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The attached image is from the taxonomical section of the Encyclopaedia Elyden and is a continuation of the recent series I started.

This one features a more fictional example to what I've posted so fer - the so-called bladder eel, which glides through the air in regions where the Firmament holds sway.

Please let me know what you think!

Thanks :)  

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Eric Scheid

Very cool. Pity they are mostly solitary, I'd like to imaging great flocks washing down a mountainside.

Eric Scheid

Proofreading: 1. "allowing them to up to 120°" 2. "rocky environs" vs "common in wetlands" 3. "ancoring" 4. mucus, or mucous? 5. "stubborn trainers" .. or "determined trainers" (vs stubborn eels)?

Nate Mangion

Thanks - I've updated the master document. 1 - added 'open' 2 - nothing wrong here - the second quote continues to say that they are also common in skylands - basically the floating mountains of pandora. 3 - updated to anchoring 4 - i looked this up before writing it and it seems as though they're interchangeable. 5 - changed to determined.

Eric Scheid

Seeing repeated explanations that 'mucus' is only ever the noun, and 'mucous' is only ever the adjective. It took me three readings before I clicked why what you wrote felt vaguely wrong to me. Could just be a regional thing (e.g. UK / US / CA / AU variations).