New Chapters (Patreon)

Hi all! Checking touching base. I've now released a few chapters with my new style of writing, and wanted to know how you've been finding them.

The main things I've improved on are ensuring no POV jumping, minimal plot holes, and fluid, descriptive writing.

At the same time, writing isn't good unless it is fun and easy to read, so let me know if that's not the case!