Get through girls faster, resisting advances for ~2 chapters is too much19
More positions during sex scenes6
More dialogue between the girls1
Repetitive scenes, mix it up more3
More threesomes, foursomes, fivesomes14
Make Josh more personable9
Let girls retain their bratty attitudes36
Convert them to brainwashed bimbos completely21
No changes5
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Always need to get better. Always need to improve. I've listed a few issues I tend to keep in the back of my mind about my own stories. Which ones do you agree with?
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