playtest #2 report (Patreon)

i played with my second friend today! we read quietly, and it still took 40 minutes to get through without any detours or anything, which surprised me. She said the intro is a bit lengthy and wordy, which i'll ask you guys for feedback on once we're doing the public playtest. she's going to be my main proofreader, so once we touch up the dialogue and i get the in progress area done, I'll schedule the stream here. Can't take too long anymore!!