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messages and missed calls incoming..!!

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Kris Grimsley

I can only imagine how many missed calls there are

Orion Rhine

Olivia is a very nice person in her own prickly way. Hopefully Pia isn't getting any terrible news, her birthday was bad enough.

Yajoovya

Yeah, her family are probably going to be worried after she missed that call with them.

Yajoovya

By the way, the speech in the second panel is a bit weird. I don't think the English translation quite fits. With French, the word 'saute' has 2 syllables, I'm guessing: 'sau' and 'te'. So it makes sense for someone to say 'sau', then pause, and then say 'te', if they're surprised or confused, like Pia is here. However, I don't think it really makes sense to split the English word 'jumped' into 'jum' and 'ped'. The word 'jumped' only has 1 syllable (1 and a half if you're feeling generous...) and it just doesn't SOUND right to try and split this one-syllable word into two syllables. I'm pretty certain that NO English speaker would ever say 'jum', then pause, and then say 'ped', no matter how surprised or confused they were. It just wouldn't happen. What I think WOULD work is if Pia said 'j-jumped?' or 'j...jumped?' Having something like that in her speech bubble would look a lot more natural. I understand that it might be hard to fit that into the speech bubble that's here right now, but it would still look more natural. Maybe the speech bubble could be replaced, in this instance, with one that had enough room for the new text?

gogetaroomie

Yeah, I started writing "j-jumped" and the bubbles didn't match so I did the jum- ped instead. But you're right, it doesn't sound right.

MakeKong

I bet the gang will appear at the front door in seconds

Pete White

Perhaps, in time once things calm down, her friends will have a belated birthday party for her

Pete White

I believe the numbering is a bit off. This is strip 252 but these comments and the previous are 251.