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Angela has her own plans but so does Nick. Do you think Angela was expecting any of this?

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A R HuffnPuffn

Ooh! Any chance of a single mother & daughter vs single mother & daughter fight?

abadon

I didn't see this twist coming, or at least not like this. I liked Angela's return to her loose hair. I liked the idea of her making her move and fulfilling that her only rule was to work together with Nick and finding herself with the bad luck of winning a fight and a job and losing what she wanted so suddenly when Nick leaves (maybe it could also be a story outside of work). I thought it was good, the thing with Nick and his stopping her, maybe some confusion there could have been played on him, to leave doubt that he didn't fantasize about her before so it would generate the bond without forcing the plot. But the ring thing maybe was too much, I don't know, we'll see. Maybe I would suggest that the good and bad in this story are not so clear.

Grudgejr

Angela has good in her, but she acts to get what she wants, and sometimes that act doesn't look like a good-guy act. For her, she just created an opening. Who knows, maybe this would cause a big rift with Bebe, and she has another shot? We'll see.

abadon

I agree, Angela isn't bad for wanting something and pursuing it or fighting for it. Today she won and today she lost, but she's ready to try her move. There's the subtlety of going after something or someone justified in her mind without falling into the bad girl who wants the other's (without Nick hesitating; her role as Angela is clear). Nor is Bebe the typical good girl; in fact, because of her actions in attacking Angela, she ended up on the streets and is now trying to rebuild her life with Nick. The scenarios of their obvious reunion give two results, but the important thing is what they win or lose there. These are just ideas or suggestions; we're here applauding your work.

Catfight Gentleman

Oh no....I wanted to Angela to get Nick to embrace his inner astronomer CEO...So who's in currently in the picture for Nick...btw catfights over a man are my absolute favorites

Grudgejr

ROFL! Those memes are everywhere. I should do one too!