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Dhaka Yeena

Back into the fire she goes, but what will she find???

Grey

This was a great scene.

Microgrampup

Going to investigate the forest like you said to your father for real this time?

Lord ryven

Red dead with hemlock holding the spear! The scalps of two pups hanging from her waist!!

Dhaka Yeena

Ya know the fact we haven’t seen Hemlock yet is very disturbing. I wouldn’t be surprised if we do end up seeing them standing over reds corpse. Out of everyone I feel like he’s definitely not gonna last much longer.

Tru7h

This feels rash, can she really afford to squander any support right now?

Evie

Where is Keen's body? You think he would be lying not too far from them.

Fate

Swift stay away from the forest >: all that smoke is pretty dangerous to breath in

Latias

Remember what the marten said~

Microgrampup

I hope Singer doesn’t run into Red if he’s going to re-group with Seral.

Microgrampup

I think Hemlock learned her lesson from Yarrow as well as has the common sense to not run out into the open grass all just to attack a wolf that looks like it’s near death, all while there’s more able bodied wolves running around in the woods looking for her and Oren’s group for all she knows.

Dhaka Yeena

True but do you think she’d turn down the opportunity to take out defenseless pups?

Microgrampup

Don’t know, so far the author has only revealed that she has attacked and killed adult animals that are of hunting age.

Kairo

This might be just me, but I think it would have been a neat touch to see a raven landing in the grass behind the scree in the first panel and maybe two in the last panel....you know...for Keen.

Gale Tazzin

Grown-up carnivores took out Hemlock's defenseless kits... so I can see it going either way. Perhaps seeing Swift try to defend her entire family despite an injured shoulder would make Hemlock recall how she also tried to protect her family when it seemed futile. But also remember how she spoke about Rask to Oren: "even if the marten is a meek, tamed hunter today, what happens when the bugs die off and the lake freezes over?" (pg. 129) Could easily view the pups the same way, they're defenseless now, but they won't be in a year, and they'll be hungry then too

Gale Tazzin

They could still be flying over! It's been a month for us reading it but I'm guessing the entire sequence has taken less than 5 minutes since the first blood

Reseen Dalls

Well, she DID leave for the sake of her pups AND mate, and was ready to die for them. So logically saving her life won't sway her that much on this specific point.

Sarah

Poor Scree’s in a tough position now. She turned on the big pack to save Swift but now Swift won’t take her either. She’ll likely struggle to convince Seral to leave his potential place in the new pack too, so she’s essentially packless now. Her ideals have scuppered her in both directions. She was too loyal and brave to let Singer and Keen kill Swift, but too ableist to have a place by Swift’s side after.

Lord ryven

Should have killed Singer.. then she could tell any story she wants.

Krzysztof K

Hi Teagan. I was looking through the comic to remember the stories and I just noticed it now. Swift has blood on his chin on page 298. On page 299, in the first panel, she also has blood on her chin, but in the remaining panels and pages there is no blood on her chin. Did Swift lick it off? (cleaned)

Teagan Gavet

Ah yeah, looking at it with fresh eyes, it is a little jarring without the blood. I'll add it in when I have a sec!