to say "most of our hunters were dead"?

Covie

If only your etiquette was as sharp as your grammar.

LukeOnTheBrightSide

It's not *technically* grammatically correct, but "most our" shows up somewhat frequently in spoken language. I wonder if it's just a bit awkward to have the repeated "o" vowel that causes it to be skipped. Best known example is the song Gangsta's Paradise: "Keep spending most our lives living in a gangsta's paradise." So, it's not that unusual or unheard of to shorten to "most our." IMO, people don't always speak with correct grammar, so it can sometimes be weird to always use it. Someone once told Winston Churchill that he ended a sentence with a preposition, and he replied "This is the type of arrant pedantry up with which i will not put." He was making fun of the guy because *technically* he shouldn't say "That's the sort of thing I won't put up with." But if you had a character out of the blue say, "That's the sort of insolence up with which I will not put," it's grammatically correct but feels wildly out of place.