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Hi there! Here's the next part, guys. And you should know that I had in mind to post the previous part and this one as one piece, but it's turned out that I need a lot more pages to describe everything as I want. It's good I decided to divide it. So that's how the story gets longer than expected, the plans in my head turns out to be different from what's actually comes out. But still I'm satisfied with the result, and hope you guys too. Have a good day😊

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Hibiki88

I really like where this is all going.

Ron

Wow! Love this story, and the illustrations are wonderful. Keep up the great work, LilTkit. Just one small question. On the last illustration when Lily lays down on the sofa, shouldn't one breast be larger than the other, since only one breast form fell off? Or it could be just a lack of perception on my part.

Nino Heđi

Oh wow! Things are getting more complicated and we're not getting closer to reason why adam was targeted in the first place. One comes to my mind: Revenge and here's why... posibly: Since he is supposed to be ashley according to her "aunt's" plan it stands to reason that something happened to real niece posibbly death by car accident, also ashley's boyfriend's ex died so that's another clue. I honestly hope that Lilly amd Ashley will figure out one another who they really are,by then though it will be to late to go back. They could stay on island as sisters. Gabrielle knows,but will she tell it to Lilly? Gabrielle was hipnotised just enough so she can't tell anyone who she really was. I hope Ashley and Lilly will be reunited as sisters within next few chapters. One thing is for certain, if there is happy ending there then only way to do it is to expose "aunty" and her vengeance plot and then leave. Do as you wish with the story but please don't destroy Gabrielle's, Lilly's and Ashley's true self completely with hypnosis.

Mach

I really adore Gabriella, was so happy to see this chapter focus so much on her and her changes! I love the subtlety behind her growth, from the eye shadow to the darkening color of her lips. The use of French in her language and mannerisms when she is completely taken by hypnosis, and her hair! Incredible ways to call attention to her beauty and her growth. It was nice to see her show a bit of agency as well - excited to see what’s to come! I’m a bit of a romantic at heart so these developments give me a bit of a hope that these girls will break free from the vengeful lady and learn to embrace their new beauty on their own terms… but regardless, very excited to see Gabriella’s improvements!

Cerial442

I also want to second being a fan of Gabriella. I love how she found out that Adam had been changed into a girl, and didn’t register that the same thing happened to her. Can’t wait until the next part

Actrus

Loving that story and characters so much 💯 My only question is, I feel Lily wasn't brainwashed (not like his brother at least) so the fact he call himself Lily in his tought is simply to commit to the mascarade ? I hope so then he will still have a hope to save his "sister" 🙂

Lebruh-

How many more part of vacation should we expect?? Loving where this is heading for its conclusion!

BrightHeart

I imagine she's about to get a hypno refresher in that office.

Daze_Dreams

This is really good! Can't wait for more maid stuff, this and like father like daughter are the best

Otl

you are the goat really love this

Natalie3991

loving that the detective has been compromised, hehe. loving how this story is playing out!

Bill Johnson

Really hope we get to see Gabriella be “submissive” for a new master. :)

Bartoon

Love the way you animated the hypnosis. It felt so real!

Mike R Pen

Now they will both fall into her trap. At least i hope so!

EmberSin6

Love how this is going!!

Milo Bender

Easily one of the best TG stories I have read. Absolutely amazing characters and art!