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HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR

Honestly, could've done without Fleur in this one. She's incredibly overrated as a character, and she always seems to get added into harem stories, so this one probably would've been fine without her added in. Too late now I guess. I was hoping to see either more OCs joining in, or different, less used characters. And now we get to deal with a very predictable Daphne/Fleur fight in the aftermath ruining the rest of the plot.

The Black Earl

Patreon flags chapters for having adult content, the chapter gets taken down, I make edits, and the chapter may or may not be reinstated back again. Posting attachments solves the issues altogether.

TheWateringWizard

First smut with Fleur was top notch! Also funny how Daphne’s humiliation plan backfired. Now let’s see how they both deal with the situation hehehe… However I have one slight critique: the argument between Fleur and Daphne at the end was kinda repetitive. The same back and forth between both happened 2/3 times

HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR

We'll both have to agree to to disagree on this point friend. Harry has Daphne and Regina basically confirmed in this one so far. And I'd be happy with a few more added in for the "official" pairing; Katie Bell being one of them. But Fleur? I've read a couple thousand HP fanfic stories by this point over the years, and Fleur is one of those characters that if I don't like her right away in a story, then I'll start cheering to fire her out of a cannon and into the void to never be seen again. And unfortunately, this story is one of them. A good fit for a more "intelligent, charismatic, ruthless & magically powerful Harry"? Any well written female character will fit that bill. Fleur tends to get used often cause she's a ready built "hot and sexy" older female character for authors to use. I just find her extraneously useless in this story and don't want her added in. She can fuck right off in this story and it won't lose nothing because of that, trust me. No, TheBlackEarl is doing a fantastic job with Regina and Daphne so far, and I don't want their characters wrecked by forcing Fleur into the damn pairing. Find less used female characters or make new OCs to use. That's a much better use of skill.