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I used the 'fusion' keyword a lot in this work.

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TFWorld

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Dr. Bennet

I find it funny that as soon as I leave my house for a few hours, you upload a new work, I do believe it’s happened almost every time 😂. Ah well, at least I have something to look forward to when I get home.

Dr. Bennet

After reading this, I must say that there is a bright future ahead for TFWorld Comics. The quality is improving with every new work, and this one is no exception. The character designs are getting better and the visual quality is also improving. I felt that the story in this work was a little short and unusual, but it was still fun and interesting. I even think there is potential for a sequel. The characters were well designed in this work, and fitted the story well. I really liked the fusion effects when the objects fused with the character, and when the two girls fused too, although I think that they should have fused all the way, instead of the villain simply vanishing at the end of the process. The more normal transformation scene at the end is well made too. Something I have noticed in the works is the the English sentences are a little imperfect, and worded a little unusually. It's still understandable, but I admit that it is a little distracting at times. I'm sure this will improve in time, just like everything else, but I felt it was important to mention. Thank you for another cool work TFWorld, I look forward to the next ones. Have a great day too!

TFWorld

I don't usually know, but in this painting, there's a setting that the mannequin is the main character, so he's not good at human speech.

Dr. Bennet

That makes sense, it’s a good design choice. What I was referring were all your English works in general. The grammar and certain words resemble old fashioned English, instead of modern English. Do you speak English or do you simply translate your dialogue using the internet? Using the internet to translate something does translate sentences, but they aren’t always perfect, and sometimes give unusual results. I assumed that this was the reason for the old English.