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New page out next Monday!

[Click Here to Start Volume Two: Incursion from the beginning!]

Small note about the layout:

I made a deliberate decision to ‘jump the line’ here from the previous page/last panel— I wanted to embody the idea of a snap cut to Swift whipping her head to look at Scree. It also serves to reframe the scene, pivoting from “okay, we dealt with one problem, now I deal with you.” (If anyone was wondering why I did that.)

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Dogs of War

I think you did well with the paneling! A good example of knowing the rule enough to break it. It fits the scene! Ps- dying at the "wheeze"

Dhaka Yeena

Better choose to it words carefully scree

Amethysmus

Nailed it! They needed to have this scene and glad it happened right away!

Kairo

It's a bit weird to me that Swift's muzzle is clean immediately after

Lord ryven

Wolf muzzles are self cleaning. My girl caught and obliterated a pretty big fat ground hog, and in the time it took me to go grab a trash bag, she cleaned her face.

Lord ryven

On one hand, I know where swift is coming from. But also, scree just saved her life. Scree earned a stay of execution at the very least. Scree may have come to betray Swift and her pack. But when it came to decision time, she chose loyalty to swift and her pups.

Lord ryven

i swear i responded to this. wolf muzzles are self cleaning. couple of licks and they are spotless.

StargazingBerry

I reread this page and now I'm just noticing they're having this conversation overtop of Serals dying self LOL

Kairo

Wow. Her asking if Scree wants to die while her muzzle is covered in blood from killing another wolf, really changes the tone of the page.

Evie

It is not Seral under them.i believe his name is Keen.

Lord ryven

Adding blood to her face, makes her look much more intimidating. lol

RandomDragon2.0

hello, I recently joined your patreon and noticed this page is missing from the collection for volume two. I looked through the collections when I first joined and today decided to poke around and see what other goodies I could find elsewhere and now I'm here

teagangavet

Ah, thank you for letting me know! Fixed it! :]