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(Just a heads up, since there are five Monday's this month, I will be taking one off from posting to catch up on some clerical stuff.)

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Dhaka Yeena

Oh no…I was afraid of this…

karlobears

There it is, the regret.

Tru7h

This deal just keeps getting worse all the time

Microgrampup

I did not expect this. I expected them to not want Gristle, but the pups??? They’re future hunters! I don’t think Seral’s seriously considering chasing Swift off, I think he’s just saying that to appear like he’s somewhat agreeing to Singer’s conditions so then a fight doesn’t start.

Arcticfox

Vader would be proud.

Pantera

Oh dear. :( I can see only bad and very bad scenarious happening from now, e.g. Swift trying to get away with the pups to the forest, Red and possibly Ramble getting killed in the process. Swift's pack is going to split I think, something has to push her toward the forest to encounter Oren, Rask and the rest. These different perspectives made an interesting story even better. I like also that Seral is not a completely bad guy here, sure, excluding Red was cruel, but these are wolves, it's clear that their custom was to abandon/leave for dead these who are no longer fit to hunt (and they are not elders), but tried to include in the deal both Gristle and the pups.

Microgrampup

The worst part is that Swift has already provoked the Hollow. She might be back in the woods wprovoking them further while Seral is here.

Felidae

Ooh, wolf cults? Or very primitive fortune-telling?

Akela74

I don't like this guy. Fox face. So what he will kill Swift and the pups? That's stupid.

Tori Sol

Shiiiiit! I didn't think the pups would be in any danger! This changes everything! There's no way Gristle would agree to sacrificing the pups! The fact that Seral was even willing to run Swift and the pups off is just trash!

Pantera

Of course her presence will provoke the Hollow. I wonder if there is any possibility of seeing a scene with the wolf pups and the hare/rabbit offspring meeting in the Hollow. But what might be another possibility is Swift losing her little ones just like Hemlock did, albeit in different circumstances. :/

Rheanna

Well, the thing is… wolf pups die all the time from natural causes in the real world. I’m not sure that Gristle won’t consider the pups an “acceptable” loss for that reason. If he makes a deal to save Seral, Swift, Ramble, and the other one whose name I can’t remember at the moment, but it’s at the expense of Red and the pups… that’s still majority rules, especially since it seems like he considers Red to be taking up space when he should have died “naturally”, anyway.

Reseen Dalls

Maybe take Swift by force to oblige her to join (like some human tribes used to do) and leave to pups to starve alone...

Reseen Dalls

That black wolf is suddenly far more eager to make deals... that jackal face meanwhile seems to be having the time of his life with that power trip.

Akela74

Damn it that's cruel

Chris Jones

I really hope the pups are gonna join the forge. It's a long shot, but that would be so cool. Some zuko type shit.

Tori Sol

But there's no way Swift would abandon the pups. Seral was talking about running her off with the pups. At this point, it would just be Gristle, Seral, Ramble, and that one other wolf whose name I forget. I can't see Gristle wanting to sacrifice that many young wolves for his own survival.

Tori Sol

Same! I want to see Rask and Egg acting as their uncle and aunty!!!

Torakhan

I get the feeling it's all a trap regardless...