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Some kind of...... peaceful conversation happening? Between Pia and the mysterious rude lady?

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Tom Ivar Helbekkmo

In the last text bubble: she could say "the first time", or "in the first place", or "at first", or even just "before", but "in the first times" doesn't parse.

Yajoovya

The more they interact, and the more they understand about each other, the more they can get done, and do better. That's usually how things go, isn't it? :)

Tenebrous Trahern

This hits home. I wasn't good at looking after the pets after my mum died. They were my last living connections to her, until one cat (the runt) died of natural causes, the dog died after too much knockout juice from the vet shut down her kidneys, and the other cat became the neighbour's cat because at that point, I just wasn't taking care of him anymore. 25 years later, I *could* take a new pet - a neighbour has offered more than once - but then I'd eventually lose them too, even if I did everything right.

gogetaroomie

It's "I didn't take him in" and then "the first times", if that makes sense. Not "in the first times". But if it sounds too confusing I can change things around!

Arianod

Yes. Let the soot goblin stay :3

Tom Ivar Helbekkmo

Heh - I never even thought of parsing it that way. :) Yeah, I think I would choose to rephrase slightly, because "take him" and "take him in" are both expressions that could be used about adopting a stray. Maybe just simplify "the first times" to "before"?