The Experiment Ep 1 (Patreon)

I've been working on this for a while but I finally have enough of it ready to start sharing! It's a multi part story involving shrinking and growth.

Writing for VR is interesting. There's almost no need to visual descriptions and using the present tense "feels" best. I also try to avoid describing what the viewpoint character is thinking or feeling (other than physical sensations) to increase the viewer's immersion but sometimes I need to for the story.