Drop-Out, page 98 (Patreon)
Published:
2017-05-18 04:00:03
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2026-06
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earlier iterations of this scene did not include another driver; sugar drifted all the way to the edge of the other side of the road and the grip from the dirt caused her to spin out.
i wanted to make the setting seem a little more believable (ie. less barren) and tried to see if adding a third party led to any ideas, ended up liking the dialog with him in better and that was the finalized version.
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