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That's all the shrinking done! Lots of growth from here and the exit from the building is a long way away...

I'm much happier with the writing in this episode. I even managed to have the characters refer to the viewer without saying anything that would break the viewer's immersion, eg saying a body type, skin colour or gender that doesn't match the viewer's. Keeping that immersion while also having the viewer be an active participant is very tricky. Ideally, these stories would let you make choices like a visual novel and I'll be experimenting with that someday.


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