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Dhaka Yeena

Dang near had a heart attack in those first few panels If I could just add to this, I feel like Seral using a rock instead of his own teeth means so much. He’s willing to do it but he’s not willing to get dirty

JD

If he dares hurt/kill those innocent pups, I will tear apart his body and put them in different locations

Maximus Coyotox

“Heeeeey pups! I- um… just wanted to show you this cool rock I found!” said Seral, unconvincingly. Methinks this is where hemlock enters the picture… wonder how she’ll react to the situation at hand.

Aisha

Arg! Heart-strings pulled! That poor pup looking up at the dude that was supposed to protect him calling him uncle while the bastard contemplates bashing him with a rock. I hope it is hemlock he spotted and she gives him the pointy end!

Gale Tazzin

oh Hemlock is going to kill him

Tyler Torres

I was looking to see if anyone would mention that. My first thought was 'he doesn't even have the stones to use his teeth'. Though maybe he thought it would be quicker?

Dhaka Yeena

Ya it might be quicker but still the stone being used had more meaning

Gale Tazzin

especially after Scree said she "wasn't afraid to get her muzzle dirty" and followed through on it... he hasn't made decisions for himself, just followed what others told him (like eating the meat Singer gave him without suspecting it might be poisoned). Red totally called his number when he said Seral was "just a stick in someone else's river"

Corvin

SonofaBiznatch, you got my heart in my throat, Teagan! Come-on Hazel, kick that dogs tail to the moon!

Microgrampup

The ears are fully intact, it may be Hemlock. Wonder if she saw that he was about to attempt to kill the pups and is now confused.

Microgrampup

I don’t think there’s turning back now Seral, you and Gristle shouldn’t have betrayed Swift so quickly all while she went scouting for safer alternatives.

Flann Moriath

Wow, I can tell this is going to be another incredible, exciting scene!

XanderK31

Yeah, nope, he needs to die.

Marcwolf

If it is Hemlock.. Will she see some innocent pups. or young preditors who need to be killed before they grow up and kill. Her thinking is not that reasoned considering what she did to Egg. She WOULD have killed Egg!!!!

Marcwolf

Stone is less messy - esp if he does not want to TASTE their blood..

Dhaka Yeena

Yup he doesn’t want to taste the blood of his kin

Fate

If this really is Hemlock as some comments mentioned I wonder what is going through her mind when she sees the “predator” killing his own pack pups , I am certain it improve her opinion on them

Moki

he could have just as easily snapped their necks with his hands, quick and painless. but no, he's fully a coward through and through and won't accept their death by his hands or his teeth. It was the rock that killed them, not me, he would reason. and for that I hope he dies slowly lol

Liyoht

It had seemed Hemlocks last enounter with a pred...a much smaller pred was nearly the end of her...had said pred not been distracted. Im unsure how she would do against a wolf not taken by surprise?

Gale Tazzin

If the rabbit really is Hemlock, he could use the rock to parry her spear, and then have a much more convincing lie about him actually heeding Swift's suspicion of the metal spearhead from earlier

Evie

The cheek floof and full ears makes me suspect Hemlock. If that is the case, I think she will go after Seral for trying to kill the pups. They may remind her of her little ones in some way.

BritishRabbit

Honestly odds are still pretty good, a Marten wrote her off completely as a threat, who's to say the Wolf won't as well and focus on his targets?

Amethysmus

I don't think, if this is Hemlock, she will kill Seral for trying to kill the cubs. First and foremost, she will try to kill him for being the bigger threat on scene.

Crystal

I am kinda getting mother bird vibes from Hemlock. As in, like a momma bird showing itself and acting helpless to draw the attention from the predator.