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MC continues on his quest to become a full member of the Rogues. Two major events move him closer to his goal. Several side events reveal answers to long standing mysteries.

I wish I could have got it out sooner, but I hope you enjoy it. I have gone through game multiple times to debug the script. Because of the option to turn down the side girls, it creates a lot of places where a girl should/should not be seen or mentioned. Hopefully, I've squashed all of them. Let me know if you find any. As with typos and grammar, I've probably missed something.

I'll be running some preference polls before starting on 1.0.0. Part 2

I've attached a clean save for the beginning of 1.0.0 (All girls in play)

1.0.0 Part 1 Episode Stats,

1,274 still images

80 Animations/loops (3,000+ animation slides)

13,000 lines of code and text

2 Major story events

16 side events

More music and sound effects.

Take care, OBD

***1,0,0 script fix NOT REQUIRED***

https://mega.nz/file/A7QAwLLb#u5Z3oVVocgVNlp0SWZC0C7xcax4LwV9iJooXx0fbD9I 

Comments

Sancho

Excellent, congratulations on the release!!!

Dimitri57

Sorry it took so long, but I hope you will see that I packed a lot of content in it.

Sancho

Don't worry about it, it gets done when it gets done. You haven't disappointed yet regarding quality or quantity of content and I don't expect you to do so this time either.

meiwow

Hell yeah baby. I just gotta get home from work now.

Dimitri57

I hope you enjoy it. It ended up being slightly bigger than 0.9.0 Hopefully you'll feel the content was worth the long wait. Take care my friend.

Tbo

Ok I found two things sofar m8 one is a sentence with Rin that just sonds a little strange the MC talking or asking for the HJ comment. and another is when Jessy, Nikki and Reba talk near the hottub Jessy's thoughts refers to MC as striker and not by the name the player selected. If I find more do you want me to post here rather than F95Zone? apart from that sofar so dam good

Dimitri57

Thanks for the catches. I'll check it out. Glad you are enjoying it.

Dimitri57

In the Rin conversation, are you talking about the word "yujo"? That isn't a mistake. That is a Japanese word for a cheap prostitute.

Tbo

Another one m8 dont know about in the Katy Anal scene because as you know thats not my thing but the after scene with MC and katy in bed you have two saids you only need one, I think you meant it as this "I meant it when I said you are mine" or maybe you meant it as "I meant what I said when I said you are mine"? but you got "I meant it when said I said you are mine" and I'm still loveing the update.

Runner17

Nailed this one OBD. Best episode to date. The slow motion scene, best you've done. A few hiccups but the story dominated any problems. Like always well worth the wait.

Tbo

Nope that makes perfect sence but before that you have Rin say "I trust you with my life" but the MC then say's "Are to use your hand again to give me pleasure" and Rin says "This time I will try to please you with my mouth." the "Are to use your hand again to give me pleasure" this is the line that dont seem right to me its like a word or two is missing if you get what i mean. now as an example to try and let you know what I mean if it was me saying it then it would read "you gonna use your hand again to give me pleasure" but I'm english not american not sure what you would say instead.

Dimitri57

I'll check it out. I tweak the dialog almost every time I run through it. Sometimes I leave words out.

Dimitri57

It should have read, "Are you going to use your hand again to give me pleasure?"

Tbo

I don't want you to think or for me to come across as a Grammer Nazi because I'm no expert at Grammer or spelling. And I miss words and bouble words up often when I type. It useually takes me five or six read throughs and I still get shit wrong. and I have noticed the fact you often type I suspect like me the way you talk. And theres nothing wrong with localism in my book. I'm only really looking for the things that seem to mess with the flow of chat. And hopeing you don't mind me pointing it out.

Dimitri57

Katy made the statement during sex "I really feel like I'm yours now." mc replied "You are." So mc was reaffirming what he had said earlier. I may wordsmith a bit to make it read better."

Dimitri57

You don't come across that way at all. I need all the help I can get! :) I don't get offended. I write in the style of a movie script or a play rather than classical literature.

Tbo

Ok dont hate me Rai in the office "I'm going to be big a good big sis and not let that bitch or anyone else spoil Sarah's wedding" one too many big's?. I'm goning to be a good big sis and not ect ect. same as when I read the "I meant it when said I said you are mine" nothing else wrong with it but the two said's. I don't know if you are anything like me when I read it has to flow but when you get "I meant it when said I said you are mine" or "I'm going to be big a good big sis and not let that bitch or anyone else spoil Sarah's wedding" my mind slams on the brakes and I have to re read it to make it make sense. and flow once again so I end up reading it like this ""I meant it when I said you are mine" and "I'm going to be a good big sis and not let that bitch or anyone else spoil Sarah's wedding".

Dimitri57

LOL! I need a new grammar checking program! Thanks. That is jarring to read.

Tbo

Office scene a little later post coital either Rai and MC swapped jobs or Rai's got the wrong line "I need to get back to the DJ booth and que up Reba's music" or if thats supossed to be "you need to get back to the DJ booth and que up Reba's music" in which case wordings wrong persons right?, but the fact her next comment is "thats better" leads me to think it's the swapped jobs bit. At the prison Officer sanchez "I'll have it put it inmate Robinson's cell" I think the you meant the secound "IT" to be an "IN" like so "I'll have it put in inmate Robinson's cell

Tbo

Ok possibly one more for you when MC walks Reba back to the hotel she has two thoughts and then seems to Just say "ones that lie to get what they want from you and then trow you away" ? seems a random thing to blert out all of a sudden. But I think you ment it as a Reba Thoughts which would kinda make more sense considering her two previous thoughts. so I'm wondering if maybe it's miss labled as Reba and not Raba's thoughts?

Tbo

Is it supossed to loops round just after the respect/disrespect choice to talking to stan "I don't want to get between him and his Ol'Lady" then back to just after the choice in Prison again then round and round it go's, Unless its just mine that do's that only if you pick disrepect Jaybird or that meant to happen and is gonna be in part 2?. only tried it to check for more issues since I finished to the save now part after reba comes clean btw excelent update.... hmm wait think I got another one I think you may need to check your flags. this time I choose respect Jaybird but turn down looking after Candi for him when I'm with Jaybird. then later I go to Della and Stans alone but before I leave after checking on stan I go to what I think should be just Della to say bye but Candi is there. And she's talking exactly the same she did when I agreed to look after her the last playthrough. she shouldn't be there if I'm not looking after her should she?

Dimitri57

Rewrote Reba should be thinking rather than saying. "Like the ones that lie to get what they want from you, then throw you away."

Dimitri57

I'll go through the possible paths again. Honestly, I spend the most time on the path that I think most will choose. It would have been easier for me to make turning Jay down an "end game" rather than spend days writing, coding and doing renders for a path that few would take. I may have the logic crossed up. That scene is messy because you can or cannot have Candi there and you may or may not reject Angel. There is no loop back to part 2 though. When you go back and play through, are you starting new game? If not, the persistent file in the save folder is going to retain past choices.

Tbo

Good point no I was playing from just before he gets his arm tat then through the update but I will start a new game as you suggest and see. But apart from the stuff I already mentioned I haven't found anything else worth a mention. quick question MC thinks Candi is shiny in her riding leathers is that like another word for hawt? because I would of said Hawt myself but if it is then thats cool coz I just learned a new word :).

Dimitri57

Yes. Biker/military/redneck/hillbilly slang

Tbo

Ok just did a full restart and Angel apears to be the trigger If you Pick respect but dont then agree to look after Candi. It now only results in Candi only apearing at Stan and Dela's if you turn down Angel. if you say yes to Angel then Candi dosen't apear on the not looking Candi prison choice. It works pefectly If you choose to look after Candi either with or with or without agreeing to Angel. However the loop is still present if you choose the Disrispect Jaybird choice and I agree some form of Bad end would make sense for disrespecting him after all you need his vote to stand a chance of your patch.

Tbo

I really tried not too but If I missed anything the players on F95Zone do pick up on just tell em its LWTbo fault for missing it in the first place ;) and again Excelent update m8.

Dimitri57

I do appreciate the help. It looks like I should have spent another day or two going through the script. I was pushing to the wee hours several nights also. I may have been tired and missed things.

Tbo

It's been said and proved many many times we rarely see all our own typo's no matter how hard we look if we did proofreading wouldn't be a thing ;).

Dimitri57

I am a case study for that statement! :)

Tbo

You made an almost faultless Update m8. Just off the top of my head I can think of a few games on F95zone that put less content out with less branching paths over the same time frame and make 5 times as many pathing faults and some of them are made by a team. and they don't even have the excuse of the issues being at the end of the update while being pressured by certain addicted to games agressive small redhead types on F95Zone either. P.S. please dont tell her I said that last bit

Runner17

Took me 5 minutes to figure out who Angle was :) (Angel)

Tbo

lol Like I told OBD its hard to notice your own Typo's... fixed is that better :P

Tbo

Love the way you added a mention of a future bad end for a disrespecting Jaybird and also the +1 respect point to looking after Candi to incourage that choice :), although honestly candy should be enough of an incentive I mean look at her why wouldn't you lol. but thats a smart move mate I almost missed the alterations as I was skimming through to the chats I had mentioned to see what you had altered. And If the Candi choice hadn't suddenly had the RED walkthrough text i would probably not of noticed the change lol. I did think of suggesting something like that but I ignored it as it didn't seem as importants and the path issue so thats a wicked catch by you m8 love it :)

Dimitri57

I'll render a few end game images and put them in part two.

Tbo

Now I just can't wait to see what your Fans in F95zone think of this update not that I would ever leak it but its kinda tempting just to see the reaction, but I can wait :) .I think they should love it and this is not me blowing smoke here I'll be bloody suprissed if any don't.

Tbo

thats a wicked idea :).

Dimitri57

I do as well. Especially the visceral reaction that some will have to Barbara's scene. :) Also, I'm curious about the reaction to the event with Candi. Some (Phat) have voiced a very strong aversion to interaction with someone else's love interest. In both cases, I feel I gave players the ability to follow their own moral compass.

Runner17

What kind of nut job would pass up Candi? Especially, with what she admitted.

Runner17

Needed more Maria, would be nice to see her on the back of a bike in leathers.

Dimitri57

She'll get her turn at some point. She definitely needs more screen time. It's almost impossible to get a bad render of her.

Runner17

One final thought on the ladies, Larissa needs some love. When voting, pick girls that haven't shown up recently. Its like being given an open checkbook, don't worry he won't get rid of the primary girls. Just gives us more to think about. If a poll ever shows up again.

Runner17

Tried to dump Angel, made me feel like an ass, thanks OBD :) Had to replay that scene!

Dimitri57

It will. I planned to have a scene with Larisa, but pushed it to part 2 because the update was lagging.

Dimitri57

You should have! :) The poor little waif just needs a caring man to guide her.

Runner17

Now that's what I'm taking about! Yea Jessie is cool but all my favorite ladies are ex and current Ol'ladies. Katy I figure she is trying to be like Jessie or competing against her? Looking for some young blood that's why Maria and Larisa come to mine.

Sancho

Excellent update OBD, enjoyed it a great deal

Scurvy Dog

Can't wait to play it!!! This is the game of my lifestyle!

Galaaz

Sorry it took a while for me to comment, I just got the episode this morning and almost made me late for work cause I had a hard time to stop once I started. Not gonna add on the grammar since it has already been mentioned. Once again a great release! I love everything about it! If only more devs would take the time and put in as much effort as you. I was about to restart from scratch but I think I'll hold off on that for next update to try other paths than the respectable one and give justice to your work. One thing I won't hold off anymore however is upgrade to the Patch holder tier as you more than deserve it. Keep up that excellent work OBD. -cheers

Galaaz

I forgot to mention, I can't wait to see what you have in store for that "storage room" in future updates. The potential is already making my mind race and imagine all the possibilities. It's already hard to wait for each update but patience is a virtue and will only make it that much better when it comes out.